I came late, and I didn't catch up with the good years of prosperity and great gods before 2012. After listening to it a lot, I once thought that in 2012, there was a devastating and devastating wives in Keai Bar - so I would like to commemorate the unspeakable meteorite disaster that happened in Keai Bar in 2012.

Fortunately, although 2012 has left us, and the wives have disappeared into the vast sea of people in the Ke Ai circle for various reasons, they still left a lot of heirlooms in the boutique area.

Well, whether readers recognize it or not, people at least have a place in the boutique area.

The works after 2012 are not convinced and hold back.

Ah, I know that when I mention tweets, there will definitely be cute friends who repeatedly mention a few of the best products in the bar, such as "Game", "Brown-Haired Girl", "May Snow...... These works that everyone is familiar with, please don't repeatedly nominate and occupy the floor, these are not within the scope of the main promotion of the building this time.

I used to often see that there was no good Ke Aiwen in the past two years, I still don't believe it, and then I flipped through the homepage of the bar, and I felt that this was not wronged.

Could it be that the quality of our fandom is really declining like the quality of the manga?

Later, I found out that there were also people in the original analysis bar.,Although the amount is very small.,Can't be compared with the huge base of the same people.,But the quality is still gratifying.。 So,What I want to push here is a few high-quality homo articles that have appeared in the past three years in Ke Ai's analysis of the article.,To serve the readers.。

QQ Jun I recommend 12 articles here (11 articles in detail), which is equivalent to the workload of an official recommendation post, and it has bought a small amount of time for the bar to formulate reform policies.

1. Untitled

Original name: "I heard that I will be scolded if I can't afford to post a title"

Short. In order to make it easier to call, I changed the name of the text without authorization, and it is called. This article was first published, but because of the name of the article, it was reported and criticized by bar friends in accordance with the bar rules, and soon sank without a trace. When I saw it in the analysis bar, I thought it was a comedy article, so I started reading it with a relaxed mood, and after reading the 8,000-word short story, I read heavy thoughts.

Habits will make people feel numb, and comfortable habits will make people's feelings paralyzed, after becoming a habit around him, the relationship between partners often covers up our male protagonist's further exploration and thinking about the relationship between the two, how to break the game, that is, the authors of all walks of life have to bother, and this article is no exception. However, the author uses delicate brushstrokes, focusing on the perspective of Kudo Shinichi, to write about his subtle psychological changes, confusion and reluctance. Because Gray Yuan Wai is an independent individual, the author respects her independence and gives her dignity and choice, rather than positioning her as a little woman who has affection and water to drink, so what is shown is a resolute and resolute and assertive image, she took the initiative to cut off the habit of getting along with herself and Kudo Shinichi, no soft words, no obedience. What you can't get, never ask for extravagance, Kudo Shinichi is a mountain in her life, and if you turn it over, it will pass.

I believe that she will thank those who have helped her and really treated her well from the bottom of her heart. It's just that most of life's regrets are like this. The road after that may not be a smooth road, but it is a road that you can choose, have no worries, no entanglements, and will not owe anyone freedom and care.

Before, such as yesterday's death, and after that, today's life.

As a Ke Wai party, I naturally don't want our male and female protagonists to say goodbye, not to mention that they have intersected and returned to their respective worlds, and the world is different from the previous one. Not for anything else, just because that person came.

The story comes to an abrupt end, and what happens to the rest of the story doesn't matter anymore.

It's just that when he wrote END, he had already broken through himself after the period of returning to his original state, and with unwillingness and attachment, tasting the afterglow of bitter parting, he still needs to grow.

Reading Keyword Experience: Independent

2. "Girl" by

Short. The story begins with 7-year-old Yokako Yukako and her father Kudo Shinichi, and there are three suspense in the whole text:

(1) Whether Yukako is Shinichi Kudo's biological daughter;

(2) whether Gray Yuan mourned whether he died or not;

(3) Gray Hara's love is not Kudo Shinichi.

The story is not long, and there is no very complicated background, but these three suspenseful stories can always grasp the reader and chase them down. The answer is yes or no, and a reasonable explanation can be found in the text, so the reader's reply in the serial is also brain-opening, and there are all kinds of speculations. The interaction between father and daughter makes people feel very warm, but the parent-child suspicion makes the reader smile and have a shadow entanglement in his heart. The twists and turns of the truth, Kudo Shinichi, who has endured various tests, no longer cares if his daughter is his biological daughter, because he loves this child and loves the child's mother even more.

An amazing man, a wonderful father.

Read the keyword experience: love

By the way, the author's writing, in the quiet and plain narrative, it appropriately creates the atmosphere needed for the plot.

I know that when it comes to writing, many people are impatient to mention flowery rhetoric and prose-like behavior.

When your plot is very full, the gorgeous writing is for the plot, for the description of the service, is the icing on the cake, but when you open the gorgeous, you find that the inside is empty, saying that it sounds good is showing off the writing, saying that it is not good is embroidered pillows. The so-called gorgeous is just a waste pen. If you write more than 20,000 words in an essay and the reader can't extract your story, what do you think is the purpose of the existence of 20,000 words?

For example, for example, the most famous sentence in "Lumen":

In my world, you are the brightest

Did you find an unusual word?

No.

But because of the portrayal, foreshadowing, and emotional brewing of the previous article, this sentence is like a thousand pounds of money, so as to achieve an unforgettable effect.

Good writing is not about how rich your vocabulary is, but whether it is appropriate and appropriate. Buddhists say that looking at mountains is mountains, and looking at water is water; Look at the mountains are not mountains, and look at the water is not water; Looking at the mountains or the mountains, looking at the water or the water, as the triple realm of writing, it is probably okay. It's just that as a reader,Don't be a fan of the charming eyes.,Bound by gorgeous words.,Of course, looking at the same person is like a ghost hitting the wall.,Turn around and always stand still.,How to improve your appreciation?

Looking at the same people, it is by no means an appreciation of excellent compositions, you don't need to keep drawing red money with a pen to circle good words and sentences, and it is not a Chinese teacher correcting essays. Really good fandom,It's often like an oil painting.,You get to the nearest place to take a magnifying glass to see.,What you see is just colorful color blocks.,You have to stand far away.,Look at the whole.,You can find the beauty of the whole.,In order to appreciate the details of the author's heart more objectively and comprehensively.,Instead of worrying about whether this color block is artistic enough.。

of the same author

Woman on a Bench on Wednesday Evening

QQ Jun I prefer the previous one.,So I'll just say a few words about this one.。 The highlight of the full text is the treatment of the original characters, the original characters are very heavy, and the psychological activities are also very interesting, but there is no sense of dominance, but it is better told and highlighted from a unique perspective. In fandom, the original character, regardless of priority, should serve the original character, unless your positioning is to show a different story of the original character. However, what is more common now is that the positioning is not clear, thinking about writing a fan story of Ke Ai Xinzhi, focusing on the original characters, and even letting the existence of Ke Ai Xinzhi serve the original characters, or making the original characters heavy but featureless, just paper people used by the author to forcibly promote Ke Ai's plot.

3. Soy sauce by

A very chic one. A different perspective, a different beginning. Suzuki Sonoko, a character who is not flattering in most of the Ke Ai fandom, has become the well-deserved first protagonist of this article. The author uses a small amount of space to write about the garden's unspeakable feelings for his childhood sweetheart Kudo Shinichi, and he does not shy away from writing about the garden's friendship and love for Mao Lilan, and then uses the garden's mouth to position herself - a bystander of feelings and an assist of Xinlan's feelings. The authorities are fascinated, the bystanders are clear, and the big grinning garden uses a lively and heroic appearance to cover up all kinds of thoughts that arise in my heart as I grow older. The garden with the girl's ignorance accepted Kyogoku Makoku's love, and when Kyogoku Makoku confessed, he said something like this-

"Garden, I find your liveliness, innocence and joy very touching. Well, also, your eternal ease and carefree is what I like the most. ”

At that moment, I felt that Kyogoku didn't really understand Suzuki Sonoko as a person, he loved the appearance he saw, and he was not interested in looking into her heart. Behind the garden is the Suzuki chaebol, and the superior family conditions doom her not to be like the daughter of an ordinary family to save money and worry about the bills at the end of the month. If this sentence is completely based on the original work, then the real garden pair is almost finished, and any negative response from the garden will seem abrupt. But because in the text, in the previous article, the author has already done ink on the inner world of the garden, and the garden's next reaction is very reasonable-

This person doesn't know me at all.

Then,The author took a memory kill,In 73Spare no effort to continuously release Xinlan's childhood memories of the serial twenty years of crit,We saw a memory between the same childhood sweetheart, Shinichi and the garden, which may not be remembered by our male protagonist-

Sonoko Suzuki was looking for only one thing, the boy who wiped away her tears in the late afternoon many years ago.

He was very young at the time, carrying a detective book, and his handsome childish face had a pair of overly delicate blue eyes, and the reflection of the proud sun.

This kind of affection that sprouted in childhood, I can't tell whether it is friendship or love, whether it is touching or heartbeat.

There is no doubt that the garden cherishes the friendship between himself and Lan very much, and the bond of growing up together is much more convincing than the relationship between Lan Ai. Because of this, the garden hid his thoughts and initial tenderness in the bottom of his heart, and was willing to be the soy sauce of Xinlan's feelings. This kind of concession is more convincing than in the common fandom, when the article sets up that Gray Yuan Mourning already knows that Conan has affection for him, he still says to Conan sourly, you go find your angel, or sneak away abroad without saying a word, which is much more convincing.

In fact, the author writes about the lack of understanding between the real garden, and the obscurity of the garden's feelings for the new one, which somewhat alludes to the meaning between Xinlan and Xinzhi, and then, the author grasps the evaluation of the garden by Gray Yuan Ai "with keen observation and intuition", and through the perspective of the garden, it shows the Ke Ai we are familiar with - not a sweet and straightforward first love, but the meaning of understanding and respect side by side, and at the same time repeatedly tells the garden himself and the reader that Ke Ai is a person of the world, and we are not.

The gray plain mourning that flashed on the window is an illusion, and only the garden and Kudo Shinkai can see it, and there is no supernatural involved, but the image of this gray plain mourning, which represents the truest desire in their respective hearts, the emotions that they once dared not face for various reasons, and the self they most want to express.

Sonoko really saw the change in Shinichi's expression, the pain under his casual smile and the pain of losing his beloved.

Why do you have to marry someone you don't love, and what if you can follow your heart, your true confession?

In the end, according to Ash Yuan's evaluation, Yuan used her keen intuition to do what she wanted to do, became a detective, and became a person that Ash Yuan agreed with, and she was also the real her.

Only Chapter 11 directly describes Xinzhi's feelings in the whole text, but Yuanzi, an observer in the most appropriate position, has already submitted his observation report to the reader, and at the same time as submitting the report, Yuanzi also summarized and thought about himself, Xinlan, and Xinzhi. It is clear to the bystanders, and when it comes to their own feelings and lives, they are no longer confused.

It's a pity that there is a paragraph in the middle that was swallowed by Du Niang, and it took a long time to find the original address of Ke Ai

Reading Keyword Experience: Spectator Clear

There are many articles that use the perspective of the third person of the original work other than Ke Ai to describe Ke Ai's feelings, or combine the third person's own emotional entanglements to reflect Ke Ai's homo people, but most of them will write such an effect-

I don't know how.,Hattori Heiji/Black Feather Kaito/Toyama Kazuha/Mao Lilan,Suddenly I found out that I didn't love my childhood sweetheart.,Suddenly I found out that I and my childhood friend weren't suitable.,Suddenly I found out Ke Ai's feelings.,Suddenly ran over and said Ke Ai with the author's possession, you are together, because you love each other.。

Azzy?

Think about it from your perspective, you have just ended a long-term long-distance relationship with your GF, and you can finally mix oil in honey and complain to each other for a few days, and your relatives and friends suddenly become like receiving the money from the second daughter and becoming a childcare and tell you that XX is your good match. Do you immediately ponder gratitude, or do you roll back?

If you don't believe in evil, you can play the role of this relative and friend by yourself.

I estimate that the result is probably light, and the heavy one is beaten up and never interacted with each other - as the old saying goes, it is better to demolish ten temples than to destroy a marriage. What's more, the Japanese believe in not beping with you in person, how can they do something so straightforward?

Of course, you have to talk to me about it, this kind of straightforward character Conan is a lot, so it's troublesome to watch the fate of these characters-

All of them have become corpses of Detective Conan's on-site teaching on the Mystery Show!

Of course, many people will definitely frown and even shout at the bottom of the house, landlord, you liar, there are so many scenes in the garden, I mourn so little, and in the end, it seems that Conan went to find the garden, and the two of them are suspected of being together!

How do I answer this called the landlord? I want to guide "Butterfly Dream", think about it or think that the Chunyuan Queen in "The Legend of Zhen Huan" is the guide to the queen, after all, it is more easy to understand at the moment, and the specific content is not popular, think for yourself.

As for whether it will be Xinyuan in the end, I don't think one is certain, and even if it is, it will not affect the core of Ke Ai's feelings. Take 10,000 steps back and say, so many Ke Ai's articles have Xinlan, Tanzhi, Xiu Ai, Tho Wai, and other kinds of sorrows, and people who like them still like it so much, even if they forget Ke Ai, they have to shout support, why should they dislike a garden with depth and ideas in this article? When holding "But the Water Eye" as a classic, why don't you dislike the garden and her father who raised the heroine named Miyano Shiho? What's more, Xinzhi Bar openly allows the car of Tou Zhiqiang X true love to exist, and a Qing Shui article of more than 10,000 words brings a little bit of Xinyuan, how can it make people feel like a fish in their throats?

Some people may want to say that this is actually about personal preference, which is recognized, but since it is so clean, you might as well order an X.

8. Seeker and Redeemer series by

The analysis article bar has not yet found the relevant full text, and there are several article reviews, and the full text is available in the Ke Aitian area.

SNR's full name is seeker and redeemer. Written by the author pАVzerVI (nicknamed Tiger Jun),A total of four parts plus extras,Because the author didn't see the knot.,I didn't search for it on forums or platforms like Tieba.,Let's just think it's the author who only wrote the first three for the time being.。

What must be explained here in advance,The author is not a fan sister of the author Tiger Jun.,So it's not with a biased gaze to look at this work.,It's just a matter of saying words and sentences to recommend this fandom.。 So when the audience members see the following recommended lines and have doubts, please go back and read this passage again. What I say below is from the bottom of my heart, and it is by no means a god or a red envelope, but a subjective and fair record of my understanding and feelings about SNR, because it is indeed worthy of my evaluation.

If I were to evaluate SNR, I would say that SNR was probably one of the best gifts left by the first batch of Ke Ai dǎng in the Net, to us of the new generation.

SNR is a long article, if you want to write an article review, you can write a long, long one, but we are here to recommend it, so I will not comment on the content of SNR here, but tell you why SNR is worth recommending.

I can summarize it in one sentence - if there is a historical record in the Ke Ai fandom, then SNR is the only one of them, and none of the remaining sons have the appearance of an emperor.

Because if you have read SNR, you will find that the author Tiger Jun is lying on the keyboard yawning at the four words "Aoyama Gangchang" on the Conan comics in his hand, and squinting his eyes and mocking nòng Aoyama: "A good hand of two cats and four twos, you just out of three with two, and in the end there is not only one two left in your hand? ”

This is indeed a fanfic that has completely surpassed the level of Aoyama Gosho's original work.。

What is said here is completely beyond the same, not like the other excellent Ke Ai fellows recommended in this post, in some aspects - such as emotional description, such as character building, such as plot rush...... and so on, but encompassing all of this, far behind Aoyama's original work.

And the annoying thing is,This one is really a fan.,Can't be put into the original category.,Because the connection between the characters and the world view and even the plot,It's all based on the original work of Aoyama.。 Why do I say angry? Because as a fan, this article might as well be original with a different structure, and it can be a mài version of the spring! It's a pity......

What the author Tiger Jun has done is probably his Conan world, the collision of red and black in his pen, the Ayào in his pen, and the characters in his pen are much higher than the green mountains.

How much taller? It's about the beauty of Huá Ryas standing on Aoyama's shoulders, and then holding a tiger in both hands, well, so much taller.

I recommend that you watch SNR not as it is, but as a movie on paper - that is probably the most valuable and fun way to open SNR. Because the author Tiger Jun, in the process of writing, he abandoned all the complicated rhetoric or the so-called "writing" of Xiaobai, and devoted all his energy to "telling a good story and interpreting this story into the reader's mind in the form of a picture".

So what kind of story does SNR tell?

What would happen if everyone in the world of Mingke stopped staying in the world of time stagnation and cycle in Mingke's original work, and they continued to grow up in that world, to pursue what they needed, to explore what they desired, to save what they wanted to cherish, and to protect what they believed in?

This is what I saw, the story that SNR presented to me.

Maybe some viewers will say that my recommendation seems too exaggerated, so I use the trailer in the author's article to give you the core content of my recommendation - after all, any movie made by a big production will nòng a trailer before scheduling, right? Even if all the highlights are stuffed into the trailer like the Conan theatrical version, at least it can trick you into watching the movie!

(In order to facilitate the understanding of the audience, I added Chinese subtitles to the English in the original text without authorization, after all, not everyone likes to watch the original English sound, and there are also audiences who love to watch the dubbed version, and the audience with good English can ignore the subtitles by themselves)

Trailer - Trailer

"Surprised, Detective?" Wai observed Conan's facial expression with interest, "There is often only between healing and shā life

A thin line"

Apoptosis and its las lay hid in night

"Wonderful changes, I still don't know the rationale, so I'm still interested in this precious sample of this mysterious change. The brown-haired man said.

"Can be ...... Did the FBI just broadcast my business?" Conan thought hatefully.

God said, Let Sherry be!

The girl in front of the monitor skillfully switches the running artificial god training program to the back stage, and a window full of data tables and images is reflected in the gray-blue pupils. Looking at the floating-point values and curves that are incomprehensible to ordinary people, a long-lost smile appeared on her delicate and slightly pale face.

"I ordered some physiological monitoring equipment, yào physical laboratory mice and chemical yào agents through the Internet and telephone, of course, in the name of the doctor, these days will probably be delivered one after another, pay attention to the receipt when the time comes. ”

"Ordered these...... Is it ......?"

And all as light

With the muffled sound of the long-pressed gas, the heavy airtight door was bounced open like a leaf...... A breathtakingly pure white light enveloped it......

“...... Is...... Unbelievable...... "Even though Qīn himself went through this procedure, Conan stared at the rats in the cage in batches that had degenerated back into their juvenile form, and it took him half a day to squeeze out this sentence.

But the struggle has just only begun... (But the battle has only just begun...... ）

"The F.B.I. is planning an operation, and I've just been told that it could be bigger than you think. Conan introduced, "The equipment debugging starts on the 18th, and the idea of action and the coordination with all aspects are straightened out before that." ”

“...... Yes, the numbers are M114 (6)432 and M114 7469, yes, adjusted to the morning of the 18th, be sure to be on the road on time...... "Mourning in the basement of the ground holding the telephone receiver.

Looking for ansers... (In Search of the Truth...... ）

"If the sensitivity of the Shenqi meridian system of the person who takes the yào is not enough, in other words, the activity of the calcium ion channel on the original cell membrane does not reach the level of qiú that it uses to use the Shenyu meridian, and externally it is manifested as a relatively general level of intelligence, and the Shenqi meridian system will collapse under the influence of the yào. The consequences of this are obvious, right?"

The light blue body in the disposable syringe reveals some mysterious fluorescence.

And running out of time... (Time is running out...... ）

Wai maintained a standard kneeling posture without saying a word, and instantly adjusted the qiāng mouth to the direction of Gin, and another three-shot shot.

A reddish mist quietly filled the tense air.

"Hey Mates," the door was pushed open, and Judi stood in the doorway, "It is time." (It's time)

Gently pulling the sleeve, the red dots on the bullet indicator in the chamber protrude sharply in the crisp and pleasant meshing sound of metal and plastic parts.

"Everything has been in place for a long time. Doctor, hurry up!" Conan said, turning to Asasa.

The staff in yellow took the most classic posture - lunges with their faces facing away from the wind, their left arms crossed at the waist, their right arms first supported the ground, and then decisively stretched out, with their index and middle fingers pointing straight ahead, and the rest of their fingers clenched into fists. The 12-ton behemoth accelerated to 300 nautical miles in 2 seconds and disappeared into the night sky a few seconds later.

...... Push out the runner, pour out the cartridge case, turn it sideways, and test whether the cartridge case is all empty...... In the darkness of the extreme light, cāo frantically cāo...... Use the quick loader to quickly fill the runner, then test it with your fingers, pull it down, twist it, shake it, and close the runner in one go...... Pull the trigger...... Once, twice......

Its her region... (This is her field...... ）

"Huh~" The airtight curtain was opened, and the light of the setting sun shone in, dyeing the white sè researcher uniform on the tea-haired young girl standing at the window a touch of gold.

Its their ar... (It's their war...... ）

A rocket-propelled grenade sprang up from the roof of the building, shooting into a calm blue sky, and the crooked trail at the same time exposed several black-clothed people on the rooftop. In a Black Hawk helicopter, an agent with the word "FBI" printed on the suit immediately pressed the heavy aircraft qiāng mounted on the side of the longitudinal fuselage of the open hatch. The two Sea Cobras quickly approached, and the 20mm bow turret gently adjusted the direction with the pilot's line of sight, drowning the opponent who was still resisting with light rapid-fire weapons in a hail of bullets.

With a loud bang, the main building 500 meters away collapsed into a pile of ruins in a sea of fire.

No matter ho ins... ... Conscience Loses (No matter who wins...... Conscience loses. ）

Only ...... are left The last ...... ...... to be completed

I'm going to spit out a groove here.,Compared with the fact that many fan-writers in the circle are chasing qiú's "need to use a dictionary without a word.,Digression is like waiting for leisure",Tiger Jun's overly rigorous Jun affairs and biomedical yào field settings,It's really a mud and stone liú in the same industry.,How many people who report the same humanities every day have to be buried.,And how many wives who open the scriptures and post them to the same humanities but can't put out a little dry goods.。

Finally, let me summarize this SNR recommendation in the format of Pope's epitaph for Newton in the article-

“CA and CA’s fanfiction las lay hid in night: God said, Let SNR be! And all as light.”

9. REVIVE by

Revive this article was written in 2015. The author is Lao Zhong, and he is nicknamed Lao Zhong here. When Lao Zhong finished this article, I had not yet entered your circle, so I could not catch up with the serialization of this article, and readers gathered to discuss it. But Lao Zhong was one of the first friends I met in the circle at the end of 15 years, when I first joined Ke Ai's analysis bar.

People say that the virtuous do not avoid relatives, since I met Lao Zhongjun, I have never praised her for her good writing, after all, Lao Zhong can ask me to dedicate a skill of my knees in other fields, and writing is not the most skill point she points. But this does not mean that her writing is not good, and there is no law that stipulates that a person who scores 100 points in mathematics cannot score 90 points in Chinese.

So now, in the current situation of Ke Aitong's humanistic quality, I still pull out the old Zhongjun who can score 90 points in the language, and tell everyone that it is also a very powerful thing to be able to score 90 points in the language test. I have seen a few wives in your circle instruct Lao Zhongjun how to write articles, whenever I see these good teachers' wives, I always laugh, Lao Zhong also collects thousands of oceans of manuscript fees every month, and the manuscript taxes paid are much more than the guaranteed hundreds of yuan collected by those wives who write president's essays in Jinjiang......

I've commented on Tiger King's SNR series of fans before.,I said that if Ke Ai fanfiction has a historical record.,Tiger King's SNR deserves the status of the only original era.,Then the revive of the old loyal monarch.,Although I don't have the appearance of an emperor here.,But the family of the torn marquis.,But it's still stable and deserved.。

After blowing the author, we still go back to the work. For Revive's perception, I think it should be described like this - the writing is rigorous and dense like flowing water, the plot is like a stormy wave, but the main theme is that the latent shadow is like an undercurrent, and if you don't read it carefully, you won't know the taste. And this theme is the title of this article, revive.

The title of Revive should come from the song of the same name sung by Mai Kuraki for Mingke TV, but this title undoubtedly points out the theme of the plot - revive, regeneration.

If Kudo Shinichi loses most of his memories since he became smaller, does not remember his brutal struggle against the black-clothed organization, and does not remember that there was a woman named Miyano Shiho in his life, and then he continues to live as a detective called Kudo Shinichi, can his life be counted as a restart? So his girlfriend's name is Maoriran. So if one day he regains his memory and remembers that he once liked a woman named Shiho Miyano so much, or Wai Wai, will Kudo Shinichi abandon his childhood sweetheart of more than 30 years? Because memories can't be eaten, Kudo Shinichi and the current Kudo Shinichi in memories are already two people, Kudo Shinichi, who has been reborn.

So at the end of the old version of Yitian, Zhang Sanfeng recalled Guo Xiang like this-

Zhang Sanfeng looked at Guo Xiang's suicide note, and seemed to see the bright and chic girl in front of him again, but that was a hundred years ago." Although Zhang Sanfeng has been keeping a pair of Shaolin iron arhats given to him by Guo Xiang for a hundred years, it was still a hundred years ago.

So the end of Revive says like this-

"People have to grow up, and one day you will be happily walking down the street with a stroller.

And the once liked, no matter what it was, will turn into wind and disappear in the tunnel of time.

So go forward, go forward, without looking back. ”

Thirty-three-year-old Shinichi Kudo and seventeen-year-old Shinichi Kudo, after all, are two people, between these two Shinichi Kudo, there is a missing story about Shiho Miyano, even if someone tells him this story, even if he himself remembers this story, but Shinichi Kudo in the story and Shinichi Kudo in reality are two people after all.

I've seen some readers who couldn't accept the ending of this article and forced it to be sad at all. I think the author just owes Ke Ai a HE, but this article is a fake Ke Ai article. It's like Zhang Sanfeng and Guo Xiang are both lonely and old, but when you see the two stories I wrote above about Zhang Sanfeng and Guo Xiang, you can't say that Jin Lao dismantled cp, you can only blame Jin Lao for not giving HE.

And more importantly, revive's article, under the plain narrative, unravels the core foundation of Ke Ai's feelings - a community of destiny. If Ke Ai and Ke Ai lack this common experience, then why should they be together? And isn't the most precious relationship between Ke Ai this experience that comes from a community of destiny? If Miyano Shiho is just a beautiful passerby female scientist to Kudo Shinichi, then what reason does he have to leave his childhood sweetheart Xiaolan, who is four to thirty-three years old, to choose that passerby? For the sake of the child's future IQ is enough to decide on eugenics......

So after the overall review, let's talk about the details.

My habit of tweeting has always been to let the author recommend himself, so I usually copy a few original paragraphs for everyone to read.

For example, in this paragraph, it is written that Mao Lilan has been hiding from herself since Kudo Shinichi became smaller, and Gray Yuan went to enlighten her.

The wind brings a hint of coolness, and the evening cherry blossoms bloom just right.

Mao Lilan, who was full of worries and sorrows, came out of the Affiliated Hospital of Xidi after visiting her boyfriend, and somehow followed the bell to come here. When I reacted, I realized that I was lost, but fortunately, I happened to meet Gray Yuan Wai.

"It turned out to be the ...... of the water worship" Mao Lilan looked at the stone statue of the Gray Plains Mourning Sweep, and had an epiphany in his heart, and looked at her strangely.

"This is the child of a friend of mine and of a loved one, and I have come to worship for him. Gray Yuan said lightly, as if he sensed Mao Lilan's thoughts.

"This kid came by surprise. Gray Yuan Wai clasped his palms together, stood silent for a moment, and continued: "They were only 24 years old back then. Actually, my friend didn't mean to want this child, but when his girlfriend was tempting, he said, 'I haven't graduated yet?'"

"Ah......h

"His girlfriend was very sad, and later after being injured in an accident, she found out that there was a problem and had to give up. She didn't dare to tell her family. Gray Yuan sighed, "Miss Maori, do you know why?"

"It's because of the woman's strict family education. Maolilan speculated, not quite sure.

Gray Yuan Wai shook his head: "The two families are world friends, and their childhood sweethearts' feelings, if the parents of both sides know, they will only let them marry their sons." ”

"That's ......"

"The woman was afraid that their family would put pressure on my friend to force her to marry. My friend also learned about these things later through the mouth of others. She didn't mean to hide it, she just didn't want to be the bond of her beloved, because she loved her deeply, so she always thought about each other. ”

"And what about later?"

"Miss Maori, I'm not trying to reveal people's privacy. I just hope you can learn from my friend's story. At the age of 24, no one is an all-powerful and all-knowing God, and even less at the age of 17. ”

Mao Lilan looked at the New Year's friend of Kudo Shinichi in front of him, and his eyes were sad: "You are also helping Shinichi ......"

"Children who flow away like water are called 'mizuko'. Gray Yuan Wai walked towards the temple gate step by step, and did not look back at her, "In fact, people's hearts, once they are let down, will flow like water." ”

There is a very interesting detail here, which is the water offering. The Mizuko Offering is something you can occasionally see on Conan TV, a stone statue of a little monk in the background on the roadside, often around temples or along mountain paths. It is a custom in Japan that was born out of the social problem of a declining birthrate and the increasing age of women who have abortions, and those statues are used to overkill the children who died due to abortion. The woman who had an abortion felt sorry for the unborn child, so she would make an offering to the heavenly spirit of the child.

And the author is here, combined with Japanese customs, so that Gray Yuan said this, reasonable, and not abrupt, compared to the gray plain out of the sentence "You are the top of the new Taishan" and the like, so high that I don't know where it is.

Another example is this paragraph, which is a dialogue born when Shinichi Kudo, who has lost his memory, sees a cold yawning woman and finds that this yawning woman is mean to him.

They are all ten years old, in front of Ayumi Yoshida, he is a brother who can be trusted and relied on, how did he get here, this gray plain, so no one in his eyes? It's like a peer...... No, even the seniors - they are only twenty-three or fourteen years old, how can they be like thirty or forty, and they look like they have seen through the world?

Kudo Shinichi smiled awkwardly, as if he was playing a round for himself, and was about to get up to say goodbye, when he suddenly thought of something and asked, "Then ask a personal question." ”

"If there is no privacy involved, I will answer at my discretion. "It's still so cold.

"Gray Plains, do you hate me?"

Kudo Shin saw the woman in front of him who had always been unwavering, and he was a little distracted and stunned for a moment, but it was only for a moment, and the expression of a pool of ice water quickly recovered.

"What answer do you want?" the question was kicked to Kudo Shinichi again.

"You can watch and give, I, listen as you like. ”

"I love you. ”

So simple, so concise, the simplest three words, Kudo Shin must be on the spot!

"You...... What do you say......" Although it is not the first time that he has been confessed by the opposite sex, the confession came from the person in front of him, and Kudo Shinichi was full of disbelief.

"I'll just say it once. Whether you listen to it as a joke or as a truth, it has nothing to do with me. ”

"Then I'll take it as a joke......" Kudo Shimiki laughed even more embarrassed.

"As it happens, so am I. The elusive and enigmatic woman in front of her smiled slyly, "Boring question, don't ask it again in the future." ”

The text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the flat. This is the best portrayal. When you think she hates you, she tells you that she loves you. How funny the expression on your face is at this point, how funny Kudo's expression is. And when you think she likes you, she tells you she's joking. How embarrassed your face is, Kudo's face is as embarrassed. This kind of immediate, unpredictable, in a word, is called ambiguous, and in other fashionable adjectives, it is called the sour smell of love. And the sour smell of this kind of love appears in the two people who seem to be strangers in the plot, unexpected but reasonable, it is the taste of Ke Ai's adultery that everyone likes to find in Ming Ke's original work. People can't help but sigh, yes, this is very sad.

At this point, my recommendation for Revive is complete, and I believe you can also see the subtlety and elegance of Revive's article

...... It's weird!

Do you think I'll recommend revive to you after reading this?!

It looks like it's full of BE flag plot and literary language.,I've already crossed the upper right corner.,Maybe I'm going to spend time here to write a recommendation?Maybe be friends with this kind of literary girl?naïve!

What I like is that the full text of revive is to mock the wives of the writers who love every day, who are dead and alive, and uncomfortable, and they are also mocking the wives of readers who like to scold old stalks.

Revive, the beginning of the antidote terrier, then the amnesia terrier, then the angel terrier...... Well, the readers' wives scolded what the old stalk was, and Lao Zhong used what the old stalk was, that is, to tell these wives with low eyes that the stalk is that stalk, and how to use the stalk is the time to see the author's skills. How to use the old stalk to give birth to new ideas, depending on the timing of your use, it makes people feel that this stalk is very necessary, it is necessary to advance the plot, and it is appropriate to describe the psychology of the characters, so it is good to use.

It's not that the stalk is old, it's just that the level of the person who wrote it is poor. Chinese characters have been used for so many years, each word is an old stalk, there are four ways to write the word back, you can only write one, you think the word back is an old stalk, the "Dictionary of Chinese Calligraphy" lists seventeen kinds, do you know?

And Lao Zhongjun is more than that, the interaction of Ping Xin's mourning in her article often makes people laugh, making people see that they are full of love and tacit understanding, rather than the 3P tearing written by those children. Not to mention her black orchid, black and white horses, demolition and mourning, and other righteous deeds.

What Lanlan chased the black feather Kuaito as a new one for two streets, the white horse detective is a gay, Xiuyi is okay to go to the tomb of Akemi to visit a lonely life or something, I can't be more praised.

Pick up recommendation 9:

Of course, my favorite is the following stalk of "Black" and "Sister Xiaolan".

"Lan, I don't want to quarrel with you. Kudo Shinichi looked at the surrounding residents who were looking at the window with the lights on from time to time, and lowered his voice to persuade his girlfriend to go back together.

"When we were young, didn't we grow up arguing like this?" Mao Lilan wiped her tears, "Aren't Mom and Dad also noisy like this?

"You ......" Kudo Shinichi's chest breathed a sigh of relief, thinking of Maori Kogoro and Fei Mi, a couple who have been separated for more than 20 years, I can't bear her sadness, so I have to press all the words in my heart, untie my tie and want to breathe.

"Oh, how can you quarrel like this?" said an old woman, who had come out to see the situation after hearing the movement, "As an older sister, how can you quarrel with your younger brother? ”

The quarrel stopped in an instant.

"Ah, I'm sorry!" a woman who looked like a housewife came out in a panic, and quickly bowed and apologized, "Mom, go back, don't worry about other people's affairs." The old grandmother was dragged away by her family and muttered, "I just don't want to see their sister and brother quarrel." ”

The housewife glanced at the two behind her, quickly turned her head and pretended not to see anything, walked away a few steps, and whispered, "Mom, they are not necessarily sisters and brothers. ”

"How so?" the old woman couldn't help but look back at them again.

"Young people now...... muttered the housewife quietly, "it's not your time. ”

It's quiet, it's frighteningly quiet.

"Lan ......" felt that his girlfriend was trembling constantly, and he couldn't see his expression clearly with his face lowered, Kudo Shinichi wanted to comfort her not to take other people's words seriously, but she didn't expect her to speak first: "Shinichi...... The marriage you mentioned last time, since it has been delayed until now, I don't think there is any need to worry, I will go to live with my mother tonight, and it is better for us to be separated for a few days temporarily. ”

In the night breeze, Shinichi Kudo, who was extremely stunned, had to watch the tearful Maoliran get into a taxi and disappear.

I remember that when I participated in the revision of the rules of a certain bar, Da Bar told me seriously that she hated Heilan, and that Ke Ai was the same as Xiao San, Lan Lan was actually a good girl.

I said yes, I also think Lan Lan is a good girl (that is, her IQ is a little lower), and Lan Heilan can only make people think that Ke Ai is a junior (so I will secretly rub Heilan). So when I wrote an analysis, I would write that Lan Lan was the landlord aunt in Sherlock Holmes. Lao Zhong writes the same people and will let Lan Lan play indecent.

You cp party, you can't even be black, write a P article. If you think that the unicorn is in Heilanlan, then you write that she is a sacred creature that symbolizes purity!

That's all the reason why I recommend Revive, even if you can't learn the author's smooth narrative skills, deep emotional description, and rigorous plot arrangement. Learn how to be black, at least you won't suffer when you go to fight with Xinlan Kitchen.

And the reason why I listed this article as the family level in my heart instead of the biography level is because the reasoning plot in it is not the author's forte, which is not enough to impress me, an old mystery fan, and the other point is that the author's focus is still on emotional entanglements after all, and he has not gone beyond this trap to the entire Conan world, and the atmosphere is lacking. But that's already picking a bone in the egg.

Finally, I recommend that after reading this story, listen to Mai Kuraki's revive.

Revive's lyrics and revive's essay are very appropriate.

Poorly written, written with bugs, in fact, it's not a problem, no one is perfect, no one is perfect, all the articles recommended above also have different degrees of shortcomings, the authors of these articles, everyone politely shouted loudly, it's just a kind of network etiquette, not really feel that they can be canonized as gods. Wentouch is a good thing, I also hope that Ke Aiquan has it, but it really doesn't, you have to insist that there is, first of all, this bottom line must be put very low. Blowing a good article, blowing a long review, the author likes it, and the reader also likes it; blowing a bad article, blowing around and blowing there is no real thing to blow, that is called a pyramid scheme, what is a pyramid scheme? It is to lock up together and brainwash, repeatedly tell you that this is a masterpiece, and in the end I believe it, as if standing on the shoulder of Wen Touch and preaching.

Everyone loves to listen to good words, there are always authors who are glass hearts, and there are readers who want to send two diseases, but the iron also has to be hard, when blowing than the gods, whether the work itself is really passing, this is a basic requirement. Because the same people are stained with the light of the same people.,The same people are different.,In order to attract a group of fans CP lovers to watch.。 Good fandom,It's out of the circle to let the readers of the non-CP read it.,And interested in your Amway's CP;Bad fandom.,It's also going around in the circle.,It looks like there must be a nomination for tweets.,In fact, there are no readers who are serious about writing after reading.。

I often see people say,Internet homo humanities,Serious you will lose,Low standards and wide threshold,It's to encourage novices to start.,Have the confidence to express your love for Ke Ai in your own way.,High standards and strict requirements,It's to really be able to bring forth the new.,Keep improving.,Not to let newcomers feel like it's not enough after reading it in the boutique area.。 It's true that writing the same people has little future.,If you want to make money, it's better to go to the starting point.、It's good to write original in Jinjiang.,But "Journey to the West" has become a generation of classics.,"The Legend of Wukong" is reprinted.,None of the creators said they didn't take themselves seriously.,The worst.,I want to go to the same vegetable market to take orders and earn some pocket money.,The buyer said you take a sample and I'll take a look.,You can say I'm sorry I never write the same person seriously?

People who don't take their work seriously from the beginning don't expect others to consider your face first when commenting on you, you don't take it seriously, let alone others?

As for those readers who are anxious and shouting that I don't care about bugs, as long as there is a bully article to read, you can continue to lick the stupid white sweet god who pretends to be scum and turns black Su Bang as sugar, but please shut up and be quiet, don't be the last straw that crushes this circle of today's fragile aesthetics, because there is no shortage of big and white people in this circle who have no independent thinking ability, mediocre reading comprehension ability, and can only follow the crowd.

In fact, when we read an essay by Ke Aiba, I think it is imperative that the reader have the ability to distinguish what is a Ke Ai text.

If you don't think this is a problem, then look at the question -

A. A Ke lamentation essay, Gray Yuan mourns unrequited love Conan, Kudo Shinichi / Conan has no idea and no response, and insists on living and dying side by side with Mao Lilan, and finally Gray Yuan mourns living alone in the world.

B. A Ke Wai article, Gray Yuan mourns unrequited love A-kun, unrequited love B-kun, unrequited love Conan, Kudo Shinichi / Conan did not know and did not respond, and finally Gray Yuan mourned and died.

C. A Ke Wai article, Gray Yuan Wai unrequited love Conan, Kudo Shinichi / Conan did not know and did not respond, and insisted on falling in love with Mao Lilan and tying the knot with the old man and grandchildren, all the care and interaction of Gray Yuan Wai was completed with his wife Kudo Ran, and finally Gray Yuan Wai died alone.

D. A Ke lamentation article, Conan's unrequited love for Gray Yuan Mourning, Gray Yuan Mourning belongs to so-and-so, ignores Conan's feelings, and insists on caring for so-and-so, and finally leaves Conan and his friends and follows so-and-so.

Q: Which of the above options is NOT Ke Aiwen?

I know that at this time, it is listed separately, which is a sending question, but when I actually read it, there is still a group of innocent and pure readers who go to these main content posted in Ke Ai's bar is the so-called Ke Ai Wen replied - good, like, warm, praise, abuse.

Please let me continue for a second for the softness of the hearts of these readers, and allow me to quote this passage from the land predecessors as a gift:

“...... When the keyboard Ke Ai saw that the title said Ke Aiwen, he praised a masterpiece, and he didn't even know if the was written by Ke Ai. Always selfish in the face of moral dilemmas, invincible and super handsome when you have nothing to do, don't dare to tear up when you have something, and you will follow when others say good. ”

Okay, now do you understand the audience?

I know that some people call ABCD's Ke Ai style a masterpiece of high literature, depiction of human nature, and profound connotation, and are keen to mix together the god-like standard of "does it have to end with Ke Ai together?" to attack the naysayers. As far as readers like me are concerned, if an article with Ke Ai fanfiction makes me watch a heart-rending unrequited love Edogawa Conan from beginning to end, Edogawa Conan has no knowledge and no response biu~ After turning back into Kudo Shinichi, he is desperate and sincere, true and true love with Mao Lilan forever HE - no OOC story, I will feel that although it is all for Ke Ai to feed shi, I would rather go to see the original work of Aoyama Gomasa, at least people draw well, and there are pictures to lick.

Write a Ke Ai article, in order not to OOC, in order to get the praise of Bu Heilan, some writers who are more peaceful than the sky are also painstakingly so much that they bury Ke Ai in Ke Ai's essay Overkill, Ke Ai owes you a trophy in the shape of Merkel the Great.

This kind of text is nothing more than a similar passage in the original book to describe it from the perspective of Gray Yuan's mourning, and there is no change in essence, but naïve readers can't tell what the connotation of this story is. And the writer who writes like this, puts such a story in Ke Ai, either stupid and not expressive - thousands of words don't let people see the feelings between you and you, or it's so bad deliberately - such an original story Ke Ai dang is licking the sugar in Ke Ai, how does it feel?

The ending of Ke Aiwen can be varied, but what is the core of Ke Ai's feelings? It's just that Gray Yuan Wai has a thick and big single arrow facing Conan, and he will be miserable and miserable for the rest of his life? Conan must maintain the physical and mental purity of Miss Mao Lilan before he can be called OOC? From beginning to end, I can't see the slightest flow of Conan's feelings for Gray Yuan Wai, is it marked that Ke Aiwen has Conan and Gray Yuan Wai is Ke Aiwen?

If the answer to most writers and readers is YES, then the foundation of the existence of the Café has been shaken, and the buildings on it are just dilapidated buildings, and sooner or later they will collapse.

Next, let's move on to the more advanced stage, please look at the following two cloze questions, please choose an answer to fill in the blanks to complete the whole story:

1. Shinichi Kudo is a pair of lovers, and the two are good partners at work and good partners in life. Kudo Shinichi is a detective/policeman who specializes in all kinds of difficult criminal cases, and it is common for him to work overtime and be so busy that he suddenly says goodbye because of a business trip, and as his virtuous helper, he often waits alone at home and endures loneliness. Until one day, the two who got together less and separated more finally caused an irreparable tragedy.

A. Maoliland

B. Gray Plains Mourning

C. Shiliang is pure

D. Ayumi Yoshida

Answer: All of the above, the answer only depends on the CP of your article is Kudo Shinichi and whom.

The reason why Ke Ai is a unique existence for us is because of the interaction mode between the two, it is difficult for you to find a second CP in the whole work that can highly overlap with it, and this uniqueness should be reflected in the fandom marked as Ke Ai CP, rather than replacing the subject, it can still become a story without problems.

2. ( ) and ( ) are a pair of lovers, and the two are good partners at work and good partners in life. One day, the two sat together ( ) and encountered a shocking ( ). The two fought side by side to save everyone, but in the end, everything was irreparable, and everyone went to Huangquan together.

A. Kudo Shinichi and Moriran, shipwreck

B. Kudo Shinichi and Ashbara Ai, airplanes, terrorist attacks

C. Kudo Shinichi and Hattori Heiji, Shinkansen, Game of Death

D. Magneto and Professor X, nuclear submarines, a conspiracy against mutants

Answer: Either of the above, the answer only depends on who the CP of your article is.

At first glance, all kinds of fandom based on real events are particularly sympathetic and humanistic, praying for world peace, but these stories often focus on simple narratives and ignore what kind of positioning the protagonist should be as a fanfiction character, and what kind of things should be done and said in what position should be in line with their original characteristics. In the end, the story becomes an article that changes the protagonist's name to an original story that will not affect the flow of reading.,Just ask,What is the meaning of such a text as a fan?

Personally, I think that good writing is one that tells a story with smooth sentences and logic, which resonates with most readers, and in this case it cannot be called a masterpiece, but it is good writing.

There is no first, only different preferences, but this must be based on a certain foundation, such as reasonable development and logical narrative.

【Conclusion】:

It is true that any of the articles I recommend here are not perfect, they have such and such flaws, flaws, and even in the eyes of some readers with unique tastes, they are not even qualified to be called "masterpieces", but at the very least, these articles are all original works of the author, including the few articles I proposed as negative teaching materials in the article.

Original works, no matter how badly written, I will say to the author that one yard is one yard, you are indeed working hard for the CP you like, and whether you write well or not is another matter. The so-called masterpiece pieced together,No matter how good it is,It's garbage.,Any circle will be strangled.,Only Lori, whose eyes are above the top and don't know the height of the sky, will hold the stinky feet of the author with character problems.,This phenomenon,Is there a circle of care? I don't know, I hope not, even if the overall literary literacy of this circle is really not good, but at least don't lose the moral bottom line, at least for works like text changes, I hope you can distinguish whether you should give praise to the original author, or praise the author who replaces the name, and I hope that the fewer such essays the better.