Lifting lightly and lifting lightly: the language of the camera lens misused by Tanhua (Four Talks on Tanhua Novels)

Author: Tiandao Xiao Hua

[Keywords: lifting lightly, lifting weights lightly, exploring the flower body, cultivating the gods, the only monk on the earth, literary style, camera language, pushing, pulling, shaking and throwing]

[Content summary: Lifting weights if light and lightweight, many people use to describe the great man Deng Gong and Zhou Gong's style of doing things, lifting weights as light, from the Qing Dynasty Zhao Yi "Oubei Poems, Su Dongpo Poems", is to say that Su Dongpo is reckless to make the qi insight and discussion extraordinary, and now means that the ability is strong and capable of doing easy and heavy work; Combined with some chapters of Tanhua novels, with the pushing, pulling, panning and throwing of the camera, four talk about Tanhua novels. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info]

Linking the character of Tanhua with the style of Tanhua's novels, it seems to be the initiative of Xuanqing Daoyou, Xuanqing Daoyou's article "No longer repeatedly criticized, just looking forward to bringing forth the new", article by thread, insightful and thought-provoking, it is really a rare good article, and Xuanqing Daoyou's praise for me, in addition to shame and fear, I wrote this text "Xuanqing Daoyou's big theory, high theory, The emperor's great theory, the wonderful rhetoric, the smooth reasoning, the analysis to the bone; to read the Su Zi Mei Zuo Han book under the wine, and the line and the song and praise, a big white is not enough; depending on its praise, fluttering, happy, dancing and eyebrows flying, like a Lingyun Fu is not a lie and !!", too many praises, no need to repeat, too many others think that we praise each other, and it has nothing to do with this article.

First, the style of the Tanhua style: the rumbling heavy tank crushes everything or the pushing, pulling, panning and throwing of the camera lens

Tanhua's almost airtight and rigorous style, in my personal opinion, is like a heavy tank, rumbling and galloping, crushing everything, in addition to bringing you shock, but also bringing a lot of smoke and interference. Taking the first chapter of "The Only Monk on Earth" "The Unyielding Xu Zhi" as an example (Tanhua has buried a lot of holes in this chapter), from the perspective of literary narrative techniques, we can flashback, interpolation, side narration, and narrative, for example, I can start with "Alas, how should I explain to her" (the "she" here is a foreshadowing, which is Liao Yurong that Xu Zhi will see in school in the future), and then describe the environment in which Xu Zhi is located; or you can also write "Ni Mei, don't, I Tang Tang Tian Punishment Divine Spear Weapon Spirit Don't Enter a Stinky Man's Body" I believe that if it is written like this, the first two chapters of "The Only Monk on Earth", "The Unyielding Xu Zhi" and "The Wonderful Instrument Spirit", can be written in a thousand words, so that the rhythm of the novel will be accelerated; The narrative of Tanhua is like a shot in a movie, first a long shot, the camera is slowly pulled back, and then pushed to Xu Zhi, and a close-up, after the close-up, the camera is full of panning, Xu Zhi's environment: persimmon forest, purple nameless wildflowers, sunset, dusk, the dog's cooking smoke, the fragrance of food in the air, etc., a long scroll of life pictures is displayed in front of the reader, Xu Zhi's psychological activities, Xu Zhi's personality, etc.

Second, the shortcomings of the style of exploring flowers

The shortcomings of the style of Tanhua style, many people have already said, and I don't want to repeat it. Let's just say one point: Tanhua's style is too dense, too much like a heavy tank, and there are too many [pushing, pulling, panning and even flicking in the camera lens], so that although it can show the whole picture of the novel from multiple angles and all-round, it is easy to lose the secret. I remember the previous Song Huizong painting temple exam questions: Tanhua is like a person who will not be opportunistic in the exam questions, using that kind of delicate fine brush painting to build a majestic temple gate. To capture the high-arched buildings of the eaves and cliffs, to depict the ancient trees of the forest; in this way, although the whole canvas is beautiful, but it is too solid and too detailed, and lacks the charm of Chinese literati painting; it is far inferior to the smart man in the examination questions at that time, and there is a monk in a white monk's robe carrying water in the mountain stream of the spring water; this metaphor may be disrespectful to Tanhua, but in my opinion, Tanhua may be a good director, but definitely not a good text editor; and Tanhua is not familiar with it, some people call Tanhua a director, maybe Tanhua is deeply influenced by his identity as a director, and uses the lens language in the movie to interpret the novel, the kind of movie that can bring impact and perception in an instant when facing the human eye, in the narrative skills of the novel, is somewhat differentiated-let's sum it up, Tanhua just wants to present its own novel world in all aspects: this is a wall, this is a tree, there are mountains and rivers in the distance, and as everyone knows, the narrative of the novel should be detailed and appropriate, it should be concise and concise, and it should be brushed aside, so that there will be layers and subjects, and the novel will have a distinct personality!

3. The self-redemption of Tanhua

When it comes to Tanhua's self-redemption, it's actually a bit exaggerated. If Tanhua writes his own novels alone, he doesn't care about monthly passes, he doesn't care about support and recommendations, all of this is light and light; after all, the public's ability to appreciate it is there, with that kind of mental state of reading books without seeking much understanding, Tanhua's novels are not suitable for him, some people say that reading books is someone else's ideological storyline that is active in the playground of their heads, and this part of the readers, forgive me for being disrespectful and arrogant - The playground in his head has never been exercised at all (an old friend in the book review area of Xiushen Gaiden, don't sit in the right seat, I'm just talking about some people who appreciate the novel). In fact, the redemption of Tanhua is very simple: it is to learn to lift weights like light, rather than simply lifting weights; as long as Tanhua is good at switching and cruising freely between the two, Tanhua, literary literacy, writing skills, unparalleled imagination, and perseverance for seven years are not lacking, and Tanhua will naturally be more successful!