A tube of jade flute flies and flowers fall, and three sing flat tides and clouds - cat words
The fairy road is unprovoked, and the light dust is blowing in the blue sky,
A tube of jade flute flies and falls, and three sing flat tides and clouds.
——Guan Pingchao's Immortal Road Smoke and Dust, Road Encounter Immortals, Cat Words(2006.07.06)
"Talking about the Smoke and Dust of the Immortal Road of the Flat Tide" Cat Words
Brilliant gemstones, sparkling and shining, are loved by people, but before they have been carefully crafted by the hands of craftsmen, the gemstone is just an inconspicuous stone, and not many people will look at it too much.
And every touching story is also like an unpolished gemstone rough, only relying on the creators, to the heart's content, waving into Chinese characters, just like polishing the rough into a sparkling gemstone, this shows some fascinating characteristics, and will attract countless people to follow.
The elegant and refined Xianlu smoke and dust is one of the fascinating stories, ambiguous and containing light, which is my evaluation of Xianlu smoke and dust.
Actually, at the beginning, I was not optimistic about the smoke and dust of the fairy road, although the rhetoric seems to be quite elegant and considerable, but many people are also not bad, and I always feel that there is something in this book that is not tasteful enough, like looking at flowers in the fog, like fishing for the moon in the water, the plot in the book is dragged and fragmented, warm like an old cow trailer, there are many paragraphs of description, there is always a feeling that people can't get an itch.
This makes me feel anxious and angry when I read it, and I think to myself, squandering and wasting such good materials, old man! If not, it is better to stop and change people as soon as possible, than to mistake countless people in the future!
Fortunately, Guan Pingchao didn't hear what I thought in my heart, and still insisted on writing down the fairy road all the way.
I don't know if it was on that day, I re-read this book, and suddenly realized in my heart that this book was originally a book that I couldn't wait for, whether it was for the author, or for the text, there may be green and tender places in the previous text, but after the washing experience of time, it has slowly condensed into the sweetness and mellow richness of the later text.
And the author grasps the proportion of the text, and with the accumulation of the number of words, he slowly turns the axe chisel that was still a little bit like the beginning into the meaning of the text, and gradually disappears.
To be honest, whenever I saw the name Guan Pingchao in those days, I was really annoyed in my heart!
Yes, I am jealous of this man, because he reminds me like a thorn in the flesh, you have always been proud to swim in the heart of the text and carve dragons, how can you forget this most important heart of words?
Yes, people who are indiscriminately charming and have perennial spinning in words are more likely to fall into the word barrier, and they beat geese all year round, and they actually let this goose peck their eyes!
Skills but the ear, love the text of the people as long as read more or write for a long time, will naturally appreciate a lot of suitable for their own writing skills, this is just used to confuse people's hearts, and more importantly, is the heart of the words of the indescribable emotion, the important thing is to try to the heart of the thoughts, written into a paragraph of text, that is the most touching text!
Even if the deep meaning hidden in the words is difficult to express, the intention is beyond words, and it is all unspoken, it may not be possible to do it for a while, but a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, and only by working hard can there be a time when God comes to a stroke!
I've known these things for a long time, but I also have a day when I am embarrassed?
The old man slammed the stick on my head hard, and my eyes were full of gold stars and anger!
I thought viciously in my heart, hum! Mountains and rivers meet, there will be a long road ahead, you and I will always meet one day, old man! Don't fall into my hands, at that time, you can call, even if you scream and cut your throat, no one will save you......!
Although I was a little jealous of him, I still had to admit that as the plot of Xianlu Yanchen gradually unfolded, this book made me slowly intoxicated, intoxicated by the story of Zhang Xingyan in the book, an interesting teenager, a newcomer on the road.
Speaking of which, Zhang Xingyan in the smoke and dust of the fairy road is not like a cultivator in the traditional sense, who draws on the understanding and cultivation of heaven and humanity.
Zhang Xingyan wanders leisurely between the fairy dust, one foot in the bureau, one foot outside the bureau, joy and sorrow but turn at will, not restrained, vaguely seems to let people see an optimistic young man who pursues the belief of "I am fortunate to have lost my life", he laughed with a little joyful intimacy, inadvertently, but there is an indescribable posture out of the dust, he is Zhang Xingyan.
I've always had the illusion that the book Fairy Road Smoke and Dust doesn't seem to be a work of this era. Zhang Xingyan in the fairy road always reminds me of reading Li Ruzhen's Mirror Flower Yuan when I was a child, Tang Ao who mistakenly met the fairy of flowers and traveled to the wild mountains overseas, and similarly, Zhang Xingyan is also a teenager who met the fairy by mistake.
Yes, whether the old manager did it intentionally or by chance, I think the most wonderful, inexhaustible, and endless infinite taste in the whole book of Xianlu Yanchen is all written in this unwritten word "mistaken encounter", these two words meet the protagonist Zhang Xingyan, just like the finishing touch, so that the soul of the whole book comes to life.
And several heroines in the article, Ling Yier, Qiong Wei, Ju Ying, Xue Yi, Rui Niang...... and others, from time to time, it also makes me feel a little like facing the illusion of a hundred flowers and women in the mirror flower yuan, the Qing Dynasty novel with the most influence and the most talented name outside the Dream of Red Mansions, Mirror Flower Yuan, but in fact these are two completely different stories.
Sometimes, reading and reading the fairy road and watching the interaction between Zhang Xingyan and each heroine, I will think of another strange novel of the Qing Dynasty, Mr. Wen Tie's children's heroic biography, which is sometimes delicate and graceful about the private feelings of children, and sometimes ups and downs of social time and space, as if jumping on the paper between the lines, silently turning into a world.
When I read Liu Yi's biography when I was a child, I always liked Liu Yi's chivalrous willfulness, liked the dare to love and hate the dragon girl of Dongting, and also had the idea of rewriting Liu Yi's biography in Taiping Guangji.
But after watching the interaction between Zhang Xingyan and Lingyi'er, I couldn't help but feel stunned, although the characters in Liu Yi's biography and the second book of Xianlu are not the same, but that bit of aura has been obtained by others, which really makes me feel a lot of loss in my heart, and I sigh emptyly!
To this day, I still have to complain that reading the book Xianlu Yanchen brings people too little reading pleasure!
That awakening words are not happy enough to be resentful, and the emotions of several women around me are too blind, and the unbearable thoughts in my heart jump out from time to time and shout, that Sister Qiong Wei is about to eat her, that Lingyi'er is about to eat her, Princess Juying is about to eat her, and Xueyi Fairy is about to eat her, old man, you are too hateful!
And the theme of this book is vague, and it lacks a clear and clear main axis, and even if there is, the flavor is too light, but what can I say?
The tonal style of this book is not necessarily as I hoped, and I always let him write his own self-contained and comfortable story; I hate that his description is too thin and plain, but he relies on the continuity of the front and back to accumulate a series of beautiful scenery; I don't like that he writes too poorly on the way to the avenue, but he has opened another path to the heavens with the leisurely aftertaste of tea, and has opened another path to the heavens, what can I say?
I hate this book, it's a thorn in my flesh, but I love to read it, it's a treasure in my eyes.
As I write this, I have to shout, "It's... Kill me!"
First, I have to read the fairy road smoke and dust again, and second, the book of fairy road smoke and dust makes me love and hate, love its freehand timelessness, hate it why it is not from my hand!
——Cat Yan, written on 2006.07.27
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Guan Pingchao's postscript:
After reading this, I can't help but flutter - "Thanks" Brother Maoyan! I have gained a lot of encouragement and motivation, and I can continue to write according to my original intention in the tide of online articles!
Of course, the real fluttering is to wait until you have worked hard to write the whole book before relaxing. Now I still try my best to insist on updating in addition to intense scientific research.
Thank you again for your patience and tolerance!:)
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