"First person? First person is not easy to write, and a lot of people don't read it. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 info"Because it is my own experience, this novel is a memoir, and Li Zhan wrote it in the first person.

Lin Wei was a little disappointed with Li Zhan's use of the first person, "Hey, let's take a look first, and then I will suggest that he change to the third person when I come back." ”

Lin Wei didn't expect that he couldn't stop looking at it, and his eyes were red when he saw it.

"Huh, Lin Wei, why are you crying?" When the fat man returned to the dormitory, he actually saw Lin Wei sitting in front of the computer wiping his tears, so he asked again: "Did your girlfriend write you a breakup letter?"

This fat man is damaged enough, Lin Wei suddenly laughed and scolded: "you, your girlfriend wrote you a breakup letter." But the tears on his face made the fat man's heart furious, this crying and laughing, what does it mean.

"Then you cry hair, a manly husband, who bullies you, say it, brother covers you!"

Lin Wei wiped his face and said: "Don't be poor with you, this is a novel written by Li Zhan, it is very touching, when I finish uploading, you can also take a look, it's too touching." ”

"That's okay, I'll come back after taking a shower to enjoy Li Zhan's masterpiece!"

Lin Wei divided Li Zhan's novel into six chapters, uploaded it, and boarded his tuba, and contacted the editor in charge to help review it quickly. Lin Tuhao is also a big family at the original point, so the editor in charge is still face-saving, and he passed it directly without even looking at it.

After the review was passed, the first thing Lin Wei did was to directly brush up on the alliance leader, and then wrote a book review in the book review area.

"In the past, I saw that the first person was directly crossed, but this time it was different, and I even burst into tears for a female passerby who had no name. ”

Since Lin Wei is the original point of the alliance, there are also many fans at the bottom, and his book review was immediately discovered.

"Brother Tuhao has found a good book again, let's go take a look. ”

Although I don't have any money, I click, recommend, and collect a lot. ”

"Isn't it, didn't Brother Tuhao say that he was the most annoying, and didn't read the few words?

......

Due to Lin Wei's popularity at the original point, Li Zhan's book collection exceeded 500 in a short period of time, with more than 2,000 clicks, and even more than 300 recommendation votes.

"Is that "Infinite Only Loop" the vest of a great god?"

"Eighty percent, I read the book, the author's writing is sophisticated, and the war is described in three or two sentences as if it were immersive. In particular, the war in which the last city of the Democratic Party was breached by the Imperial Army made my scalp tingle when I saw it. Also, the scene where the female Democratic soldier who jumped off the city wall after the city was prayed for by the guards to give to the protagonist jumped off the city wall, which is very graphic and tear-jerking. The skill is too powerful, it must be the vest of a great god. ”

"Vest that's for sure, you look at his update date, it was approved just after uploading it in the afternoon, it doesn't matter, how can it be! I just don't know which god it is. ”

"Hey, I haven't read the book yet, but Brother Tuhao really has nothing to say, if only I could have this kind of reader, many people in this book only read the book review of Brother Tuhao, and the new book list was suddenly exploded, I'm depressed. ”

"I'm just depressed, I was originally the 12th on the new book list, but now I'm being squeezed out of the front page, I really don't know which god it is, it's so shameless. ”

"Yes, God, give us newcomers a way to live! Write it in a large number, don't change the vest!"

......

Lin Wei sat in front of the computer, watching the discussion in the chat group, and laughed crookedly. I also swipe the original point page every few minutes to see if the collection has risen, to see if there are any new comments, and I am as excited as if I am my own book.

"Viagra, Dota, I made an appointment, and one of the four is missing. Huang Fengshao, who was in the dormitory next door, pushed the door and walked in, and there was a computer here that was almost exclusively for him. Huang Fengshao is a game fan, in fact, he also has his own computer, but it is used to hang online games.

"Not tonight, I have something to do tonight. Also, you can only use three computers at night, and I can use the other one!"

"No, viagra!Why are you like this? One person occupies two computers, what are you doing?" Huang Fengshao came over and saw Lin Wei brushing up on the book review, and couldn't help scolding: "Wow, you read novels and one person occupies two computers, are you mistaken?"

"This is not an ordinary novel.,This is written by my roommate.,I'm waiting for him to come back and continue to update it.,Do you like to play or not.,Anyway, there's only three tonight.,Maybe there's only three in the future.。 ”

"You're not, aren't you? Which roommate are you? Wow, you won't break your back, will you?

"you, it's Li Zhan, you can also read his novel, keep it and trap it!"

"Li Zhan is the one who has the theory of neurology in physics class? I can't see it, he can also write novels. ”

"How do you talk?" Lin Wei was a little angry, Li Zhan and Liu secretly argued fiercely in the first class, and in the end, Li Zhan was confused, Liu was secretly arrested and returned to the mental hospital, Li Zhan skipped class and dared to say hello to the counselor, these became a joke among the classmates. Because Li Zhan is usually a good person, and he gets along with Lin Wei very well, Lin Wei is very disgusted by others talking about Li Zhan about this matter.

"Okay, okay, I don't say it, I know you're going to be nervous, haha! "Huang Fengshao shook his eyebrows when he talked about 'roommates', and his expression was as obscene as it was.

"Your sister, don't look at it, play your game! Anyway, fat man, do you know where Li Zhan has gone? It won't take so long to eat, right?"

"He goes to the library every night. The fat man had just returned to the dormitory after taking a shower, and the water on his body had not been wiped dry, so he pushed Lin Wei and said, "Let me enjoy Li Zhan's masterpiece!"

"Look, I'll go to the library and have a look!" Lin Wei sighed and said, "Why doesn't he even have a mobile phone, it's not easy to find him." Lin Wei was so involved in it just now that he forgot to keep the manuscript and uploaded it: "Hey, I don't know if I can keep up with the update in the future." ”

"Wow, there are still people who don't have mobile phones in this era? Which is he from in the middle of nowhere? Or is he from ancient times?"

"Huang Fengshao, I said don't be so cheap. I heard from the counselor that Li Zhan was an orphan, and if he hadn't had a full scholarship, he might not even have gone to college. Zhang Fan, who came with Huang Fengshao, said that he was the squad leader, so he was more well-informed.

"So that's the case, you should see it during military training, everyone buys drinks, and he carries a kettle alone. Hey, I'm a cheap person, but I don't have any malicious intent. After Huang Fengshao gave himself a mouth, he opened the demonic beast and went to fight with people.