The appropriate emotional and emotional experience is the charm of the online article - commenting on "Yin Si God of War" Mu Longsheng/text

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Type of evaluation: Guidance evaluation

Seeking Works: "Yin Si God of War"

Novel Author: Charm Xiangfan

Synopsis of the novel: Cang Nanzi, the murder star, was suppressed and imprisoned by the devil of hell because of his discord with the God of Wealth. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 info He is the reincarnation of the Heavenly Evil Lone Star, excellent talent, destiny is lonely, but he did not expect his relatives and friends to die in front of his eyes one by one, the pain made him indifferent, the expulsion and enslavement made him numb, in fact, he just wants to live peacefully and protect the people he loves, however, she finally went because of him...... The head of the second cargo said to himself: Lan'er is my cinnabar mole, Xiang'er is my heart's blood, marrying my heart's blood, losing the cinnabar mole, my conscience is condemned; What should I do? Who is in charge of my love? Look, the second master's festival was shattered again, and the starving ghost actually threw him and the woman together?...... As the head of the Carefree Sect, he is determined to change his life against the sky, turn things around, find a life-changing stone, and finally cultivate a generation of war gods...... My life is up to me, he is scumbag, but he has a special skill, he stinks outrageously, but he turns things around, he is as cold as ice but kills invisibly......

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Since it's a guide review, let's start from the roots, you write a novel, and you are standing in the wrong direction before you start...... Wait a minute! sister sister ...... A book written by a girl?

Cough...... I always thought that the little charm who interacted with me was a brother...... In other words, as soon as the plot of the novel unfolded, I was sure that it was a girl!

I know there are a lot of girls who mix with the main station.,But I don't know who has better grades.,Who knows, just tell me?I'm very curious.,I want to go and see what kind of girl can write a good pretending essay?Of course,It's not that non-pretending can't become a masterpiece.,But the writing method that mainly relies on the charm of the plot to win,I don't recommend pursuing.,It's too difficult to go in that direction on the Internet......

In my opinion, unless it is a real female man, the emotional experience that the girl gives to the plot is based on "love", rather than pretending to be cool.

Don't look at "Zhu Xian" for both men and women, that's because the reading experience of the famous book, in addition to the superficial "love", also has a very deep sense of Xianxia, and the taste of pretending to be forced is hidden under the shyness and restraint, which is very in line with the spiritual characteristics of readers in that era...... The sect leader shines brighter than Zhang Xiaofan, joins the Demon Sect and the sect leader to fight against each other, and defeats all enemies with a smile on a mission...... These episodes are still classics today.

I won't talk about the strange books on the Internet, but I want to emphasize that the author's style determines the type of readership. And the emotional experience that the girl gives to the plot, that is, this kind of interpretation around "love", how can readers who pursue the world YY?

I'm also thinking about this question, so let's not draw a conclusion, let's just talk about books.

Ay...... could have been heartily criticized, but in the face of the girl, his heart suddenly softened...... Let me tell you about it.

Let's start with the reader's reading experience.

Glancing at the introduction, the subject of the first sentence is Cangnanzi, and the second sentence is "he...... Looking at the first ten chapters again, it is mainly Cangnanzi's various performances, so much so that at the beginning of my reading, I always regarded Cangnanzi as the protagonist.

It wasn't until the tenth chapter that I understood that the emotional protagonist was the Gongsun Hu (Xiong Hao) who played the soy sauce role I always thought I had!

Sister, let's not write the prequel or wedge as the main text...... In other words,The pursuit of online articles is a "sense of substitution",There is a process of identifying the characters in reading before substitution,I read ten chapters of Cangnanzi,I really think it's a little interesting,The writing is between exquisite and Xiaobaiwen,The expression of the text is very smooth,It looks effortless,It's just a pity that it's not the interpretation of the direction of "substitution and YY...... After the tenth chapter, he couldn't help but "sleep", and finally felt a sense of identity with Cangnanzi, so he turned around and went to work behind the scenes.

I haven't counted it, but I think that the readers who can stay in the "first three chapters of gold" have lost at least one-third of them so far, and if you sign a contract, the editor will definitely let you change the beginning.

Then, Gongsun Hu's little brother began a very aggrieved "slave career", I can't help but start looking forward to you This is a slow-burning book, these plots are all "gathering momentum", and the tiger will definitely be able to raise his eyebrows later!

Seeing Huzi and An Tianji's "fighting poems" to decide the "destination" of the heroine (Zimo, a girl and Huzi, are born in life and death, no matter how you look at it, they are both one of the heroines), my eyes lit up...... And then it darkened again...... Winning is winning, and I didn't step on people and slap me in the face......

In chapter twenty-seven, the heroine died, and I finally sighed...... Although you left two foreshadowings, the first is the one-third wisp of divine consciousness that Cangnanzi put on Yang Zimo at the beginning, if you don't mention it in chapter 30, I have forgotten it; the second is chapter 29, the voice in the air, responding to Huzi's wish to exchange Zimo's life at any price, but I believe that your few readers will lose most of it in chapter 28.

When the slave was aggrieved all the way, his sweetheart was whipped to death by his master...... Are you sure this book is refreshing for readers?

The heroine is killed or humiliated, this is a minefield that almost all online writers have to avoid, and if it is not handled well, it will lose readers, even if it is a great god.

I know that your Zimo is not dead, but you did not give readers "hope" in the plot at that time.

Xiao Mei, I can read between the lines that your current life makes you unconsciously depressed, and deep down you desire to break the barriers and get the freedom you want...... And the "world" you imagined can only partially compensate for the lack of your soul, but it is not a qualified online novel.

How to say, in such an online novel, you can feel some kind of "satisfaction" when writing, but this kind of emotional experience basically does not meet the needs of most readers.

What kind of experience is what most readers want, you can imagine this feeling:

Our country has never won a gold medal in the Olympic Games, and you finally became the world champion of this year, you stand on the podium, watching those spectators cheer thunderously, and you know, after going back, countless TV stations will invite you to the show, the praise and honor in the media are overwhelming, countless merchants with a lot of money want to find you to endorse, the first love drank too much and sent a circle of friends, regretted breaking up with you, and knew you of the opposite sex, more than ten drank too much every day, crying "I love you!" downstairs in your house! Please give me a chance......" You closed the curtains and smiled, "Annoying...... That's not all, at the same time, you have superpowers, and you easily cured the stubborn disease that has tormented your mother for many years, and at the same time, you won the lottery jackpot and directly paid off the huge debt owed by your father to treat your mother's illness...... That's not all, the state has asked you to be the leader of the sports world, and now the jersey you wear is in the museum...... You go out into the street, and everyone who knows you has gifts and wants your children to worship you as a teacher...... Before you are done, God has informed the whole world that you are His spokesman in the world, and leaders all over the world often invite you to banquets with respect, and the presidents of the big conglomerates bow down when they see you, and the people of the opposite sex are desperately trying to promise you when they see you, and the gold and silver treasures are automatically thrown into your arms as if they are spiritual...... Emma, my imagination is still too weak to write a novel.

In short, the five turbid evil worlds and the sea of suffering are boundless, and everyone's subconscious represses countless pains from childhood to adulthood, and these painful messages often break through our psychological defenses, making us emotionally irritable, inexplicably lost and even emotionally out of control...... Even if you are mentally strong, the information that breaks through your mental defenses will become a nerve signal, a twitch somewhere......

And online novels can just compensate or soothe painful memories blocked by psychological defenses.

In Maslow's pyramid of psychological needs, most people stop at the level of "need to be respected", and the "self-realization" of life is something that only a very small number of people can do, and these people don't have time to read online novels...... Therefore, pretending to be forced, this kind of "being respected" to the extreme, has become the direction pursued by male frequency online novels.

As for girls' novels, what other "pretending to be forced" can compare to the awesomeness of "Mary Sue"? And the psychological characteristics of women determine that the satisfaction of "love" is the first need of life. Therefore, all women's novels throughout the ages have taken "true love" as the first priority.

Having said all this, it is to solve the fundamental question you have when writing a novel: what kind of emotional experience should the plot give?

If this problem is not solved, the novel you write will not be on the right track.

In fact, the four elements of online texts, plot, characters, writing, and updates, the last one completely depends on hard work and dedication, so we won't talk about it. As far as writing is concerned, your writing is more than enough to write a novel.

Your character is also well shaped, very vivid, it can be said that it jumps on the paper, and the personality is also very distinct, who will perform in what kind of environment, you should be able to judge. The downside is that the bad guys aren't bad enough. This is the natural shortcoming of most girl writers, and they always think too well of others...... The bad guys are not bad enough, and cleaning them up is not enough to "get angry" and not happy enough!

Your second boss An Dahai, as well as the big young man An Tianji, you have to make them so bad that readers can gnash their teeth, so that readers can raise the reading expectation of the protagonist to take revenge as soon as possible, and this expectation is one of the driving forces for chasing reading.

Online texts are not traditional novels, don't want to "have both good and evil" and "entanglement of human nature", just a "cool", how to vent emotions.

Finally, the key points for your writing: how to design the plot and how to arrange the rhythm.

30,000 words for a small climax, 100,000 words for a big climax, you should have heard this. The so-called climax is not the tension and intensity of the plot, but the completion of the interpretation of the "cool point".

Cool, if you write the main station, it can even be regarded as a perfect expression of "one-time pretence". You'd better mark this on the outline.

All the plot design is to allow the protagonist to pretend to be successful, and the more powerful he is, the better. All means of pretending to be forced must be used to the extreme.

Just like Bai Xiaochun in "One Thought of Eternity", he did what others couldn't do, the process was very cool, but it wasn't over, and in the end, Bai Xiaochun always had a cool expression in front of people, "With a full look on his face, his sleeves flicked, and the lonely figure slowly walked into the distance", and continued to use "performance" to inspire the emotions of onlookers: Tianjiao is Tianjiao, this is the posture that Tianjiao should have!

And this gesture was deliberately pretended by Bai Xiaochun, just to make others worship. Got it? Think about that again.

There must be exciting content at the beginning, and it is best to have a sense of suspense. You can use flashbacks to take out a section of the first big climax and put it over, and then at the key "node", the protagonist begins to recall......

Or, start with the special features of the protagonist, the more innovative golden finger, etc., just like the Douluo Continent of the three great gods of the Tang Dynasty, the master of the secret weapon of the Tang Sect has crossed, how can the secret weapon be carried forward? The reader will be interested in continuing to understand.

It's okay to use the special features of the protagonist, such as the catty god's Chosen Heaven, the boundary of the world, a divine dragon can't hold back the desire to devour a baby, and the breath on the baby's body makes the dragon unable to calm down......! What kind of legend will this baby create in the future?

There is also the need to write a wedge with plenty of pressure to let the reader know how you feel about reading this book...... That's what the god likes to do.

Actually, it's okay to have a bland beginning, but you'd better write a sense of suspense or crisis in the first three chapters, and with your smooth writing, you will definitely attract readers to read it.

Within 30,000 words, the golden finger has to play a role, first let the protagonist or the protagonist's team be suppressed and humiliated, and the reader knows that the protagonist has the ability to counterattack and slap his face, and he will naturally have expectations, you have to gather more momentum, let the suppressed emotions fully brew, and then you can explode.

It's best to open a hang for the protagonist within 10,000 words, most of the readers of the fantasy fairy tale are Xiaobai, to be a small nouveau riche, and accumulate a "sense of identity" by the way, so that readers look forward to the protagonist starting to "pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger", after all, it has just begun, and the protagonist is not suitable for too publicity.

It's best to have the heroine within 20,000 words.,Let the heroine ignore the protagonist at first.,Because I don't understand.,But the heroine's trouble is coming.,The heroine doesn't know.,But the reader already knows.,And this trouble.,The people around the heroine can only be solved by the protagonist...... I don't need to say more about the rest.

This is a short-term foreshadowing, the first 30,000 words of pretending to be cool, put into this foreshadowing, and readers will follow to see the content behind. As for whether this foreshadowing is a big climax of 100,000 words, it doesn't matter, it's okay or not, anyway, you can't finish writing a plot and then start the next bridge, that's called a running account, the plot must be one ring after another, the last trouble has not been solved, the next trouble has begun, you just need to write the logic clearly, and the reading is effortless.

The core attraction of the plot is the conflict, the more intense the better, to reach the level of jaw-dropping, it is called "the prototype of God".

Whether the "young god" can grow up depends on your own efforts!

A good girl is charming, Xiangfan can't hold your glory...... Come on!