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Do self-examination first, and scream ten times in a row to be ashamed. I almost missed a great book. Knowing that "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road" didn't start yesterday, as early as March and April, I roughly turned over this book, and I just remembered the name of Xingyan at that time. I really started reading this book yesterday, due to the problem of broadband, I can't access the Internet these days, and what I see is that I used to download the whole book, although it is only four volumes, but it does make me feel like I can't put it down.

Xianxia books, also read a lot, such as "Ethereal", "Dao Yuan Confucian Immortals", "Zhu Xian" and so on, after reading Ethereal, the second day after getting up forgot the previous day's activities, after reading the Dao Yuan, only said that the ghost rain ghost is also, although some book friends say that he is a paste combination expert rather than a novelist; Xiao Ding and his books, are all recommended by me, in front of people do not hesitate to praise, and for "Zhu Xian" The first half of the obsession (Gaine himself has a problem with his morality, thinking that even if the bitter hatred is as deep as Zhang Xiaofan, he can't find a reason to become a ghost);

I'm a rigid person, even if I read online novels, my attitude is very true, a novel with a stacked plot, no matter how popular you are, I always think it's not good in my heart. Then the very villain complained that it was a reader with low taste, a reader who pursued pleasure, and spoiled our writers. How else could there be so many writers who have sprung up like mushrooms after a rain, and almost all of them have been quietly forgotten?

It's not good, I'm afraid that some of my art criticism is overflowing again, and I have to take it back immediately and return to Brother Guan's immortal path. Although my first time may not be worth a penny, I dare to assure Führer H that such a thousand words, close to relying on the horse to wait for a book review, is still a big girl on a sedan chair, this big girl is still a big girl with yellow flowers, it is by no means a second marriage or bigamy, but an authentic first time. And this impulse to comment happened when I finished reading Xianlu in the middle of the night. I was amazed myself. But I resisted the urge and waited until the day to touch the keyboard.

Reading a book at the starting point, you can make such an analogy, as if the prostitute came to Huayue Tower. There will not be many flower girls like Yurui Yuyun in any green building, so it is precious. Xianlu book, if you are not ashamed of being compared with the Qinglou woman, then it is enough to be the role of Shangrui Niang. However, I look at the attitude in Brother Guan's novels, there are really some beings who are equal, and a bowl of water is even, so I am not too worried about this metaphor causing Brother Guan to be unhappy. There is no class, let's make an analogy, of course, we can follow the principle of "no class", and "analogy and analogy", there is also an analogy in metaphors.

Rui Niang is the best, no matter what, it can be said to be one of the best. Prostitutes have reached the point where they cannot be picky, and their clients, on the other hand, should have good appreciative skills. I like Hou Xibai in Huang Yi's novel, it is because of this gentleman's yearning for beautiful things, his pursuit and love for beautiful women, and his duty to take on the responsibility of protection. Even if the prostitutes can't all be like Hou Xibai, it's not easy to learn from that Hu Gongzi.

I say that the reader's taste is lower and the pursuit of pleasure is no different from today's prostitutes. Eavesdropping on the ancient green building, tasting flowers and moons, tasting wine and music, tasting poems and texts, all kinds of activities rich in artistic characteristics are available. At least in my novels, I rarely see any protagonist who visits the Qinglou purely to vent his physiological hopes. Even if it inevitably involves conquest in the end, it will come out after a long time after the prelude has been fully carried out. I estimate that today's prostitutes and ladies, in addition to the big theme of **** and *, even if there are preludes or episodes, they can't escape the relationship with the theme of "lewd music".

The narrowness of the subject matter, like the shallowness of aesthetics, is hopelessly incurable. Uncontrolled overflow, unconditional indulgence. In the text fast food, it is reflected in the vicious debauchery of the plot and the morbid pursuit of YY. Without giving examples, you can refer to some of the novels on the click list, recommendation list, and collection list.

It's still far away, and once again back to the fairy road.

When I look at Xianlu, the first thing I see is the author's talent, not those poems and verses that make me feel that Brother Guan is indeed talented. The poem itself also has considerable points, but it is not enough to show off, and the difficulty lies in putting it in the plot, not appearing abrupt and unnatural, but showing appropriateness, advancing the plot, and making the novel covered with a layer of poetic feeling, which may be said to be "smoke and dust". This kind of beauty cannot be said, it can only be experienced in the heart. In the words commonly used by martial arts masters and disciples-to understand is to understand, if you don't understand, how to explain, you don't understand after all. The starting point for this is not just Brother Guan, so it is not enough to fully reflect Brother Guan's ability to control and outstanding talent.

The next essay is clear, the language is light and jumpy, and the character of the protagonist is roughly the same, with a kind of naughty and optimistic characteristics. Of course, like Xingyan, he is still a disciple of Old Master Ji, so the elegant Swen is enough to surpass the same kind. Zhu Xian's text and sentences are admired by many book friends, but some people criticize Xiao Da for playing sensationalism, and too much lyrical tone will also cause some adverse reactions on the surface of the skin. But even the most picky reader can't point fingers at Xianlu and find anything wrong with the language and style. If there's anything wrong, it's that there are too many gimmicks in the conversation, don't face the display while eating. Brother Guan has a lot of little wisdom in the handling of small plots and dialogues, and when stacked together, it is a big deal. In addition, whether it is writing scenery or psychological expression, it is just right, the heat is very in place, and he is well versed in the purpose of overreaching.

What I want to say is that Brother Guan has drawn a wide range of references in his novels, whether it is the doctrine of the immortals, the subset of classics and history, or the transformation and application of poetry and songs, all of which have reached a very high level. It's easy to come by, it's natural. This is not an academic paper, people with normal IQ and a little bit of education can refer to the article themselves. All in all, this is not the work of everyone, and it cannot be done. In the novels I read in the past, only a few of Jin Yong's masterpieces can reach this point. Although Huang Shi is also clever, when quoting scriptures, he always has a feeling of being rigid, and he is still suitable to be a master of the plot. I'm not saying that Brother Guan has reached the level of Jin Lao, if Brother Guan sees this article, he can't be upset. However, I dare to say that if Brother Guan can continue to advance at this level and intend to develop, he will not just write an online fast food + literati novel as he himself positioned.

That's it!

Speaking of the novel itself, there are many people to talk about. said that the plot was too procrastinated, and he couldn't enter the fairy road for a long time, so he asked people to wait. What kind of trick is it to just take some daily trivial things to write.

I don't know what kind of mood the book holders are in when they read this book. I remember that Brother Guan himself said that due to the characteristics of the writing and the overall arrangement of this book, it is impossible to become popular. I can't convince myself of this view just yet. But since Brother Guan is so modest, then readers should also know the truth of finding another way. Brother Guan is to create a landscape, as some book friends said, like a clear spring flowing through it, and like a spring breeze on a certain day, and said that it is a wonderful flower outside the XXX style, all in all, everyone agrees with such a point of view, Xianlu is an outlier of the starting point, and it is another model in Xianxia.

That's it, everyone knows Brother Guan's writing intentions and writing ideas, then they know that Brother Guan's long-term writing is creating a faint environment, which makes people intoxicated, and enjoys rare peace in the excessive fighting and bloody online articles. What I want to say is, although it is bland, although it is fresh, try to let the book friends reach the finale, it is still just this faint love, a deep aftertaste.

But I know that with the advancement of the plot, the fairy road will eventually have plot fluctuations, and there will be strange peaks and mountains, but if it is really because of catering to the taste of YY, there is a deviation in the text, even if it is a last resort, I personally can't accept it, just like the harm caused to me in the second half of Zhu Xian.

The success of the character portrayal is probably also a reason why everyone likes it. I'm here to make my own opinion, and to comment on it by dividing it into seven categories, there will always be differences with other book friends, but everyone's starting point is the same, that is, I like Xianlu. Since I only read the part that I downloaded before July (four volumes plus the first two chapters of the fifth volume), and I have read the latest update, I may not be able to comment on some of the brilliant characters that appeared after that.

First class: vivid image, full of three-dimensional sense, amiable and sensible. Representative figures are:

Name: Zhang Xingyan

Reason for selection: The characteristics of the protagonist, everyone has read so much, and they don't think that there is anything wrong with Brother Guan in the portrayal of this young man. Lively, wise, optimistic, and a little naughty, of course, she is also very feminine, and what is even more rare is that this kid talks about people when he sees people, and he talks nonsense when he sees ghosts. When he met the girl's house, he was knowledgeable and courteous, and he talked extraordinary, and in the face of the wicked, he could change his face and pretend to be the big-tailed wolf. With such a distinctive personality, there are two members of the Zhang family, Zhang Xiaofan in the front, and Zhang Xingyan in the back, the feng shui of the ancestral tomb of the Zhang family's family is so wow!

Name: Qinghe

Reason for selection: Another cynical master, I don't know if he was relegated to Raozhou because he drank and burned some treasures. But this person drinks, this person has a good view, this person fights, this person loves money, and this person can get along with the people in the market, which is rare among the masters in the past. He has strengths and weaknesses. For the sake of his spirit of breaking his ribs and not losing his money bag, and his indifference to the Shangqing Palace's construction of the annex on Horseshoe Mountain, plus the fact that the masters will also be beaten, it is enough to be classified as first-class, and put together with the image of Zhou Botong without looking inferior. Don't forget, the opening scene is a conversation between this person and Xingyan, which has made us remember this old and young living treasure.

Name: Wang Daizhu

Reason for selection: There is a way to make money, he is a business-minded elite in the society at that time, although there are not many scenes, but in just a few paragraphs, people have remembered some of the characteristics of this generation of cane brothers. For example, good eloquence, such as good professionalism, such a large paragraph, the customer finally refused, not only is he not angry, but can make a deep self-examination in the corner, reflecting on whether there is a problem with his own rhetoric. In the end, I learned that the customer rejected him, not because he was not eloquent, but because he was not at ease with his body, which produced professional self-esteem, so he became angry and wanted to apologize, but he could still restrain himself well, and he was not suspected of retaliation because he was a ground worm, and his character was not bad. Calling him Uncle (that is, Uncle, should be older than Zhang Laohan) in a sober voice, to do such a job, coupled with the previous bunch of lovely reasons, so it is listed as first-class.

Name: Yun Zhongjun

Reason for selection: Roughly the same as Qinghe, but he seems to be old and confused, and he can calculate Zhang Xing's words before and after the turmoil so clearly, which shows that he is not confused in his heart. Moreover, the jade flute score, which is given by knowing people, can be said to have a discerning eye, which is similar to Qinghe's private delivery of a special version of "Shangqing Jing". Listed as first-class, also due to personal preference.

Second class: quite distinctive, plump image, and likable type.

Name: Qiong Wei

Reason for selection: A little girl that many people like. I don't know where I came from, I live a very confused life, I lack a high degree of outlook on life, who is good to her, and who is she good to a minor girl. is desperate for Xingyan, and it looks pitiful, reminiscent of the story of Wei Xiaobao and Shuang'er, or Chu Chuzhi and Kou Zhong. However, Qiong Wei's own characteristics, such as teasing the homeless man who can't splash the water, and stopping at the door to measure his height are also pitiful.

Name: Mr. Ji

Reason for selection: The relationship with the awakening speech alone, and the act of changing the table words, coupled with the joking words that doubted the sexual orientation of the awakening words, touched the accommodation of this old man, and truly reached the height of education and eclecticism, admiration. In addition, most of the characteristics of Xingyan were learned from his private school, and he was an important mentor for the establishment of Xingyan's personality spirit, which could also increase the weight of the old man.

Name: Sun Liuzhi

Reason for selection: I seem to have seen this person somewhere. By the way, street scoundrels, haven't you seen them? It's not difficult to be a splasher, but it's difficult to be so accurate, so ruthless, and he has the posture of wearing the street. He has a unique vision, only choosing mountain people and rural farmers to start, and his bad character has become a negative classic. The most important thing is that he relies very much on his rogue characteristics, never using the identity of a head worm supplemented by force or anything, just pretending to be a grandson to the end. In the end, when Zhang Xingyan drew his knife, he slipped away so quickly and directly, and it can be regarded as cultivating to the point of perfecting the fire, judging the situation to the point of watching the fire.

Name: Li Xiaomei

Reason for selection: First love, dream object. I know that everyone has an opinion on the choice of this person. But everyone asks themselves in their hearts, your first love, your first clear sexual fantasy object, the target when you are impulsive, have you ever forgotten her name?

The third class: flesh and blood, this is to be treated, and the aesthetic interest type.

Name: Ju Ying

Reason for selection: The daughter of the emperor's old son! It is estimated that she is also one of the heroines, and she is listed as a third-class, but it is because of such a woman who combines beauty, virtue, and tenderness, and many novels will have it. Of course, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger and punishing Lu Gong and Chen Kui changed the future and fate of these two people dramatically, and she also made a lot of efforts, especially changing her lines - how to leave no traces? Throw it to feed the lake god. Compare rhymes, which is quick and wise.

Name: Lingyi'er

Reason for selection: Another beauty, the daughter of the Dragon King. The character is brutal and tender, but the change is a little sudden. Snow flute Lingyi, this name is good, but Shenxue has not been in her hands from the beginning. I can't blow the water dragon and groan, so I have to blow the wind and water to make a discount. Such a beauty can compete with Shi Qingxuan, not as good as Ah Zi and Huang Rong.

Name: Rui Niang

Reason for selection: virgin, Du Shi Niang type. However, the city government is deeper than Shi Niang, and it is a pity to be able to keep filial piety for three years. Bo Xinglang, an infatuated woman since ancient times, is mostly located, and Rui Niang has no very tortuous encounters, just an ordinary and standard victim. It's a pity that he didn't meet a man like Brother Xibai, or a talented man like Du Mu Liuyong, and he was not a talented woman like Shang Xiufang or Xue Tao. Many people applaud this character, but it cannot be denied that such a character is still more than the hero who stands out from the crowd.

Name: Ying'er

Reason for selection: Brother Xingyan won't let you move your spring heart, right? All day long, a woman keeps asking about her identity, won't she be jealous. However, he was willing to send a letter to Xingyan, although he repeatedly verified that it was not a love poem, and finally came up with a sentence "Brother Xingyan, don't bully me for not being illiterate, so you will lie to me", which is really overwhelming. But such a well-behaved and cute girl, who likes to spread the news, and a trumpet-type girl also makes people love and hate.

Fourth class: There are boards and eyes, red flowers and green leaves, and the plot type is promoted.

Name: Lv Gong

The reason for being selected is that the quality is bad, and he likes elegance, and he learns to play a good talk. In the end, he repented, went home to hug his wife, and finally changed his mind and became a local person, which can be regarded as a happy ending. The psychological description is also written in place.

Name: Chen Kui

Reason for selection: A person who was in cahoots with Lu Gong, but had a completely opposite ending, finally died under the quick knife of Lu Gong's subordinates. It can be described as suffocating, unrepentant, and innocent. But when he was taken captive, he knew about it, and promised to use the three pig's heads of the white-clothed monks, and in the end, he could still cash it out, and he no longer pursued the past, which is also a rare bright spot in his character.

Name: Gongzi Hu

Reason for selection: Lustful and lucky, acting on the spot, hateful person. However, the backbone is too bad, and it is still inferior to the officials on whom Du Shi Niang depends. The most hateful thing is eating, drinking, prostituting and gambling, he said that he has all five drugs, but as for gambling, he is a big sheep. took the horse's money, ate the horse's food, slept on the horse's bed, and finally beat a rake, and was able to leave Shangrao alive, which was considered luck.

Name: Ziping Chen

Reason for selection: a serious book, with an eye on the board, it is quite pleasing to the eye, although it is rigid, but it is rare to change a little attitude in the end. Therefore, it was selected.

Fifth class: philistine face, no businessman or traitor, peddler pawn type

Name: Shopkeeper Liu, Zhang Chaofeng, Boss Zhu, Xiaomei and his father are the representatives of the industrial and commercial circles in Raozhou, Aunt Xia is slightly smarter than them, and she can be between the fourth and fifth classes.

Reason for selection: fully embodies the essence of businessmen, although at that time when the commercial status was generally low, this group of people was not shocked, buried in hard work, striving for the top, and single-mindedly pursuing commercial profits. The value of his entrepreneurial spirit and his selfish nature make people understand how the business world is made. Therefore, in today's society, don't be surprised to see these many rich businessmen, look at their predecessors, and you will understand.

Sixth level: self-esteem, no one in the eyes, the same type.

Name: Zhuo Bihua, Yushan Zhenren, Du Zixing, etc. (including two Taoist priests of Jingchen and Jingming)

Reason for selection: Face-painted characters, I can't see their advantages for the time being, only fart, except for their posture and background, they are useless. is even more hypocritical and annoying than Concubine Shi, and Miss Shi at least has some merit. These are purely plastic models, which I find annoying when I see them, and I hope that will change later.

Seventh class: obscurity, inaction, pure dragon type.

Name: Represented by the father and mother, the father and daughter who sell medicinal herbs, and the majority of people who dedicate themselves to the role of the dragon, I will not list them here.

Reason for selection: Guan brother is biased and does not write about them. In fact, these people are always cute, we are like autumn insects in summer, we can't see winter snow. We, the autumn insects, were sacrificed because of the plot and had no chance to touch the cuteness and respectability of the broad masses of the people. Here, the steward should bow and apologize to them.

There are also many flashing characters, and the future is limitless. Such as Hua Piaochen, Ling Chengzi, Zhang Tianshi, General Zong and other characters, I don't know what faces they will appear in the future, so I don't dare to comment on them.

Alas, it took a lot of wordiness to give a general description of the characters in the first four volumes. I forgot about the subject, I'm writing book reviews, not character reviews. That's it, to get back to the point, the characters are always prioritized, the lines are clear, and the outlines are clear, right?

Xianlu is extraordinarily chic because of these lovely characters. It is not yet clear that there are a few novels at the starting point, and even the supporting characters can be sketched so clearly, so a number of points should be added.

The plot characters have already said, what should I say next? By the way, there are some external volumes or something, and Brother Guan is also ingenious, and the layout is very ingenious. Coupled with a nice name, there is no shortage of small snacks in addition to a big meal.

Luo Luo is a lot of ramblings, and it's finally time to offend people, and now I'm starting to add up the total rating of a number of works. is limited to a few masterpieces in the Xianxia category, in no particular order.

Ethereal Journey

YY + magic weapon + plot + talent + theme + benefit + influence + literary + pioneering work

Convert to data: 10 + 15 + 15 + 10 + 5 + 20 + 20 + 5 + 10 = 110

Summary: There are too many YY, too much, the plot is too much, the talent is average, the theme is approximately zero, the benefits are amazing, the influence is amazing, the literary is slightly inferior, and the pioneering style is commendable.

"Zhu Xian"

YY + magic weapon + plot + talent + theme + benefit + influence + literary + sensational

Convert to data: 5 + 10 + 15 + 15 + 15 + 15 + 20 + 15 + 10 = 120

Summary: YY is not the main theme, it is more appropriate, and it is not an exaggeration to add five points; the magic weapon is not as rich as the ethereal, but the ancient sword and the immortal make up for a part, the plot is vivid, and it is slowly boiling; the talent is needless to say, it is better than Xiao Qian; the theme, heaven and earth are not benevolent, and all things are used as dogs, and the solution to the question of the immortal is also widely debated; the benefits can be referred to the situation of publishing in the two places; the influence refers to the advertisements of Sina.com; the literary nature cannot be ignored; and sensationalism is a major feature.

"Daoyuan Confucian Immortals"

YY + magic instrument + plot + talent + theme + benefit + influence + literary + academic

Convert to data: 10+10+10+15+15+10+10+10+10+20=110

Summary: YY is also good, the protagonist is smooth sailing, the magic weapon and Taoism are acceptable, the plot is like a role game, the talent is worthy of the fairy tales, the theme is more amazing, the cultivation of Confucianism and immortals, is groundbreaking, the benefits are also supported by publishing, the influence can refer to those lists, the literature is readable, some plots are very culturally connotative, and the academic ideas are what Ghost Rain himself has always been proud of.

"Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road"

YY + magic instrument + plot + talent + theme + benefit + influence + literary + artistic conception

Convert to data: 5+5+15+20+20+10+10+15+20=120

Summary: If you don't cater to YY, it's a characteristic, and you deserve five points; The name of the magic weapon and Taoism is very good, although it's not rich enough for the time being, but it's enough to get five points; The plot is tricky and intriguing, and the talent doesn't need to be said, no one doubts it; The theme is clear, it's not like killing bloody YY novels, but exploring a kind of fairy road; benefits, supported by VIP, I don't know if it's been published recently, but since there is piracy, it finally brings benefits to profiteers; Influence, you can also refer to collections, clicks, and recommendations; Literary, literary talents can enter the top three; The artistic conception is far-reaching and meaningful。

There are also books such as "Sword Immortal - Sword Cultivator", "Chinese Immortal Demon Record", "Immortal Buddha Record", "Evil Wind Song" and other books, which are slightly inferior in my heart, so I omit comments here. But the score is in the heart of the puppet, which is also about 100.

said that it was a fairy road, but it digressed again. Damn, it's past 12 o'clock, and it's time for lunch. A long time ago, when I was bored, I changed it and sent it.

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Guan Pingchao: Xianlu was colored by this comment. In addition, I will still guard against arrogance and rashness, and write unremittingly. :)