It's useless to pull it
I know that there are not many people who are still reading this book, after all, there are a lot of poisonous points, and maybe there are only a handful of people who are reading it.
So, I think it's time to explain.
First of all, the poison point starts.
1. The heroine died young.
2. There are too many cultivators in the high realm, and those who can't move are all cultivators in the Imperial Martial Realm.
3. The worldview is scattered.
4. There are too many names of the male protagonist, and I can't tell them apart.
5. I didn't write many chapters before I ran to another world.
6. Ouyang Yi's realm has improved too quickly.
7. There is no suspense, no foreshadowing.
These are some of the bigger poisonous points I have drawn from book reviews, self-summary, and reminders from friends, and I believe that many people will want to abandon the book when they see one of them, and I am also helpless about this.
Turnip greens, each with its own love, I want to describe a more macro world.
A ruined world, the same as I said before, a world that fights with the sky, with the earth, with people.
And I pay more attention to the world and the plot, not to mention that I write the Xianxia text, not the Xiuzhen text, so it will be very different from the plot you think.
Let's start by explaining some of the poison points.
For you, the poison point is indeed an important reflection for me.
From the first poisonous point, the heroine committed suicide.
Some people say, why didn't the male protagonist save the female protagonist?
First, the male protagonist was already unable to protect himself at that time, and if he didn't believe it, he could look back, if it wasn't for Ouyang Yi who bought Ouyang's life, Ouyang would have died a long time ago.
Second, Lin Yanran has had enough of the deception in the big family, and the only hope is that Ouyang will marry him after returning from the battle, but in the end, he can only helplessly submit to the family and marry Fu Qing, in such a sad situation, how can he stand to see his beloved die in front of his eyes? What's more, Lin Yanran has lost hope since she married Fu Qing.
Third, why didn't Ouyang Yi save Lin Yanran, Ouyang Yi was first too busy with affairs in the palace to get out, Fu Qing intended to commit treason, and the palace was naturally in turmoil, but there was not much intersection with the story, so I didn't deliberately describe it, if I deliberately described it, you would say that I was watery again, not to mention that Ouyang Yi was not inactive, otherwise Lin Yanran would have become a mess of carrion.
Fourth, who said that Lin Yanran must be the heroine, the book is not over, anyone can become the heroine, of course, I can guarantee that no matter how the ending ends, there can only be one heroine.
Fifth, whether it is from Lin Yanran or other descriptions, it is to imprint the template of the world in disguise, just like the current Li Siyu, a woman who is similar to Lin Yanran's manager, that is, because of Lin Yanran's incident, Ouyang will want to help Li Siyu, and there will be the following content.
2. There are too many cultivators in the high realm.
I can only say this, people gather by like, things by groups, will you play with a baby waiting to be fed? And the entire Fuguang Empire, the largest empire in the Emperor Continent, there are only a few thousand people in the Emperor Martial Realm, this is called many? Not to mention that this is a world that can only break through to the Emperor Martial Arts, and all the cultivators have been precipitated for so many years, and there are only thousands of Emperor Martial Cultivators, which is still called a lot?
3. The worldview is scattered.
First of all, not long after the novel began, where did so many worldviews come from? What's more, I wrote about a fragmented world, even if it's a spoiler here, the Dis Continent is not a complete world, and I mentioned it once or twice before, so I didn't pay attention to the world view of the Dis Continent.
4. The protagonist has too many names,
Lin Yang was the name of Ouyang when he was still an ordinary person, and at that time, Lin Yang's mother told Lin Yang to live no matter what.
And after Lin Yang joined the war, he killed those who had washed Huangshi Village in blood, and finally he gave up everything and tried to reconnect with this world, and Ouyang Yi was Ouyang's father-in-law, after his parents had disappeared for a hundred years, Lin Yang also changed his name and had the same surname as Ouyang Yi.
And Ouyang Long was given the name by Fuxi, and later, Ouyang felt that the palace was too dark, so he was no longer willing to stay in the palace, and broke away from the title of marshal of the country, and the name of the dragon naturally disappeared together.
Therefore, the protagonist is named Ouyang, an Ouyang who has experienced two lives and is experiencing the third life.
5. Didn't write many chapters. Just run to another world.
Spoiler alert, in fact, the two worlds are the same world, and Yellowstone City is a good illustration, but for some reason, the world collapsed, and there was no way to continue to break through in the Dees Continent, so shouldn't all cultivators try their best to go to another world in order to break through?
6. Ouyang Yi's breakthrough is too fast?
This doesn't explain too much, Fu Xi, Ouyang Yi, and some of the older generation, all belong to the heads of the three major families in Dongsha, they can't break through in the Disi Continent, and their cultivation has been suppressed, after arriving in another world, it is naturally a matter of course, and it is normal to break through, if you don't break through, it would be strange.
7. There is no suspense, no foreshadowing.
I can only say that the previous chapters are indeed a little boring, but what I wrote was mainly Xianxia text, not Xiuzhen text, let alone Shuangwen.
And foreshadowing? I just want to say, let you see that it's still called foreshadowing? Only after reading the later plot, you will suddenly realize, oh! It turns out that this incident has been foreshadowed a long time ago! Just like Li Siyu, she reflected Lin Yanran's appearance from another angle.
In short, let's summarize some of these useless first, I can only say that turnip greens have their own loves, the novels I want to write, maybe not as cool as some Xiuzhen texts, but the world view described will definitely not be worse than other novels, at least, I like the novels I write very much, even if there is no reader chasing it, I will finish it, because, I like the novel I wrote very much.
You can dislike it, but please don't deny it, thank you.