Chapter 69 Forcibly breaking into Wanhai Pavilion
It's been more than a month since the book was released, and I have something to say.
First of all, the results of this book are not good, and everyone can see the data of clicks and recommendations, but fortunately, there are many book friends who support it, as well as the help of editors, at least there is still the motivation to continue writing it, and I have the confidence to write it better and better.
Besides, you don't have to worry about the eunuchs, since this book has been signed, it will be finished no matter what. At the starting point, there is a complete novel "Tiandao Credit Card" with nearly 2 million words, which can be regarded as a guarantee of character, and those who like the flow of science and technology can take a look.
Let's talk about the opinions of book friends in the book review area.
I generally don't read the book review area, I don't dare to read it, I'm afraid of too much criticism, please understand this. It's not that I'm too weak, but in the field of online writing, I'm just a street writer, and I really don't have the confidence to face a lot of criticism. I have seen a lot, one is that my mood is affected, the second is to discourage enthusiasm, and the third is to be angry, to be honest, not all criticism is out of good intentions, and many times it also involves insulting personality, which is a very common thing on the Internet.
At the new book stage, there were relatively few book reviews, so I plucked up the courage to read it and explain some of the issues.
First, some book friends talked about the problem of setting, I can only say sorry for this, the outline setting is something I determined before writing the book, and I can't change it.
I think that in the online text, there is no need to be strict about the setting of this thing, the online text is originally a literature that lets your imagination fly, and it is impossible to have a universal setting. In the case of the flood wilderness, in some online articles, the saint is the master of everything, in some online articles, there are many realms above the saint, and in some online articles, the heavenly immortals can challenge the saint...... The only question is whether the reader is willing to follow the author's train of thought, as long as you think the story is good, what is wrong with the new setting?
Whether the setting is reasonable or not actually depends on a degree of recognition. There are many great gods at the starting point, and basically every great god releases a new book, and there is a new set of settings, because they disdain to eat the old book, and they disdain to follow the trend. The status of the great gods is there, there are readers, there are authorities, and their settings soon become the standard of similar books, because everyone recognizes them. This is a reality, and it is also a very normal thing, and I don't shy away from saying that many of the settings of "Creation of the Heavens and Worlds" come from those good books before. Of course, a lot does not mean all, there are still some differences, I hope you can be a little more tolerant, a little patient.
Second, the issue of common sense. Anything imaginary is actually based on reality, and the same is true for online articles, and the same is true for me to write books. A book friend mentioned that the four elephants are not earth, water, wind and fire, I checked this, according to our ancient saying, it is indeed not like this, earth, water, wind and fire is the materialism of the West. In my opinion, it doesn't count, because like many online articles, the premise of this book is not entirely based on reality. The biggest background of this book is the flood wilderness, and there are many texts about the flood wilderness at the starting point, and the setting is not exactly the same, as I said before. In addition, spoilers, although this book is about cultivating immortals, there is also a collision of immortal law and magic, the heavens and all the worlds, not all the Xianxia world with an oriental background, so it is reasonable to introduce the concept of earth, water, wind and fire in the West.
This is just an example, in a million-word online article, there may be more than one mention that contradicts common sense in reality, so please don't get entangled. Online novels are online novels, there is no need to sit in the right seat, it still depends on whether the plot is good or not, and whether it can satisfy you.
Third, there is the issue of morality. Morality is a very difficult thing to explain, and standing on the high ground of morality to criticize others is a common problem of human beings. For example, some book friends in the book review area said that in order to improve their strength, they devoured the world of the protagonist, which is no different from devouring their own mother, which seems to be quite noble, but it makes people laugh when they think about it. This is self-proclaimed morality, and using what you take for granted to criticize others. If you have to worry about these things when reading online articles, then I really don't know how to set up a character, and I don't know what kind of moral standard a fictional character should have.
The world of fiction is a world of disorder, and it is also a world that does not coincide with reality, and such a world has morality, but it is debatable whether it is the same as the standard of reality. In Xianxia and fantasy novels, it is easy to destroy the heavens and the earth and destroy the planets, how many lives have to be killed, and what a heinous thing, but the strength of those hands is all over the sky, and one is better than the other. However...... What reader would be resentful of these things?
Let's briefly talk about the problem in the book review area, and please be more patient with this book, after all, "The Creation of the Heavens and All Worlds" is still the beginning, and the story has not yet unfolded, and my skills are limited, so I can't tell the story very well in such a short space...... If I had this kind of strength, maybe I would have become a great god. However, I am still confident that I can present a wonderful, complete story in a relatively long space. There are all kinds of books at the starting point, and the types that everyone likes are not the same, if there are book friends who like this type of book, you can wait and see, even if the beginning disappoints you, there may be content that you are interested in later?
Finally, please support book friends who like this story, recommend, collect, click, your support is my biggest motivation!
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Wang Chong's eyes didn't dare to leave the jade box in Lei's hand for a moment, the dream ice epiphany in the jade box was too important, so he didn't dare to take a little risk.
Dream Ice Epiphany is a very precious spirit grass, this spirit grass can enhance the primordial spirit of a warrior, and it is also the main medicine for refining the Pregnant God Pill. The Pregnant God Pill is much more precious than the Tongtian Pill, the Tongtian Pill only makes people advance to the congenital, and the Pregnant God Pill can enhance the Yuan Shen of the innate martial artist and improve the realm of the innate martial artist!
This 9,000-year-old dream ice epiphany of spiritual power is supplemented by other elixirs, not to mention that it can also refine more than 10 pregnant god pills, according to the Wang family's family law, with Wang Chong's merits, at least one pregnant god pill can be shared, and this pregnant god pill is enough for Wang Chong to break through the realm and reach the true yuan realm!
Wang Chong is the third generation of the Wang family, not too old, but not too young. He has advanced to the innate level for more than ten years, because of his talent and cultivation resources, he has always been in the True Qi Realm, and now that he sees the hope of the True Yuan Realm, how can Wang Chong not be in a hurry?
Through the temptation, Lei Dong became more and more aware of the importance of the jade box to Wang Chong.
"There's no discussion, I'll give you the jade box, and you let her go!" Lei was very tough, "If you don't agree, I'll destroy the jade box." ”
Wang Chong hesitated for a long time, and finally nodded. For him, the Fantasy Ice Epiphany that can enhance his cultivation is the most important thing, and as for the enemy, that is all later. However, Wang Chong is an old Jianghu, and although he gave in, he still put forward several conditions.
Wang Chong asked Lei Dong to put the jade box in the north, and then asked him to retreat to the south, and the two were about 50 meters apart. Then, Wang Chong took Lei Ling to approach the jade box, and when he walked to a place more than ten meters away from the jade box, he threw Lei Ling towards the mountains and forests to the east, and quickly grabbed the jade box and fled to the north.
"Xiao Ling!" Lei Dong didn't care about chasing Wang Chong, and went straight to Lei Ling, in his eyes, nothing was as important as Lei Ling's safety.
On a small mound a few dozen meters away, Lei Dong found Lei Ling.
"Xiao Ling, how are you?" Lei Dong picked up his sister and asked her to take the Heavenly Dew of Creation on her body, but it was useless. Lei Ling swallowed more than a hundred drops of Creation Heavenly Dew, but he still didn't wake up, but instead spurted out a large mouthful of blood.
After squirting blood, the thunder spirit's breath became even weaker, and the flame of life was like a candle in the wind, which could be extinguished at any time.
Lei was shocked, but there was no way but to pick up Lei Ling and place her in the cave. When passing by those Wang family members, Lei Dong angrily slashed down with an axe, splitting more than a dozen acquired martial artists who were abandoned by Wang Chong into pieces. After that, Lei Dong stayed motionless in front of Lei Ling, feeding her the Heavenly Dew from time to time.
When Zhou Tianci returned to the cave, it was already late at night, and after Yin Yi and Yin Er recovered some of their strength, he subdued the other three demon beasts of Snake Pan Mountain in one fell swoop, these three demon beasts were the Star Armor Snake, the Purple Whisker Earth Dragon and the Moon Lizard.
There is a big gap between the strength of these three demon beasts and Yin Yi and Yin Er, and they are all in the early stage of congenital.
It was a pity that Zhou Tianci was a little regretful that the spiritual material with the power of destruction was not found.
Leaving the five demon beasts in Snake Pan Mountain, Zhou Tianci left. These five demon beasts were too big for Zhou Tianci to carry with him, so he could only let them stay in the cave first.
"Lei Dong, what's going on?" As soon as he approached the cave, Zhou Tianci smelled a strong smell of blood and felt the dead air here, which surprised him. Fortunately, he quickly discovered Lei Dong, otherwise he would have thought that something had happened to Lei Dong and Lei Ling.
When Lei Dong heard his question, a trace of color appeared in his blank eyes, and he said with a crying voice: "My lord, Xiaoling is injured, I can't wake her up......"
Zhou Tianci saw Lei Ling lying on the bed, and boundless anger surged in his heart. He and Lei Ling have been together for less than four months, but in the past three months, the well-behaved and sensible Lei Ling has long been regarded by him as his sister, and now seeing that Lei Ling is so seriously injured, lying on the bed and not knowing whether he is alive or dead, how can Zhou Tianci not be angry!
Zhou Tianci was still rational after all, and immediately suppressed his anger and went to check Lei Ling's injury.
"My lord, how is Xiao Ling?" Lei Dong looked at Zhou Tianci with an expectant face.
Zhou Tianci's face was expressionless, and he said slowly: "Xiao Ling's injury is very serious, most of her internal organs are damaged, she has heart failure, and she may die at any time." With such a serious injury, if you hadn't been hanging with the Heavenly Dew of Creation, Xiao Ling wouldn't have been able to hold on for even a quarter of an hour!"
"Ah......" Lei Dong knelt on the ground and roared hoarsely, "Wang Chong, Wang Jia, I want to kill you!"
"Okay!" Zhou Tianci picked up Lei Ling and reprimanded Lei Dong: "Lei Dong, calm down." No matter how Xiao Ling was injured, the most important thing now is to heal her first. I'll take Lei Ling to Weeping Blood City right away and find someone to treat her, and you wait here for my news." ”
"My lord, I'll go with you!" Lei Dong wiped away his tears and got up and said, his attitude was very resolute, "My current strength can help you." Besides, now that Xiaoling is injured, making me wait here is tantamount to asking for my life. ”
Zhou Tianci thought about it, but still agreed: "Okay, let's disguise it later, enter the city overnight, don't bring your mountain axe, so as not to cause right and wrong." ”
When it came to Lei Ling's life, neither of them dared to slack off, so they simply cleaned up and set off immediately. In order to take care of Lei Ling, the two of them couldn't rush with all their strength, but an hour later, they also arrived at the foot of Weeping Blood City. However, the gates of the City of Weeping Blood are closed.
"My lord, what now?" asked Lei Dong anxiously.
"Quietly enter the city. Zhou Tianci said, "Then let's go to Wanhai Pavilion, they have a clever alchemist, and they will definitely be able to heal Lei Ling!"
The city gate is not an obstacle for Zhou Tianci and Lei Dong today, both of them have the strength of the Gang Qi Realm, and they entered the city with a little effort. After that, Zhou Tianci sent them to Wanhai Pavilion.
"I'm looking for Wan Wanying, you tell him that Hongjun is here!" Zhou Tianci broke straight into Wanhai Pavilion, and those who stopped him were all shot away by the thunderbolt, of course, the thunderbolt did not hurt them.
"Who are you, so bold that you dare to do something in Wanhai Pavilion!" the steward of Wanhai Pavilion scolded.
"Don't talk nonsense, let Wan Wanying come to see me immediately!" Zhou Tianci stomped down, and a crack spread directly from under his feet to the other end of the hall, which was more than 100 meters long.
"You ......" The steward was finally scared, but he knew that the ground of Wanhai Pavilion was made of red gilt copper, which was ten times tougher and harder than steel, and it couldn't be broken by ordinary True Qi Realm, let alone stomp out a crack of 100 meters.
The one who can do this is definitely not something he can afford to provoke!
Under the deterrence of force, the steward immediately notified Wan Wanying.
Wan Wanying came to the first floor with six congenital beings, and when he saw Zhou Tianci, his face was not good.
"Brother Hongjun, what does it mean that you led people to make trouble in Wanhai Pavilion in the middle of the night?" Wan Wanying said coldly, "Although we have cooperation, it doesn't mean that you can do anything wrong in Wanhai Pavilion. If you can't give a reasonable reason, then don't blame me for being rude. ”
Zhou Tianci didn't care about Wan Wanying's attitude, he hugged Lei Ling and stepped forward and said, "I'm really sorry, Brother Wan, if it weren't for the last resort, I would never be like this." This is my sister below, she is seriously injured and in danger, I really have no choice but to ask Wan Haige for help. ”
Wan Wanying stepped forward to look, his eyes flashed a hint of strangeness, he turned around and said to his subordinates, and the subordinates left immediately. After a while, the subordinate brought in the old gatekeeper.
"Guan Lao is the most brilliant alchemist in Wanhai Pavilion, and he is also the top alchemist in Dayu Kingdom, so let him take a look. "Ten thousand heroes.
Zhou Tianci put Lei Ling on the chair and arched his hand very gratefully: "Thank you, Brother Wan!"
Guan Lao stepped forward to check on Lei Ling, then stroked his long beard and said, "This little girl has suffered serious internal injuries, not only her five internal organs are broken, but even the meridians and acupoints have been destroyed by true qi. Judging from the true qi left in her body, it seems to be the Wang family's "White Tiger Roaring Heavenly Strength". I don't know who would have done such a ruthless move. ”
Zhou Tianci hurriedly asked: "Guan Lao, how can I cure her?"
Guan Lao groaned: "If it were an ordinary person, if he was seriously injured like this, I am afraid that he would have died a long time ago, and this little girl has been able to survive until now, it should be the credit of Linglu." However, Linglu can maintain her for a while, but it can't save her, and if you want to save her, you have to use the Rebirth Pill. As far as I know, only the Rebirth Pill can reshape the meridians and acupoints and repair her broken internal organs. ”
"If there is a cure, you can do it!" Zhou Tianci and Lei Dong glanced at each other, and they both saw each other's joy. But the next moment, Wan Wanying's words made their mood fall to the bottom.