Cultivation is not self-cultivation, but actually self-cultivation - commenting on the path of immortals

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: shiyf (windy), : xianlu

Title: Let me say a few words about "Smoke and Dust on the Fairy Road".

վ: Best of Both Worlds BBS (Fri Jun 24 23:40:45 2005),本站()

- To all those who liked this book or haven't found a reason to like it yet.

I've always wanted to write something here, and I just had time to say a few words after the exam today.

First of all, I feel pretty good about this book. Why?

Fantasy novels are better than the plot. There are even some novels that rely on YY's level to attract readers. The former is quite fascinating, and the latter can be condensed into a simple routine of fighting monsters and upgrading, and beauties throwing themselves into their arms, which feel acceptable at first sight, and goodbye is light and tasteless, and it is like chewing wax.

The reason for this is that these authors generally have poor writing skills, or more precisely, cultural accumulation is not capable of carrying a big book. However, in this case, the fairy road is an outlier.

I want to know what's different? There are "words" in the book that are like jade, and I won't go into detail here.

The second is about the author.

Before reading the book, I heard that the author is from the University of Science and Technology, and I have a good impression of the book.

After reading the book, I heard that the author is from the University of Science and Technology, and I have a better impression of the University. (If it's not a University of Science and Technology, I'll only sweat [Note])

Science students can also have delicate brushstrokes, and there is a certain traditional Chinese philosophy faintly embedded in it. The immortal spell is no longer a confrontation of some kind of power, but some kind of elegant art, saying goodbye to blood, killing, and the only martial arts fight is very peaceful. This is related to the Taoist emphasis on stopping water as the heart, and it is also related to the description of the so-called Taihua Dao power. Just imagine, what kind of Tao can a person who shouts and kills every day, with bloody hands, cultivate? Those Xianxia novels actually copy traditional martial arts, but in a different way.

Cultivation is not self-cultivation, but actually self-cultivation. The so-called inheritance of heaven and earth, the distinction of the six qis, in order to swim in infinity, the body is like a breeze with floating clouds, and the heart is like a bright moon shining on the river, which can be regarded as the meaning of the Tao. I think the author has a good grasp of this.

To give the author some advice, you can read Wang Guowei's "Words in the World" and Zhang Chao's "Phantom Dream Shadow", the former is very good for refining words when writing, and the latter is very good for creating an elegant atmosphere in the plot. I also hope to always grasp my own characteristics, in a small way, it is a little freshness in materialistic novels, and in a big way, it may create another era, just like "Xun Qin", "I am the Great Mage".

I believe that there are many people who like this book as much as I do, and for those who have not found a reason to like it, you may wish to read the book first, and welcome to discuss; for those who really don't like this book, I hope that we respect each other's right to choose freely.

I dived, occasionally made a word, fortunately thanks to Qiwen......

[Note]: Brother shiyf guessed well, my bachelor's and master's eight years were spent at the University of Science and Technology of China. Hehe, I think of this statement, and advertise for my alma mater: Founded in the late fifties of the last century, the University of Science and Technology of China has Guo Moruo, Hua Luogeng, Qian Xuesen and many other experts in various fields of science and humanities as department-level leaders, and is the only higher education institution affiliated to the Chinese Academy of Sciences in China. There are still many halos on the head of the alma mater, and it is still a good institution, so I will not make a detailed list here, please see the link to the University of Science and Technology attached.

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