Chapter 7 Modifying Personas

According to Du Ziyuan's understanding, critics may tolerate a work that has no artistic value and no central idea, but they will never tolerate a work that even makes up the cultivation system, which is an absolute flaw. When the time comes, when it is evaluated by these masters, even ordinary readers will subconsciously think that this is a nonsense work, and the perception will naturally plummet, and the recommendations of various channels will also decrease, so it's no wonder that the results are good.

Nowadays, mainstream novels either try to avoid fight scenes, or they are provided by experienced masters or simply write their own, and there is definitely no future for making up their own novels.

In contrast, elements such as feelings, wits, funny, selling meat, and selling cuteness are more popular.

Du Ziyuan's choice of "Genius Mahjong Girl" is precisely for this consideration.

The grading system of works in the fairy world is already very perfect, and some works that are not suitable for children will definitely not be seen by children, so functional novels are very marketable and will not be officially banned. Looking at today's best-selling novels, at least eight out of ten have 18X elements.

In the same way, the selling ** paintings that can stimulate the eyeballs more intuitively must be very marketable. Think about what these poor insects who have looked at the ink Spring Palace for tens of thousands of years will look like when they suddenly see such a delicate painting style, Du Ziyuan estimates that their chickens will not be able to take a holiday for a long time.

Because it is a debut novel, Du Ziyuan doesn't want to label himself too strongly, the degree of meat selling in "Genius Mahjong Girl" is just right, and it can also sell cuteness by the way, and the bloody plot of the main line is also the royal road in the royal road.

The most important thing is that the theme of playing mahjong is very popular nowadays, and it can definitely be very popular. Du Ziyuan has already begun to imagine the expressions of people in the fairy world when they see the sentence "Playing mahjong is really happy".

Although the people who play mahjong in "Genius Mahjong Girl" have a variety of skills, and they are basically "strange" skills in the eyes of immortals, because they are not the main selling point, Du Ziyuan does not think it will have much impact.

[But the modification still needs to be modified, first of all, the name of the person must be changed, and the name of the island country cannot be used, and then the mahjong rules should be adjusted, in line with the rules of the Aolan country, and at the same time, it can not affect the plot and ability, and finally the ability is all strengthened, and it is best to add the law of cause and effect without affecting the balance. Du Ziyuan didn't copy it completely, he still had to make some modifications according to the market demand of the fairy world.

In addition to the most basic painting style beautification, he also needs to improve the abilities of the protagonists, at least not to make the immortals feel that they are watching a group of weak chickens pecking at each other. The ability to involve cause and effect is still very rare, in the immortal world, only immortals after ascension can interfere with cause and effect, and mortals, including immortal cultivators, can hardly even recognize cause and effect. This level can be raised at once.

The abilities in "Genius Mahjong Girl" already have a lot of weapons that are close to the law of cause and effect, so it's still easy to change. For example, the protagonist's "Blossom on the Mountain", "Demon King-level Luck" and the like, no matter how you look at it, it doesn't seem like a normal person can do it, and there are also "Predicting the Future", "Treasure", "Mountain Lord" and so on.

The train of thought was very smooth, so Du Ziyuan planned to start writing.

After writing the pen, he realized that the costumes of the characters also had to be changed. Although the school uniform of the island country is very good-looking, there is no concept of sailor uniform in the fairy world, and the Japanese school uniform after the improvement of various sailor uniforms will inevitably have a sense of disobedience. Therefore, Du Ziyuan plans to make the costumes on the characters closer to the service of the fairy world on the basis of the original.

"The women's clothing in the country of Ao Lan is relatively similar to Hanfu, but it is wrapped too tightly, so it simply blends the sailor suit with the Hanfu, with miniskirts, short sleeves, open chest, and waist...... I will show everything that can be exposed, but I can't be like Miss Qinglou, I have to look innocent. ”

I have to say that Du Ziyuan is worthy of being a painter who canonized God with H books in his dreams, and he is definitely talented in terms of personality. Although the "school uniform" that he redesigned can see the shadow of the fairy world costume at a glance, the fabric is very small, and the area of the character's exposed flesh is very large. But it doesn't give people a very ** feeling, but it still looks very pure and desirable.

Looking at the girl who has just been reshaped by herself on the computer screen, pink double ponytails, cute faces, delicate fairy school uniforms, towering breasts, belly buttons exposed because the breasts are too big and the clothes are too high, and pure white stockings. Du Ziyuan was so excited that he couldn't even hold the pen in his hand.

This is the female number two in "Genius Mahjong Girl" "Haramura He".

Why isn't it the female number one "Saki Miyanaga"? Of course, it's because Haramura and her breasts are big!

Although Haramura and Saki Miyanaga are tied for the 2014 cute king of dreams, as a pure man, what's wrong with pursuing NZ and stockings?

Du Ziyuan looked at the original village and the one he painted, although it was very similar to the one in the dream, but because he integrated his own painting style and changed his clothes, he actually had a lot of changes. It was as if he had drawn a dream lover, and he loved his characters deeply.

"Sure enough, the two-dimensional or something is really great, and in comparison, the three-dimensional is simply scum. Forcibly suppressing the urge to lick the screen, Du Ziyuan began to think about another question.

Yuan Cun He's name has to be changed, after all, there is no surname "Yuan Village" in the fairy world, but he doesn't want to change it casually, if "Yuan Cun He" becomes "Murong He" or something, he will be embarrassed to smash himself to death with tofu.

"It's just called Xiaohe, and the screen name is Xiaoxiaohe. "Don't think that there is no network in the fairy world, when the Emperor of Heaven descended to the heavens 80 years ago, he also used a supreme immortal weapon to create a network similar to the Internet, in order to make the information communication of the Heavenly Star more convenient.

The effect of a perfect information network system on the promotion of the entertainment industry is indescribable, whether it is the promotion of works or the exchange of experience, etc., it will become simple and easy. It's just that the place where Du Ziyuan lives is too remote, so the Internet has not yet been popularized. In the future, if he has the opportunity to go to a bigger town, he will be able to see the fairy version of the computer and TV.

After drawing the character design of the original village, Du Ziyuan began to modify the character design of the female number one "Gong Yong Saki", Gong Yong Saki's clothing is not very distinctive, and her figure is ordinary, her biggest feature is about the legendary "Gong Yong Horn", and those who have good deeds also call it "Demon King Horn", because the strength of people with this horn is often as strong as the Demon King.

Du Ziyuan originally wanted to really draw a horn, and there are people in the fairy world who have horns on their heads because of their special bloodline, not only horns, but also ears and tails. But in the end, I thought about it, and I still used my hairstyle to show "Miyanaga Kaku" just like in my dream.

Her name doesn't need to be changed, there are many people with the surname "Gong" in the fairy world. Throughout the night after that, Du Ziyuan worked to modify and improve the characters in the early days of the comics......