Comments I have seen,

Some chapters say that the typos proposed in them have basically been changed.,I didn't change it.,I didn't see it.,I won't delete the comments.,There are good reviews and bad reviews.,If it's deleted, it's estimated to be the official pot.。

Let's talk about the problems that have been commented on a lot,

The first is the problem of too many realms.

Many people reacted too much to the small realm, saying that it would be very procrastinating, but in fact, I set up these small realms themselves to be similar to the progress bar, showing a little progress of the protagonist himself, and a small breakthrough at two ends in three days has passed, and it is not like some early online articles from the initial peak to the middle of the card dozens or hundreds of chapters, like the big realm is extremely difficult to break through, which is not comparable to this.

It's easy to break through, and it doesn't matter how many settings you have, otherwise, just like a certain Lu, the realm will fly to the sky in less than a few days, and then this book is still a fart.

The second is the question of perception,

The protagonist's talent is average, there is no doubt that a genius can master the magic and martial arts after practicing three or four times, and the protagonist may have to practice dozens or hundreds of times before he can get started, and a genius who meditates for an hour may be as efficient as the protagonist practicing for two or three hours.

As for the problem of frequent epiphanies, I actually have a setting for this,

But this is a long story, if you write it all in one chapter and you say that the flood is a disaster, I will explain it later when I find a suitable plot.

In short, the setting of the protagonist is an ordinary person, a mediocre salted fish traverser in the new century.

Finally, there is the issue of statements,

At the beginning, one sentence and one paragraph was to cultivate one's own narrative conciseness, and if you can finish writing one paragraph, don't use three or four paragraphs to irrigate, but many people reacted and looked uncomfortable, so they changed it later.

And as a result, you saw it.

The narrative is not concise,

I used to pour water into the sentence and the plot, and it almost turned out to be a flood, and a fight in the ring gave me four or five chapters, which became a long drag.

Obviously, I wrote about two or three chapters in concise language, and the rhythm was just right for the ring battle that could be written, and in the end, it dragged on to a top-heavy position.

A lot of people talk about water in the back, and it's largely related to the way I changed my writing.

So it doesn't matter,

I'm not writing in RMB, it's impossible for everyone to like it, and then I'll change back to the previous concise narrative.

Of course, there will be some improvements, but the overall style will be changed back to before.

This style itself is actually suitable for the typography of the mobile client.,If you like it, you can continue to support it.,I can't help it if you don't like it.。

That's it.

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