Born at the beginning of the Xiaobaiwen era, although the writing is good, the storyline is probably still difficult to escape those inherent routines.

is nothing more than a wastewood male protagonist, who has been bullied since he was a child in the sect of cultivating immortals, and there is a senior brother who drags and cools the sky. This senior brother bullied him in various ways, so he worked hard to cultivate and was about to slap his senior brother in the face. Then the actor has a junior sister, even if he is a waste of firewood, he doesn't look down on him, he is very good to him, and always gives him medicine.

Next is the protagonist and the senior brother robbing the younger sister, the senior brother won the favor of the younger sister's father because of his strong cultivation, so the protagonist and the junior sister decided to elope. On the way, the senior brother kills the junior sister, and knocks the protagonist off the cliff.

According to the law of falling off the cliff, the protagonist gets an adventure, pretends to be forced to slap his face + accept beauties all the way out of the mountain, and finally defeats the senior brother who fell into the devil's way.

However, this book was broken on the way to the protagonist going out of the mountain and pretending to slap his face to collect the beauty, because the author Jing Yanchang didn't carry it when he crossed the Three Corpses Tribulation and hung up.

Merit can speed up cultivation and reduce the calamity, but it cannot completely cancel out the calamity. The Three Corpse God Tribulation was extremely dangerous, and Xiao Jin almost died when he survived the first tribulation, let alone others.

The author hung up, and the book naturally couldn't be written, and the book became a regret in the hearts of many people later. Rather, this book is actually a bit bloody, and readers rate it as a classic masterpiece more because of feelings. So how to write it wonderfully is definitely not a small problem.

When Du Ziyuan saw Tang Junhao say this, he suddenly remembered a joke he saw on Zhihu in his dream. Then he said to him: "You've already given up anyway, so why don't you write something interesting, how about I give you a few ideas?"

The work of the Seven Blades Festival must be original by yourself, like the Eighth Prince, who changes the wording of others and then patches it together, but it's okay if you just listen to someone else's opinion. Weeks are different from their rain of rain and money is an example.

Of course, Tang Junhao knew about this matter, and the 132 people didn't mean to hide it. Now seeing Du Ziyuan say this, I know that he wants to give himself some ideas.

Originally, with his self-esteem, he was unwilling to accept this kind of gift, even if it was his own brother-in-law. But since they have already lost this time, and Du Ziyuan himself said that he wrote something interesting, and the playing component was relatively large, he was naturally willing to accompany him.

"Boss, what do you think?"

"Actually, it's very simple, isn't this a standard male obscenity, then you can write it as a female orientation, how about it?" Du Ziyuan wrapped himself in a quilt, like a seaweed roll, and looked at Tang Junhao with a head exposed.

"What does it mean to be female? Can one man and many women be changed to one woman and many men?" Tang Junhao was confused.

"Alas, who told you that there are only one woman and more than one man, isn't there still a rotten text of men and men?"

Tang Junhao was shocked when he heard this, and hurriedly distanced himself from Du Ziyuan: "I didn't expect you to be this kind of person? ”

"Day, stinky boy, you're looking for death!Labor and management are not!" Du Ziyuan was furious, "Brother is kind enough to give you advice, why do you even suspect that I am bent?!"

"Then how do you explain that you lean towards me every time?"

"Grass, you don't know that the pine nut breasts are so big, you think I'm willing to lean on you, I was squeezed by her!" Du Ziyuan said unhappily, "If you don't want to hear it, get out, get out of here!" next time draw a picture of the spring palace of you and other women and send it to the ninth princess!"

"Don't, big brother, I was wrong!" Tang Junhao immediately knelt down, "Little brother's lifelong happiness is in the hands of your old man, don't ruin it! What if I can't marry a daughter-in-law in the future?"

"What else can I do? Enter the palace as a eunuch, sexual prosperity causes disasters and cuts to eternal rule, the poem that Songzi said is read like this, go to the root of trouble, you will be six pure, maybe you can study a miracle or something. ”

Tang Junhao hurriedly pleaded and apologized, and finally even promised to take Du Ziyuan to Shihe University for health care. Of course, Du Ziyuan refused, but it was the first time for him, how could he give those young ladies of Shihe.

But seeing that he was tossed like an ant on a hot pot, Du Ziyuan was angry. began to talk about the paragraph he had read.

"Doesn't his brother bully him often? Boys bully people often in the hope of getting the other person's attention, like pulling a girl's braids or something, you just write that his brother actually likes him, but he doesn't know how to express it, so he just bullies him all day long. ”

"Senior brother likes junior brother?

"Do you want to listen to it? You think I'm not disgusting?"

"Okay, okay, you say, brother, you continue, my little brother will pour you tea. ”

"I don't want tea, go get my cappuccino. ”

"Yes, yes, give the eldest brother a cup of card, Kabu...... Strange, no?"

"Suck - well, then let's go on, doesn't his junior sister often visit him to take care of him? You just wrote that it was actually instructed by the senior brother, because his senior brother cared about him very much, but then he and his junior sister got along, and the senior brother couldn't stand it, and the senior brother who was too low in emotional intelligence went to propose to his sister's father in order to prevent the two from getting married, and then killing the senior sister and knocking him off the cliff can also be designed as a miss, well, the reason why the senior brother fell into the devil's path can also be set to see him die in front of his eyes so he had a nervous breakdown, and finally he killed the senior brother and thought that he had successfully avenged himself, but in fact, it was the senior brother who deliberately let him make a move, just to die in his hands and achieve his heroic status。 ”

Du Ziyuan said the general meaning of that paragraph in one breath: "That's pretty much it, you can fill in the details yourself." ”

Tang Junhao held the cappuccino and was already stupid: "Is there still this way of writing?"

That's how it's written. Du Ziyuan raised his head proudly. It's a pity that he is now wrapped in a quilt, looking like a silkworm baby looking up, and there is no majesty to talk about at all.

"I kind of know why you were able to gain merit twice in a row, your monster thinking is really different from ours," Tang Junhao said with sincere emotion, "Teacher Wutong Ye is really pitiful, I can almost imagine how desperate he was at that time." ”

"Fuck off! I'm not a monster. Du Ziyuan rolled his eyes.

Tang Junhao said again: "Boss, your idea is very interesting, but the outline has been set by you, and I don't know if this can be regarded as my own work." ”