[First of all, I'm sorry, I'm sorry for Beihe, I'm sorry for not being able to meet Beihe's expectations for me. 】

Time flies, and the book is finished so quickly (albeit unfinished...... To be honest, I don't even know that I only saw myself, but now I go back and think about it, it's inevitable.

Let's summarize the shortcomings of this book first.

(1) The outline is incomplete, the detailed outline is incomplete, which leads to a large-scale collapse of the plot, and when it is written, even the author himself doesn't know what he is doing, and he faces blank WPS every day, to be honest, this is a torture.

(2) The character portrayal is not vivid, for the writer above this kind of plot, the character is indeed very stiff and lifeless.

(3) The sentence is not concise and clear, the central theme is not prominent, and so on......

Let's talk about improvements later.

The next book decided to release the book on September 1st.,Of course,The outline and the like will be done this month.,When the time comes,I believe that with this book as a foundation.,I saw a lot of books that I saw would look a lot better.,I hope you will support it.。

In the end, I still feel sorry for the audience, and I'm sorry to disappoint you.

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