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This summary, at the beginning I wanted to praise myself, since everyone didn't see it, I can only break it myself, praise myself, from the back of the third part, I am trying a new technique, a new technique to write the character's heart, that is, most of the time, do not do the inner monologue, do not do direct emotional elaboration, but through pure action, expression, language, environment and atmosphere rendering, to express the heart, so that the character's psychological drama is blank, appear more tense.

You can look at the last chapter of the third part, the description of Lou Cheng when he left school, I didn't write about what he recalled at all, how sad and emotional, how embarrassed, there is no such word in the whole article, just wrote what he saw, his actions, but that's it, that deep, subtle feelings naturally accumulated, until the last "goodbye Songcheng" The four words burst out.

I'm not from a professional background, I'm semi-literate in writing, I can only rely on reading some books and pondering by myself, anyway, this technique, I may have used it before, but I don't have such a clear understanding, I think it's most suitable for deep, introverted, sentimental psychological drama, until the final burst of monologue, which will seem very powerful, because joy is explosive, and low is continuation.

Therefore, in the trough of Lou Cheng, before the chapter "For Me", I only wrote a few sentences about his and Keke's psychological activities from beginning to end, all of which were promoted by actions, language, expressions, etc., to render, and the most satisfying scene was probably the picture of Lou Cheng posting Weibo, leaning back weakly, closing his eyes, no need for anything else, no need for any description of psychological activities, all feelings are on the paper.

However, due to the lack of direct psychological drama, this kind of writing will appear abrupt, intermittent, and not smooth enough in the transformation of the scene, so that there is less transition and foreshadowing in the middle.

How to solve this problem in the future, I haven't thought about it for the time being, so I can only continue to ponder (scratch my head).

Well, back to the fourth part, this is an important process of Lou Cheng's psychological transformation into a grandmaster, and it is also the turning point of the whole book that I preset, which is the second part of the future, not long, but important enough.

For this plot, I'm ready to drop the 24-hour follow-up, fortunately, everyone still believes in me, maybe it's also more numb to my willfulness, most of the time it doesn't fall, and that small part of the time, it's up, up, ......

In addition, this paragraph is also an in-depth excavation and fullness of the characters of Orange and Keke, their thoughts, their three views, and their personalities should be more three-dimensional than the previous three, and I think it is also well written.

To tell the truth, before opening the book, I thought so, if the martial arts results are not good, then here, even if it is over, although Lou Cheng has not yet become a grandmaster, but the psychology and the road are ready, and the end is okay.

But well, I'm sometimes upright, I think so, but when I was a persona, more than 60% of the characters were outsiders, and they were outsiders in the top professional competitions, so I think, no matter whether the results are good or not, I should write down, of course, the results are good now, and I'm very satisfied.

The old rule, take a day off on August 1st, this writing is very stressful and tiring, and the follow-up has to sort out the third and last part of the martial arts, let's see you at half past twelve on August 2nd, the fifth part "The original dream will definitely arrive"!

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