Notes on the Smoke and Dust of the Fairy Road (2.21~3.15)

Notes on the Smoke and Dust of the Fairy Road (2.21~3.15)

Poster: Song Nixue 2005-5-27 23:18:55

I haven't read it this semester, and there are three chapters that I haven't read before, and I haven't finished reading it this time

And I found that the essence area of this board is more than the author's personal anthology.,hoho.

1. It's so cute, it's cute, and Lingyier is cute. . .

2. In fact, the plot of Xianlu Yanchen is not slow, although the rhythm is a bit slow because of the language style and other reasons, but at least, the plot can be used as a plot, not a disease-free moan, which is stronger than Zhu Xian.

3. While reading me, I thought, is Xianlu Yanchen martial arts or not?

Indeed, in the same Xianxia work, Zhu Xian's martial arts color seems to be stronger, there are more sect battles, more fierce battles, and the intensity of grievances and hatreds is also more intense.

But why does martial arts have to be like this? In fact, isn't the current state of Xianlu Yanchen (I haven't seen the latest part yet) closer to the origin of martial arts? It's just four words, but can you say that this is not martial arts?

Of course, the new school of martial arts, especially Jin Yong, has developed a pure story of chivalry and righteousness, and has greatly enriched martial arts with grievances and house number struggles. This is a kind of progress, but don't be bound to sectarian hegemony, and don't forget the basics of chivalry and righteousness.

It seems that I am still bound by tradition.

4. And one of the reasons why Xianlu smoke and dust are more comfortable than Zhuxian is probably also, since Zhuxian uses such a fierce conflict. Then it would be inappropriate for him to slow down the pace any longer. On the contrary, the more soothing fairy road smoke and dust are not afraid.

5. Rui Niang's story, an infatuated woman with a negative heart, is really a very typical story.

But let me write, I'm afraid I won't deal with it that way. For Rui Niang, when a prostitute encounters this situation, the most terrible thing is not the economic loss, but the huge psychological blow.

Therefore, expelling that Hu is not a good choice. Even if this can avoid Rui Niang's loss, but letting her know the truth itself is cruel, and it may be no different from being deceived to the end.

Of course, this may be the best option. But if I write, I would have the protagonist go for not only the best solution, but the perfect one.

That is to say, in my opinion, to be chivalrous and righteous, we should not only pursue a formal fairness (good retribution 11, evil retribution 17), but also substantive fairness (good retribution 10, evil retribution 10).

That is to say, I will try my best to keep Rui Niang from this blow, and even return to the time before I met Hu, or even better, I know it's difficult, but maybe it's really okay.

Of course, this is not to say that Guan Pingchao is not well written, and I can't write this kind of plot if I write it. Unless I'm allowed to use the forbidden trick "Poor people must be hateful", hehe, otherwise, I will never be able to balance it.

6. In the end, Rui Niang is still dead, sigh...

Note: This reading note by Xue mm is for reference only, especially some ......:P evaluations of "Zhu Xian".

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