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This book can be said to be very rebellious, in today's time when the whole network and the whole society are emerging decadent and impetuous, I found Xianlu This book, at first it was very bland, but for a person who is struggling in a decadent and impetuous society, it is undoubtedly not a good medicine. The Chinese martial arts that impressed me the most belong to the works of Fairy Sword, Swordsman, and Xuanyuan. Because these works all reveal a bland atmosphere, like the rain in autumn, the disgust in people's hearts is swayed.
Along the way, the berry moss saw clogs.
The white clouds are still quiet, and the grass is closed.
Look at the pine color through the rain, and follow the mountain to the water source.
Creek flowers and Zen, relatively forgetful.
——A Thousand Years of Silence, September 28, 2006
The lord of Huanzhu Mansion created a precedent for Xiuzhen novels, and since the popularity of the ethereal journey, it has made Xiuzhen novels really a theme that Chinese people love to accept in recent years, but because the ethereal setting is so perfect, the authors who followed the trend to write this theme have become lazy, and many of them have completely inherited its setting or changed slightly, so many plots will be guessed. can really break through, among these many works, only "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" does the best, Guan Pingchao Guan Da uses delicate brushwork, fresh atmosphere to describe the growth process of the teenager Zhang Xingyan in detail, and successfully shapes the kind of astringent love between teenagers and girls. In terms of magic and fighting, it is precisely because of Guan Da's profound knowledge and rigorous attitude that it becomes natural, and there will be no abrupt feeling, such a fresh work, there is no other Xiuzhen novels in the shell of Xiuzhen to kill people into a river, greedy into sex, running around and adventuring treasure hunting...........
The characters of "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" are portrayed very profoundly, paying more attention to the hearts of the characters, and there is a sense of existence and full image of describing the female characters that are lacking in the ethereal nature, and the Chinese in the work is rich in literary atmosphere...........
As a non-professional writer, Guan Da can write such a good work, which is really amazing, but because he is not a professional writer, he can slowly conceive the entire layout, describe the plot delicately, and there will be no worries about urging the draft, and the plot will be rampage. Today's so-called professional writers care too much about the speed of progress, fast update does not mean that the written text is good, the elements of the novel, whether it is from a few centuries ago to the present twenty-first century, will not change, can attract people's novels, can make people want to read it, and even can make readers have endless memories of novels are good novels. ——Wuyin, 2006-9-27
When I read the first chapter of this book for the first time, it seems to have returned to the touching poems of the first experience of the fairy sword, the beautiful poems and moving plots in the book, and I experienced the touching of my youth in a trance under the classical pen of Guan Da - Confucian in white, 2006-9-27
A masterpiece that must be read in immortal cultivation novels. The book is beautifully written, the style is fresh, the characters are distinct and full, and the dialogue is witty and humorous, but not frivolous. There are many simple and good people in the book, but there are very few vicious and violent people, who are wicked people, and they are also evilly straightforward and ridiculous. This book praises all the good emotions of human beings, advocates the mind of fraternity, and for all the ugly, it uses the hands of the protagonist to destroy the withering and decaying. Reading this book, I deeply feel the beauty of human nature, the beauty of human feelings, the beauty of the world, and the heart is bright and happy, which is really a must-read for the pleasure and cultivation of nature. ——Qianshanqiao, 2006-9-22
"Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" is the best Xianxia novel I have seen on the Internet. At present, in many YY works, female characters become the protagonist's lover without any feelings, which makes people feel bored. In addition, the classical culture of this book is very strong, it can be seen that the author's ancient literary skills are very good, coupled with the style of writing is simple and unpretentious, the writing is elegant and handsome, with ordinary plots to write extraordinary stories, with extraordinary stories to write free and easy people, savoring, it makes the mood slightly shocked. - Dragon Ball 2, 2006-9-19
After reading this novel, it seems that there is a gust of fresh wind blowing in the face, without a trace of fireworks in the world, and like a clear spring flowing into the heart, the author's style of writing is pure and dusty, the pen is flowing with clouds and water, writing extraordinary stories with ordinary plots, writing people who are free and easy to come out of the world with extraordinary stories, and even writing love that is as strong as wine, it is as indifferent as water, but savoring it carefully, but it makes the heart slightly shocked. The author has a certain amount of research in classical literature, and the poems that appear in the text are basically created by the author himself, which is elegant and beautiful, and has won my heart. ——Green Smoke, 2006-9-18
Reading this book is like drinking tea, it seems to be a trivial matter, taste it carefully, but it feels so real, so sweet! The feeling of the breeze and the moon is pleasant, but the heroic tenderness is hidden in it, I have always thought that if the fairy sword game is written into a novel, it should also be like this. It doesn't matter to me how fast or slow I am updated, I have read it again and again, and I can find surprises every time! Every detail of the author's description touches my heart and makes me resonate——Dreamstar1/Storm Pig,2006-9-28
The author's writing is unquestionable, especially the description of the scenery, sometimes quiet and hazy, like ink landscapes, sometimes gorgeous and full of aura, like ink and heavy color. Follow Zhang Xingyan to wander in the lake and mountains, or the blessed land, or the people in the market, accompanied by two or three confidants, this is the real fairy road. The character portrayal is also very successful, not to mention several protagonists, the best thing is that even the villain has its understandable side, which makes it difficult for people to really resent it, so there is almost no plot that can make people have negative emotions, there are really only two words that can be described: comfortable —— heart of the doll, 2006-9-16
Xianlu is the most Chinese-style Xianxia novel I have read among so many Xianxia. If Piao Miao is a glass of spirit, then Xianlu is a cup of fragrant tea. There is no accumulation of blood and fire, only the ordinary and extraordinary search for the fairy road, and the good writing, the readable plot, and the vivid characters are indeed a rare masterpiece in the Xianxia novel. I can't guess the author's original intention of writing the fairy road. —N light years, 2006-9-16
Guan Dada's book is fresh and elegant, relaxed and witty, and it is really a must-have book for home travel and killing! The characters in the book are all vivid, the alertness and calmness of the awakening, the calmness of Xueyi, the liveliness of Qiong Wei, the gentleness and affection of the dragon girl, the nobility and ease of Juying, and the old-fashioned game world...... The story in the book is ordinary but not bland, just like the title of the book, the little people on the way to cultivate immortals, the slight smoke, and the mood are really rare and good books—— laughing fish, 006-9-16
A volume of immortal dust and half a world
Full of affection to Jun Xuan
Several ups and downs of smoke and haze dreams
The water is in the heart of the sky and the moon is in the boat
———— tube flat tide
This book is unparalleled in the classical Xianxia works at the starting point, and Zhu Xian can be said to represent two factions respectively, the author's ancient literary skills are profound, and more importantly, there is a quiet heart to write a book, in the starting point YY, stallions, the tide of hegemony, to be able to calm down, with the beautiful Ming and Qing dynasties to form a mixed novel language, write an authentic Chinese Xianxia story, express the feelings of classical Xianxia romanticism, which is difficult to see since the return of the pearl building. In contrast, most of the Xianxia novels at the starting point actually copy the traditional martial arts, fighting, killing and killing, without the spirit of an immortal, I really don't know what immortals and what hearts to cultivate. Cultivation is not self-cultivation, but actually self-cultivation. The so-called inheritance of heaven and earth, the distinction of the six qis, in order to swim in infinity, the body is like a breeze with floating clouds, and the heart is like a bright moon shining on the river, which can be regarded as the meaning of the Tao. ——sffan,2006-9-29
This book doesn't work, it's not good, it's classic, it's great to find such a fresh and comfortable book in the impetuous utilitarianism, sometimes shrewd and sometimes clumsy teenagers, innocent and lively when they make amazing words, the cute elf Qiong Wei, a girl with a thousand charms and thousands of charms, with affection and veins without being explicit, not pretentious. Looking at the beautiful description of the dreamlike everywhere, this is really in line with the imaginary way of seeking immortals, tired of seeing what the knot Dan Yuan Ying opened up what the cultivation of the true battle, a fairy road smoke and dust, let us see a different fairy road, the heart of the yearning. ——Yun Xueshuang, 2006-9-29
In the Xianxia novels I have read, the main line almost all focus on improving the strength of the protagonist, and there are many wonderful works, but I always feel that there is something less~~~ Only this > I didn't feel any good when I first read it, but after a long time, I felt like drinking tea, and there was a taste lingering in my heart~~~ It ~~~~~~~~~~~~was like a clear spring, delicate and compelling, and I was contented
In the past two days of waiting for Yanda (Yanyu Jiangnan) to update, I looked at the smoke and dust of the fairy road that took care of Pingchao. While reading this book, I happened to listen to the song "I like you", and when I was wonderful, a wave of youthful feelings suddenly grew. Proud of the world, traveling in the world, not seeking fame and fortune, flowing through the ages, only seeking to grow up with the children of beautiful women, sharing weal and woe, or joy, or anger, or sadness, or sorrow, or fear, or thinking, or suffering, this is exactly the lack of youthful love and lack of Chinese spirit in my generation by the prosperous material of the world. I don't know how many men and women yearn for foreign countries and study abroad, but they don't know that they have lost the thousand-year-old soul of China. I hope that this heartfelt remark can give Yanda some inspiration in the meaning of the article. Hehe, the nonsense is still looking forward to the smoke to forgive me—— indifferent notes are quiet[2006-07-2017:16]
It's been 3 years since I read this book in the blink of an eye, and I'm an old reader. Xianlu saw that it was now the end, and he was a little lonely while being happy. I'm glad that I can finally see the ending, and I'm lonely that a good novel is over again, and I know that a good novel is hard to come by. I look at the fairy road like a tea faint and very warm, and this is the life I yearn for in my mind, I am a very low demand person, I want to fight with the world, but the cruel reality has pushed me in front of the can't help but fight, this aspect is very envious of the awakening, so it is only in this book to yy. ——cracker2004,2007-10-1
Ah, some time ago in Thailand, the Mid-Autumn Festival was also spent there...... Didn't catch up.,I just listened to the drama today.,I see that everyone likes Xianlu so much I don't know why I'm very happy.,It's probably a sense of identity.,From the beginning, not many people watched me and I have been recommending it everywhere.,Until some friends around me told me directly:It's too hard to understand.。 For those of them who grew up abroad...... It is understandable that Xianlu became more and more famous later, and more and more people agreed with it, so they just felt happy. I've always had a dream, hoping that one day Xianlu can become a TV series, a movie, a game or something, such a good book, it can't be wasted. In a few weeks, I will be able to return to China in ten days after going to Thailand, I hope I can stay in China in the future, I feel that I still have to go back after so many years abroad, and I will slowly boil it abroad by yourself, hahaha.
Gossip aside, discussing foreshadowing, the eldest prince Boyu sings the poem of ambition in a small stone tune, which is naturally a metaphor for himself to just lie down and taste his courage, specializing in underground activities, and preparing for the big plan, right?
Isn't Qiong Wei's identity about to be revealed...... I'm a little scared...... Although the big foreshadowing buried from the beginning made me toss and turn for N years, it also proves that the ending is almost the same as soon as this foreshadowing is revealed. A little scared and a little expectant, inexplicable mood. ——The Source of Reason, 2007-10-23
This chapter is well written, and it has the feeling of watching a scene from the Lord of the Rings war. I have to say that the awakening is really getting stronger and stronger——wsxmbb123,2007-9-24
The male protagonist has a natural temperament. I like the situation where the male protagonist and the animal get along with the adult description.。 Nowadays, the novels of cultivating immortals have countless magic weapons, endless beauties, and bloody violence, how can such an article be connected with the immortal family and the sacred nature? But I always remember that there is such a fresh article in Xiuxian's article. ——Red Sunset, June 1, 2007
After reading every chapter of "Fairy Road", every time I cover the volume, savor it for a long time, I am especially grateful for the author's timeless and fresh writing, as if I am reading a piece of prose, every word is beautiful, every sentence is splendid, I am pregnant in October, I gave birth once, and I am still lingering for three days. Words know each other with flesh and blood, and hugging each other without saying a word has disappeared. "Fairy Road" all the way down, such as walking with clouds and flowing water, where the line starts, when it should stop, delicate places such as "willow shore dawn wind and waning moon", rough places such as "the east of the river", love to the depths of the soul haunting dreams, righteousness to the extreme makes people deaf and deaf, the author's skills have reached the realm of free retraction, throughput and abundance, opening a precedent for a genre of fantasy novels, adding the "official history" color to the cause of fantasy novels, and its contribution can not be calculated. The writer is extremely hard, Lu Yao closed the door for several years to write "The Ordinary World", talent, diligence, experience, profound literary and philosophical skills, especially ancient Chinese literature, all are indispensable. In my opinion, in terms of the writing of fantasy novels, "Fairy Road" has firmly ranked first. Commenting on the courage of the wind.
Again, Rufeng likes Qiong Wei very much, alas, when did she give birth to such a cutie, it's really not good, and it is okay to find such an innocent wife. There are women like this, and there are wives like this, and they don't live their lives in vain. ——Lonely Grass, May 18, 2007
Feelings are two-way! Although three wives and four concubines sound very beautiful, they are also very desirable to men who are not determined. But what kind of attitude are these three wives and four concubines? Everyone has their own zhan desires. No one wants to share the sacredness of their hearts with others.
There are other things in life besides feelings, and no matter how beautiful a woman is, she will go down the altar in life!
As long as it's not sad, a little regretful life is not more evocative!
I suddenly remembered a very classic sentence from Zhang Ailing in "Red Roses and White Roses": Maybe every man has had two such women, at least two of them, married to red roses, and over time, the red ones became a smear of mosquito blood on the wall, and the white ones were still "bright moonlight in front of the bed"; ——Red Sunset, June 1, 2007
I also don't agree with the tragedy theory that CandyTELbox said.,But the landlord is just a family to talk about.,The landlord is just talking about his own thoughts.,Of course, I guess I understand the idea of a bachelor.,I'm afraid that Guan Da will make the fairy road to a tragic ending because of the landlord's thoughts.,In fact, bachelors don't need to worry about it.,Guan capitalization books have always been a matter of course.,Not involved by others.,I only say a few words about the landlord's post.,Xianlu is a fairy road.,Zhu Xian is Zhu Xian.,Guan Da is a big man.,Everyone's writing style is different.,The novel is not the same.,You can't suggest what this book should be because you like what you like.,That's too subjective. ,It's not good to cover the whole idea.,Hey~ I'm not quite right.,In short, my idea is.,If you really like this book.,Then you just read it quietly.,If the author writes on the upper line of the text there are any mistakes that can be corrected.。 But the character of the protagonist in the book, the overall style of the book and the like are not mentioned~~ People who like to see the fairy road prefer the fresh and elegant style of the fairy road, if the protagonist is full of crazy character, it is difficult to imagine that the fairy road can still maintain this freshness~~ or that sentence, the fairy road is just the fairy road~~ The sea of clouds is shaking, 2007-5-28
A person has a style, and a book has a soul, which is closely related to people's life experience and temperament. To break through, to be comprehensive is of course very good, when it is usually very difficult, often draw a tiger into an anti-dog, and finally make the end of the four dislikes. We are because of the magnificent and ethereal fairy of the fairy road classical fairy and pleasant, for the complete happiness of children's love, although we know that such a beautiful fairyland is the edge of the wood to seek fish, so that the real love is mostly a mirage, but still happy to do it, because in a YY unique, in the gloomy and obscure optimistic light, is the reason for the existence of the fairy road. If he was the protagonist of "a teenager who combines chivalry, madness, and tyranny", I am afraid that most of the fans of Xianlu and I would have abandoned it long ago!
On the issue of feelings,As far as the heart is concerned,I still appreciate the landlord's "single-mindedness",It shows that he is still a person in my generation who hates YY,Praise one first! But then again,The specific problem should be analyzed specifically,Wake up and the love and love of each heroine is the nature of love,It can be said that it is a matter of course,It is incomparable with the big money******,Don't mix it up。
The so-called love is deep and responsible, I can fully understand the sincerity and sincerity of the landlord in the line of the fairy road, but the tall, big, all of them are taboo, both arrogant and uninhibited and peaceful and humble, such a person is to have a split nerve, ^_^ and the landlord does not want to be such a person. Let's let our wake-up words come from the lightness of Horseshoe Mountain, and then return to the vast blue waves of the South China Sea. Maybe this is very bland, but is this really bland, in the hustle and bustle of the real city, how many people can be such a real "ordinary person"? This is also the only requirement for me, one of the earliest readers of Xianlu. ——Night Rain, 2007-5-24
Offering an ugly review of the book: This book has seen it now, vaguely self-righteous and feels a little bit of experience, just talk nonsense, this book I think in the story structure and characters are not as big as the wild fox trilogy, gorgeous, but it is also a style of its own, plain and magical, because the ability of the gods and monsters is set low, so that the ability of the characters is not too outrageous, exaggerated, so that the reader feels that the distance between man and God is not far away, and it is impossible to cultivate himself into an immortal, which I think is very good, and then a little protagonist I think it is very chivalrous, atmospheric, Confucian, and there is no king eight gas, when I always feel that he should also have madness, also crazy and chivalrous true hero~! So far, I've seen the Xianxia class for the wild fox of the wild trilogy than Brother Guan's fairy road slightly better, his protagonist is chivalrous, mad, tyrannical combination of teenagers, but in fact, he really beats you is not this, but with the same sad breath as the immortals, I think good things can not only focus on the perfect ending, sometimes destruction is also a kind of beauty, the book of the wild fox has always given people a gloomy and gloomy beauty, always put people in the wilderness with lewd rain, I think this is just in line with the melancholy plot of the ancient Chinese literati chivalry, reality is always not linked to the ideal, the hierarchy is strict, the ruling class is cold and hypocritical, greedy and brutal, always make this social structure of people have a yin side, which also constitutes the ancient "Confucianism to the law of law, chivalry to martial arts" said, in short, I think once the brother Guan wrote love is too perfect, then your book will be a little dull, I think love does not have to be two people always entangled together to make people profound, on the contrary, this falls into the cliché, but it is not necessarily for the death of the beloved, in short, how to handle the two properly, create new ideas, just look at the writing of the brother ~ right ~Brother Guan must have seen Feng Ge's masterpiece Kunlun?I think you are worth learning from, especially at the end, which is very intriguing~ Okay, the fallacy of the little brother is here for the time being, right or not, everyone will take a look at it~
In short, Xianlu is a book that I have read more impressively, in the flood of fast food literature now, it is a bright light, so that the reader's eyes shine, it is like a cool official, ruthlessly whipping those low-level, tasteless to read, harmful to read the next three bad literature, it is like the fragrance of plum on a snowy night, so that people's spirits are shocked, and the fragrance is lingering for a long time. In short, don't worry too much, it's a good book, a good book worth reading~!I just hope it can be more perfect, it can be more innovative, it can make more people know it, remember it, learn from it is not plagiarism, just hope that Brother Guan can understand something from other people's works that he doesn't have, and then combine his own ideas to break through the shackles of secular common sense, and create a new style, a new ending~——CandyTELbox, 2007-5-22
Yun Han is misty and nine heavens, it is better to smile and be proud of the red dust. May you not be a concubine, and you are willing not to envy the immortals for the mandarin ducks. - Playing the piano indiscriminately, only for entertainment.
Once the spring wind and rain were thick, the roots of yin and yang were wrong, the heart was empty, and there was always death and life before the battle - everyone should not forget the dragon girl who used her body to relieve the poison of her words~~~
It's hard for her.
The little jade girl went down to the Yaotai, stepped on the vermilion bird clouds, and the cardamom was delicate and simple, and she was often the most loved by her brother. - Little Qiong Wei for me.
——Little Critic, published on 2007-4-20
Rui Niang, a name that has been mentioned again, a story that has been shelved and forgotten in the corner.
What is love?
Even in the ancient society shaped by Guan Da and with a little romantic color, the sorrow of being a woman is still revealed everywhere in such a society.
Love is a luxury, not only for women in ancient times, but also in modern times, let alone a woman in a green house, although she is very good.
Does an infatuated woman have the right and freedom to choose in the face of her own feelings?
Rui Niang is a wishful dream of giving her life to herself.
——Bloody Forgetfulness, April 27, 2007
Lao Guan's books are quite good, and many of the descriptions of ordinary life are more attractive.
Plain is true, from the content to the description, to the development of the storyline, it can be seen that Lao Guan's book is becoming more and more mature, and has distanced himself from ordinary Internet writers. It is no longer the so-called fast food literature, it is worth savoring.
I hope that the old man will work hard and write better words.
Resolutely support the old management !!
——The Princes of the Beacon Theatre, May 10, 2007
Several degrees of autumn frost leaves are sparse
Back then, I still remember the beginning of the fall
The front of the door is like the heart of the city, like water
Only three years of tears
There are a lot of tear-jerking places in the book, but I have a deep memory of the text of this poem and a lot of emotion.
Maybe a quiet death is the best ending for Rui Niang, because she is just one of the thousands of poor people in the world.Guan Da didn't give her any hope of life, she didn't have it herself, and Zhang Xingyan wouldn't give it to her.Although she is just an insignificant little supporting role, maybe no one remembers that there was such a character before reading it.But she is indeed the one who makes me the most sentimental, I admire her, she is a woman who sacrifices everything for love, although this is not a real love.I also hate her, I hate why she died for such a man who is not worth entrusting at all, for a man who is not worthy of her at allShe is just a poor woman, a poor woman who has not seen the light, a poor woman who has no hope and no attachment to life.
Although I know that life is meant to have both happiness and sorrow, and although I know that I shouldn't be too sad about those sad things, because at least I still have dreams and hopes for the living, I still can't help but cry quietly......
Incoherent, don't blame, don't blame
——Zhong Miao, 2007-4-16
What is Flat Tide?
Have you ever seen a flat tide, quietly rising in the quiet lake, gently knocking on the chaotic shore?
Plain and beautiful, lonely and beautiful.
When you reach the level, you can see the tide rise.
——Original * night, reply to "theresa_try", 2007-4-23
"Brother, Qiong Wei every year, only when she eats this night, she will cry her nose~"
Every time I see this good sentence, I can't help but feel nostalgic. Pingchao's words are plain and simple, but they are as touching and warm. Like the moon, I don't know it, but I feel chaotic and irrepressible. Such as smoke and dust, the real fairy road classics. Reading it, it is like a drizzle in the dog days, and then like a warm spring sun in winter.
A song of flat tide moves the heart,
Discipline life and death.
——theresa_try,2007-3-28
Those who write wonderful texts can either send good wine or supplement good medicine. Pingchao Xian Road, you can be with Jiaming!
I have heard people mention this book for a long time, and I have to read it today, and it is really ancient. Half a day's leisure, a pot of tea, three books, I still read a little faster. Many poems and wonderful sentences have not been read carefully, and I plan to return to them.
I don't know why I remember it so clearly after reading it? Brother Guan is very hard-working.
The allusion of "there are words in the clouds" in Liaozhai has changed a little more in this book, and I only remembered it after reading it for a long time. This book is written and quoted, and it is very skillful. It's too rare to find such an impetuous place as the starting point.
The inclusion of "Yi" and "Xuan" in Taoism in the book is a little debatable. Of course, it doesn't really matter, maybe it's more interesting. The novel is written for modern people, and the history of "Weixue" has long been submerged. I still admire the author's literary talent.
Before I finished reading it, I didn't dare to talk about good books anymore. ——Xu Gongzi Shengzhi, 2007-4-8
Qiong Wei has always been my favorite character, I have always been afraid that one day she and Xingyan will not see each other, I know in my heart that her origin is not simple, and I am even more afraid that one day she will become that indifferent goddess with boundless powers, forget her brother, forget everything that has been. I'd rather she always be that confused, gluttonous and playful little sister, alas. ——Little Critic, April 1, 2007
In a dream for three years——— I remember Ying'er alone
No poems, no words, no titles.
The loneliest, the most pitiful person is the one who is most easily neglected.
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Two locks of hanging hair, childishness has not been taken off, it is a little maid in this Huayue Building, Ying'er
"I'm sorry! Did you hurt it?"
Xingyan asked with concern as she squatted down to help her pick up the copper coin.
"What's nothing~ Huh, isn't this the little brother of the Zhang family? Your flute plays very well!"
The little girl who was rubbing herself in the sore spot saw the face of the perpetrator clearly.
"It's a prize! By the way, why are you in such a hurry to walk?"
Xingyan felt a little strange when he saw the little girl so popular.
"I'm going to buy melon and fruit candied fruit for Sister Rui! If I'm late, I'm afraid I'll be scolded by the officials in her room again. ”
The little girl obviously had a good impression of the fair-eyed young man in front of her, so she had something to say.
"Then you can go quickly!"
Xingyan didn't talk to her much, so as not to delay her errands.
"Well, little brother Zhang, I'm leaving...... Little brother doesn't know my name yet, right? My name is Ying'erli~"
Watching the little girl's bouncing figure disappear, Xingyan also walked back to the room.
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When Xingyan opened the door, he saw that it was not a familiar little guy, but the Ying'er who had just "bumped" into him in the afternoon. The little maid was now looking at him with a grin.
"Ho, who am I talking about~ It turned out to be Ying'er. It's time to eat, right?"
The boy didn't know what this little girl was doing when she came to find him.
"Well, it's time to eat. I didn't come to you for this. I just heard great news to tell you, but I waited until you didn't come to dinner, so I came here to find you!"
Looking at Ying'er's impatient expression, it seems that there is really something good.
"Oh? What's the news?"
Then the hungry boy muttered in a low voice:
"Uh~ What's the good news besides the meal......"
"That's great news! And it has a lot to do with you!"
Seeing that the young man seemed to be lacking in interest, Ying'er hurriedly poured beans into a bamboo tube and told Xingyan the news he had just heard, like a treasure:
"When Fang Ying'er was handing out the wine outside, I heard the officials who came to drink the flower wine say that the emperor has exempted the mountain people in the suburbs of Raozhou from money and food for three years! The will has just arrived in Raozhou City this afternoon, and the notice has not yet had time to post it!"
"Wow!
The sober words at first hearing the good news were ecstatic:
"Little sister Ying'er, thank you for coming to tell me!"
In a good mood, the awakening words are a little unscrupulous, and even my sister is called!
"Well, Ying'er didn't lie to you!"
Seeing Xingyan's happy appearance, this little girl was also infected and smiled. However, when she came, she muttered in a low voice:
"People are not small!"
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The lively little girl beside Rui Niang in Huayue Building can be described as a sounding board for awakening words. Although he is plain and doesn't pay much attention to the short and long ones in Huayue Building, he knows everything in detail, no matter what it is, he knows everything in his chest!
All of this has to be attributed to this little girl Ying'er - as soon as there is something in this Huayue Building, this Ying'er with excessive curiosity must be inquiring in many ways, and after that, he will definitely be the first to come to find the awakening words and share what he has gained!
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And Ying'er, the lively and talkative little girl before, was ordered by Rui Niang to bring him a fruit plate for the old man, and met again, but she was already silent and shy. The little girl who was originally short in size has now become a big girl.
In a few words of dialogue, it can be seen that Ying'er is still quite affectionate for her old happiness. It's just that I don't know if the boy has become handsome now. The temperament is mellow, or the two girls around him are in the dust, when Ying'er and Xingyan are answering. Depressed and short of breath. Quite cramped. Seeing that she was cramped, she said a few words of relief with good eyes, and then said no more.
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Whether it is Juying, the princess of Allure who dreams of the Six Realms, the fresh and elegant Dragon Girl of the Four Blasphemy, the cold plum fairy with clear eyes and cold eyes of Bing Jieyuan, the pear blossom with rain and fragrance, Xiying, Zhang Qiongtong, and Sword Spirit, they all have the hope of entangling mian under Zhang Xingyan's Luo Sha tent in that troubled world, but Ying'er does not.
In ancient times, the women of the teaching workshop had to pick up customers at the latest when they were 14 years old, and they had to be good in their twenties, and it was not difficult to see Ying'er's mind about Xingyan between the lines.
The author is too stingy, he gives hope to all the women who love to be sober, but he doesn't give Ying'er, why?
Because she doesn't have the beauty of Allure!
Because she doesn't have the strength to be strong!
Because she doesn't have a strong backup group!
Because everyone is ignoring her!
Her experience is so similar to that year's awakening, now it is quite heavy, she has no opportunity to wake up, but full of the sad thoughts of awakening, every time she laments her humble background in her heart, who can say that Ying'er does not?
Guan Chaoping gave the lazy boy endless opportunities, the red face of the city, but he was stingy with the happiness of a little girl, no one redeemed her, and she could only fall into the dust in the end.
Look at Rui Niang! If you don't read carefully, you will find the pity of the Qinglou woman.
I don't dare to ask for a wake-up call, I just want fate to give this little woman a little happiness in a wave, just like that Li Xiaomei, marry a good person. ——Wind Color, March 18, 2007
Watching "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" has a feeling of playing fairy sword, especially when I see Xue Yi blocking the sword for Xingyan, I always think of the scene when Caiyi turned medicine into medicine and flew away. "How many degrees of frost can spring flowers, who is lonely in the autumn moon, infatuated if you meet true affection, fluttering butterflies and red makeup. "And" the light frost posture is faint, and the plum wind dances beautifully. A hundred years of floating dreams are snow, and a little fairy tears become flowers. "How similar, there is a feeling of wanting to cry...... - Purple Shadow, 2007-3-1
In order to deal with the remaining big floating cities in the South China Sea, the four desecrated dragon clans tried their best to get it, and then woke up to the power of the Big Dipper, which said that the floating city must have a city in the sky.......
The first city in the sky, 'Demon Qi Chongtian City', is a relic of the ancient demon clan, the king of ten thousand demons, the demon qi has been gathered and suppressed for nearly a thousand years, and it is called the demon qi of Qingcheng, and then it was obtained by the awakening and was renamed: 'Night Qi Chongtian City', the lord of the Big Dipper.
'Flying dragon in the heavenly city', the legend is the dragon ancestor of the incarnation, soaring in the sky, the existing thousand golden dragons protect the city, hidden like the dragon to see the head but not the tail, no one can confirm the existence of such a city, after being obtained by the dragon Lingqi, give a wake-up word, found that there seems to be something else, seems to be built for the ancient water god Gonggong.
Yama City's 'ghost spirit forest', originally the supreme place of the ghost clan, was pressed in the eighteenth layer of hell because of too much resentment, and then borrowed the power of the Big Dipper Tianxuan, broke and then stood up, pulled out of the city, and became the highest place in the sky city.
'Baiyun City', originally built by the human race supreme Baiyun City Lord Ye Gucheng poured millions of people's strength, thousands of zhang high, square hundred miles, known as the city in the city, the city is full of white clouds, the aura is sufficient.
'Ice City', originally one of the eight floating cities in the South China Sea, after no Zhi Qi was killed, the Ice City was captured, as one of the trophies of the awakening, with the help of the power of the Beidou Yuheng, floated into the sky, because this city is all made of thousands of years of ice, its own weight is very much, so it only rises half, from the land, or hidden or appear, the ice crystals are white, from south to north, into an elephant, so the awakening is renamed: 'Ice Throne City'
'Sea Temple', the southern demon clan dedicated, want to be in the awakening to get a good knot, get the awakening to create a city in the sky, will sink in the demon submarine an unknown temple to give the awakening transformation, the awakening transformation found that this temple is not owned by my Middle Earth, there is the ancient Greek "sea god" two words, by the Beidou Yuheng lift-off, the day of liftoff, the vocal music fluttering, Jin Xia to the west, there are **** winged men and women around the singing.
"Shangqing Peak", the elders of the Shangqing Palace believe that whether it is victory or defeat, after this battle, Shangqing will not be allowed in the world, rather than so, it is better to pick the Zhongling Shenxiu in the Shangqing Peaks, create the Qingqi place, self-contained, and wake up for it. Beidou shakes the light of the Lord, and the Shangqing Son lives in it.
'Vulcan Shrine' , the most mysterious city in the sky, the only one can not live in the sky city, come and go, one moment in the south, the next time in the north of the sea, pondering can not be through, as a gift from a god with a strange personality, directly accepted it.——Childish baby, 2007-3-19
【Yi Xueyi】
In an instant, the ice broke, and a wisp of plum essence fell.
Snow face frost ice is made of bones, and it has its own gentleman's spirit in flowers.
It is difficult to hide the color of the heavens, and the wine and the moon dance under the delicate dill.
Even if the fragrance returns, the soul is also on the king's side.
For Xue Yi, it is difficult not to have a good impression of her, and her body is full of a kind of temperament that belongs to traditional Chinese women.
She is the plum essence created by heaven and earth, she has a crystal clear heart, the gloomy appearance of the flower moon, and the most rare fact is the gentle temperament of Lan Xinhui.
So she let go of thousands of years of freedom, put on a jingchai cloth skirt, leaving only a faint figure, with an indifferent smile, hidden affection, accompanied by the young man.
Such a woman who makes people feel pity has always been unwilling to believe that she will lose her fragrance. How could she be willing to let her son go. Therefore, even if the palm of the dragon god is still like a deep sleep, because of the feeling in the dark, her soul should still be tied to the young man's side because of the thick longing.
I always feel that the woman in plain clothes, one day, will be smiling as always, faintly fluttering, calling that voice, the long-lost "son~" - sister-in-law Wuyu 2007-1-24
This is the end of a big war? The four desecrations have the upper hand, how should the foreshadowing of Fan Chuan, the god of the waves of the South China Sea, be used? How should the matter of Xiying be solved? How should Xue Yi deal with it? Meng Zhang and the old dragon of Chi Gang are still alive, and if the four desecrations want to put Bo Yu on the throne, will they get their wish? Will the candle ghost side make a move, and will the ghost king have anything to do with them? How will the four desecrations and the South China Sea deal with it?
This is all a matter in front of us, farther away, what will happen to Ju Ying's side? How will Xingyan deal with it? With Xingyan's current strength, a divine light can fall from the sky, and in the blink of an eye, Bai Shijun will all be wiped out, but if it is dealt with like this, it will inevitably be too shocking, how do you want to arrange it? How to solve the affairs of the demon clan, and the good thinking of the heavenly demon and the addition of Ying Confusion are enough to give people a headache. There are also Qiong Wei and Yaoguang Ancient Sword, Mom, they are all related to the ancient immortal gods, how can they be handled reasonably? And that Lan Caihe is even more terrible, will Zhang Guolao, Lu Dongbin, He Xiangu, and Uncle Cao Guo all come out after a while? !
Guan Da, you have dug too many pits, too deep, and it is even more difficult to fill them up than Qiong Wei to make up enough for three wives and four concubines!!—— No. 007 passerby, 2-11
I like the fairy road.,It has nothing to do with whether it's the first book of cultivating immortals.,Like is like.,There's no need for any reason.,Although I can name many reasons.,But now I find out.,There's no need for that at all.。
It is in the Tianshan Mountain, the heart and blood flickered, pinched the fingers and calculated, it was the day when the hall master opened the altar was approaching, and he couldn't help but be overjoyed, and he drove the clouds to go.
Near Luofu, the mountain fog is ethereal, the crane traces into the clouds, and Panasonic suspects someone. It seems to be fun, but it is not heard.
According to the head of the clouds, the jasper road has traced, how to be as prosperous as in the past, the heart is panicked, step on the thousand bird cliff, the cold house is still the same, the green moss is the same, only the silence is everywhere, and the insects are like a piano. In the big circle, I saw three or four friends scattered on the pine stone, so I inquired about it.
The pine is lonely and green, the wind is around, someone stands under it, and it is very happy, just my friend Lu Lizai, walking quickly in front of it, and saying after the ceremony: "Where is the gentleman?"
Answer: "Bring beauty to Fusang and watch the lanterns." ”
I was furious: "Abandoning the responsibility of education and ignoring it, admiring everything in the world is not the right way." ”
Li Qian smiled and said: "The Tao is still free, go with your heart, how can it be said that it is a misguided way." ”
I said, "So, what can we do?"
He said: "The avenue is like the sky, and the heart is ideal." The preaching of the hall master is clear to its true fruit, not a guide to the ear, there are thousands of people, there are thousands of hearts, how can they go all the way. ”
I sigh, this truth has no harmony, want to leave and he goes, suddenly heard the sound of chanting, its initial tactful, after the Qing Yue, and then agitated, strange, follow the sound of the step, wear a forest, see a pavilion, there is a woman, is singing the book, regard its long hair fluttering, Tsing Yi Suluo, eyebrows into the sideburns, autumn water sorrowful, stepped forward to salute, said: "I am the son of the Sihai Hall, dare to ask the name of the Taoist friend." ”
The woman said: "I came from the sea, guess the road number, the sage does not need to be polite." ”
Looking at his books and poems, I asked differently: "Why do Taoist friends recite poetry books and abandon the classics?"
Guess: "The people of the world are busy, and they want to abandon the inheritance of their clans, and they hate what they have learned from other countries, so they often chant loudly, showing that the soul of the people has not been lost." ”
I didn't like it, and said secretly: "This is not a good friend, the path of poetry and books, and forget the moral golden pill, and you can't talk about it." ”
While I was thinking, I heard the voices calling each other, but it was Hoshino who came to me, rushed to me, and went away, I asked in surprise: "Why is this so?"
Hoshino said: "I smell that the hall master is anxious in Fusang, so I want to go with my brother." ”
I said: "The hall master is wonderful, the situation is scorched, how can we do it." ”
Hoshino said: "It's not to make my brother understand, it's actually because my brother is old and alone, and he wants to get something." ”
Embarrassed, he said angrily: "How do you know if I am self-conscious!" Celibacy:
Sick in the east fence but haggard,
What is the place of frivolous lovesickness.
The lonely lamp is waiting to leak the jade in the book,
Ice geese over the mountain.
Xiao Lang dreams of fireworks all day long,
The sea is a small life.
Mo Dao's original intention of birth and extinction,
Always alone and drunk at night.
- Armored cavalry, 2-10
I used to think that novels still have to write blood, write about the love for something/somebody, and be vigorous, but after reading Guan Da's "Fairy Road", I found that the plainness that always seems to be out of reach in my heart can also be intoxicating and lingering. If the fairy sword and Xuanyuan sword give me shock and sorrow, then what the fairy road gives me is like a gurgling stream in the mountains, plain, stretching, clear, and endless. . . A good work can make people feel like their hearts are itchy, they always want to write something, read Xianlu, it seems to have this feeling~ The first time I posted a discussion post, it was a little unnatural to laugh and laugh. ——Tea Picker, 2007-2-5
First of all, the fairy road is definitely the first book of cultivating immortals now.
The author's original purpose in writing this book is probably not for VIP, not for publication, otherwise the story will not be so natural, there is almost no place for dragging, such as a trickling stream, coming from the tail.
This is also the reason why Xianlu compares other immortal cultivation books.
Guan Da's writing is very good, although many words are repeated repeatedly, but the book with more than 100 W words will inevitably have such a situation, and the fresh tone has almost become an insurmountable peak for other immortal books.
I only hope that Guan Da can make persistent efforts and have better works to be published for readers.
In addition, I like the poems that Guan Da inserted in the book or obtained elsewhere or created by himself.——Mu Mu Yunshuang, 2007-1-28
When I finished watching "Fairy Road", God asked me: What did "Fairy Road" leave you before you died?
I closed my eyes and thought for a long time, and told God: tears!
I have to say that "Fairy Road" is a pinnacle work, not to mention how deep the author's writing attainments are, I can only say that when I read "Fairy Road", I feel that I am having this sweet dream, such a natural dream, which makes people forget to return, but after reading it, the dream is shattered......!
I can only say, thank God! Let me read "Fairy Road", complain to God! Let me read "Fairy Road"—— Prince Xuan 2007-2-1
I have been paying attention to Xianlu for almost a year, and Guan Da's book exudes a breath of freshness and a breath of fairy. Zhang Xingyan, Ju Ying, Lingyi, Qiong Wei, all vivid, remember that when learning Chinese and talking about novels, the characters are the center of the novel. Xianlu is not as stiff as today's online novels, hey, the gap between professional and non-professional is really not small~ I wish Xianlu better and better, and the starting point is better and better, thanks to CCTV, MTV, thanks to the organizers, thanks to my parents...... - ACEsoft, 2007-1-20
One of the highlights of Xianlu smoke and dust is Guan Da's fresh and beautiful writing, revealing a strong classical charm, and the free and elegant plot of the novel reveals the casualness of being born and re-entering the world; another highlight is the portrayal of the characters, Zhang Xingyan's growth and that kind of usually lazy, and the character of being responsible at critical moments is vividly displayed in the author's pen, especially Qiong Tong's lively and lovely jumping out of the paper, which makes people happy to read.
Personally, classical Xianxia literary works should first have some classical charm, and there is no doubt that the excellence of Xianlu is undoubted, and I look forward to Guan Da writing more and more exciting. Dust in the flow - 2007-1-8
In this world of materialism, conscience, and affection, how difficult it is to protect the pure land in the heart, just as the so-called love in the world is hard to say, and it is difficult to say if there is no fate; who knows the final result of coming and going?
After reading this book, I felt that everyone laughed, and it was a pastime after dinner.
Finally, I wish Guan Dahe MM a good moon:
The wind blows the clouds and the sky does not move,
The water pushes the boat to move to the shore,
The knife cuts the lotus root silk constantly,
The mountains and rivers are inseparable.
Again:
Good and evil will be rewarded,
Blessings and misfortunes naturally have heavenly principles,
Marriage piles are like threads,
Everything is quiet and self-reliant.
- Read the fairy road again on a rainy night.
- Night Walker, January 5, 2007
I have to say that the author is very successful in creating characters, when I first saw the protagonist and Ju Ying Lingyi's two daughters meet, I couldn't help but think of some ignorant feelings when I was young, and then I fell in love with this cute child when I saw the little fox fairy Qiongwei. It's gratifying to see that there are still many chapters behind here.,Savor it.。。。
After saying something good, some of the poems in the author's text are really good, but it is inevitable that they are also a little clichéd, like a flaw on a beautiful jade. For example, the author of the word Lanzhou has used it in 3 poems, some of the predecessors said it well, the same elegant sentence is used at one time, 2, 3, 4, and then it is. I'm nitpicking. I wish the author a higher level of poetry. ——Alone in the Arms, December 29, 2006
I think that immortals are nothing more than an ancient meaning, and the chivalrous to Jin Yong will eventually return to human nature. Let's try to interpret the Xianxia novel "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" from these two perspectives
Immortal:
To quote the original words of a certain tube: "I learned some local humor in Journey to the West, Chinese romance in Liaozhai, vivid character creation in the sunny sky, and the basic process of classical novels in three words and two beats." ”
Not only these, but from the lines of Xianlu, we can find the author's familiarity and recreation of classical poetry, his understanding of "Geographical Chronicles" and "Classic of Mountains and Seas", his clever quotation of folk legends, and his interpretation of "Tao" and "Virtue".
However, it is how a novel full of antiquity has gained a firm foothold in the impetuous commercial website of the starting point. The reason for this is because "Xianlu" also does its best to take care of the tastes of today's readers.
Man:
First of all, YY's routine.,The story of the fairy road is in the protagonist and the women all the way through the way.。 The female horn has a princess, a dragon girl, a little girl (note: loli), Mei Ling, a witch, a sea god and a sword spirit, which makes people like falling flowers and dizzying, which can be described as extremely powerful.
The second is the humanized character building. The protagonist is unrestrained and compassionate by nature, just like a cheerful young man at home, approachable. Although Ju Ying is a princess, her personality is like a girl with excellent character and learning in life, gentle and beautiful. Xue Yi is a gentle plum blossom fairy, and her virtuous personality embodies the beauty of a traditional woman. Although Qiong Wei is a young girl, she has not been "discriminated against", she is innocent and cute, and she is the most agile note in the fairy road. The dragon girl of Dongting Lingyi is delicate and heroic. These little men and women who have grown up under the careful care of the author have become not just characters in books, but have become projections of real life in novels. The reason why Jin Yong can transcend the way of technical attack is probably this reason.
Another point is that it cleverly borrows the characters, environment and artistic conception of the "Fairy Sword" game. The game of Sword and Fairy has a wide audience, and borrowing from it increases the potential readership of the novel.
Finally, there is a fresh and bright style, whether they are used to the depression of "Zhu Xian" or disgusted with the unrestrained YY, readers need mental relief. The fairy road looks comforting, and this is a kind of targeted "countercurrent".
Of course, because the bland plot and slow style of writing do not meet the taste of most online readers, Xianlu can only be said to be surviving in the cracks. However, considering its concern for real life and its deep connection with traditional culture, from the perspective of the long-term market, it is still uncertain who will win or lose. —Ear Eater, 11.29
The fairy road has come to the present, it is the author's efforts, everyone's love, and the word of mouth among friends......
Among the many online works, I love Xianlu alone, a little heartbeat, a little anticipation......
Thank you for the friend who recommended Xianlu to me, although we used to be colleagues and have little contact now, Xianlu is still there, in my life, because of my perseverance, it has become an unstoppable habit.
Wake up, in the past, a sunny boy, who did not lament the life of poverty, ran around for a living, and did not feel bitter at all, but now all kinds of adventures and his own efforts have created his outstanding achievements, it is rare to have a normal heart, a compassionate heart, and it is not strange to like such a boy.
Ju Ying, golden branches and jade leaves, flowers and moon appearance, these are all appearances, we know that what everyone loves is a girl, it may be a teenager, a very good study in the class, a beautiful girl in the heart of a silhouette......
Lingyi, the author must love her very much, love her in every way, this dragon girl, keeps appearing, and keeps appearing in everyone's sight. Even if it's inconvenient to appear, you have to let Xingyan see her image, similar to a video phone, although it is a dragon, but the little girl has a lot of things on her mind. Now she is stuck in a triangle, which is not what she wants.
Xue Yi and Qiong Wei, two extremes, although I like both, but I prefer Qiong Wei, after all, I am a new mother, I hope that my family's Xiaole is as cute and lively as Qiong Wei, and every evil turns into good fortune, until Xue Yi was written "dead" by the author with a sharp pen, I didn't know the weight of Xue Yi, a gentle woman, in my mind. It is a kind of silent persistence, it is faith, it is the potential energy brewed in the bottom of my heart by unspeakable feelings, and it is the purity that goes deep into the bone marrow, only to find that liking her is a door that has never been opened in my heart, she is there, I don't know.
Confused, savage girlfriend?
Xiying: Having been hurt so much, how can she soothe her heart? Can it be a help on the road to success? Or can it become a thread of emotional entanglement? I have a lot of emotion, but I don't know the direction of the future.
I like very much the author's "grass ash line, stretching for thousands of miles" kind of rather atmospheric foreshadowing, two years ago, when the fairy road first moved, I had this feeling, my heart is quite itchy, what happened to the future? What is the fate of the little boy later, will the development of some of the little people in it be forgotten by the author? I am still worried about it.
A little suggestion: Some of the little people who appeared in the front still let them appear one after another in the later development, echoing before and after,
Let's also have a well-structured, exquisite, and timeless beautiful text similar to Dream of Red Mansions.
Okay?—— Bloody Forgetfulness, 11.24
Open the bookshelf and browse through many works that I used to like, and there is a trace of sentimentality for no reason. Among the many old loves, not all of them can be as calm and calm as Xianlu, and never regret going all the way, most of them are the author's accumulated hard work and illness, and they end up gloomily; or follow the trend and change their original intentions; there are even more anticlimactic and snake tails, and they end in a hurry; of course, the most are disheartened and obliterated. The ups and downs of the sea of books on the Internet are painstaking efforts and enthusiasm, and perhaps there is a little pride and joy that the words are recognized. However, the effort is not always proportional to the gain, the irony of unscrupulous readers, the urgent urging of the pump, the anxiety and loss caused by the fluctuation of the point push ranking, all of which are mixed into an invisible pressure that erodes the original creative heart. I also had the urge to write, but thinking of such a pressure and ending, my ultra-low psychological quality and limited writing skills were difficult to deal with, so I stopped thinking about it.
However, I still want to say from the standpoint of a reader, I hope that every author can write happily, live a healthy life, do not change themselves to cater to readers, and do not give up the whole forest of their ideals because of a little push.
Each book is an outpouring of the author's heart. The peaceful and upright, like the endless qi of heaven and earth, is the immortal road of the great management. Being able to write happily and stick to the original intention without regrets is the rarest thing.
Flipping through the bookshelves, I felt this way with each other, so I talked vainly here in Guanda~——Night Rain in Jiangshan, 2006-11-6