From a logical point of view, fantasy novels are right no matter how they are written. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

However, readers obviously will not give up complaining about various bloody plots because of logic.

Therefore, the so-called rationality of the novel should actually be more "reasonable", simply put, it is an intuitive sense of coordination, at the very least, the reader cannot be treated as mentally retarded......

Specifically, I think there are three aspects to the rationality of the novel: the character, the plot, and the system.

The rationality of the character design is actually mainly the continuity of the character's character. In many web novels, there will be a situation where the main character's personality mutates.

The protagonist is still serious and full of feelings in the front, but the back suddenly becomes frivolous and obscene.

As soon as he said with a melancholy face: "From now on, I have no intention of loving the night, let him go down to the west building under the bright moon......" was frowning, shaking his head and sighing, and a demonic light suddenly flashed in the dog's eyes, and he smiled evilly: "Hehe, the little girl looks good." ”

A person's comprehensive personality is naturally complex and difficult to understand, and creating a flesh-and-blood, real and delicate character and even contradictory unity is definitely the level of a master's hand.

But such a rough and simple and unreasonable personality depiction is really no different from being abducted and deceived.

At the very least, the words and deeds of each character should not deviate to the opposite of the basic setting of this character.

Personally, so far, the personalities and characters of the main characters in "You Tianque" have barely maintained their personalities and characters, but they have not reached the level I wanted.

For example, Chen Pojun, I initially imagined that he was a "slightly immature hero", but looking back, I felt that there were still some immature, but the hero was not enough.

Another example is the protagonist Shen Du, I think he is "a heart as heavy as water, occasional ripples, a genius of the world, and rare confusion". But the "Genius of the World" made me a little helpless, and there are quite a lot of "talents", but there is still a lot of lack of "Genius of the World".

After all, the level is limited, and the creation of online novels is inevitably hasty, although there is always a bit of literary complex, it is difficult to write works that can be bragged about in the end.

As for the rationality of the plot, it can basically be understood as the overall intelligence level of the characters in the novel. As long as there are no novel characters who do brain-dead things, and no novel characters understand and speculate with brain-dead thinking, the plot is naturally reasonable.

For example, in some dramas, women dress up as men, with big faces and big breasts, which are not like carrying handles, but they walk as men in a dignified manner, and others have never noticed it, and the male protagonist is a brother and a virtuous brother, hooking shoulders and backs, so casual.

When the audience saw it, they either scolded the male protagonist for being blind, or suspected that he was a traitor and took the opportunity to steal the girl's tofu.

As far as this book is concerned, I wanted Fang Hu to continue to compete for the position of gang leader after being defeated by Shen Du, and then Shen Du directly cut things down.

But after thinking about it, Fang Hu was the eldest hall master after all, no matter how reckless he was, he would not joke with his own life, and it was normal for him to succumb to absolute force.

In addition, about the plot of "You Tianque".

A series of episodes that occurred in the Song Kingdom, especially in Fengzhou, were closely related to each other through complex and diverse secular relationships, and they could be regarded as interlocking and twists and turns.

I think this part of the plot is well designed, and at least so far, no one should guess what will happen next......

Shen Du's life experience is a main line at this stage, in fact, this has been foreshadowed in the previous article, you might as well guess it.

As an online novel, the protagonist's upgrade path will definitely be a major theme of the book. "You Tianque" is no exception, and the protagonist's ascension to immortality is an inevitable ending. But if that's all, it's too boring and boring.

So the ending of this book has a good ascension, but it is not only ascension, as for the main line outside the upgrade, one or two clues can be seen from the prologue-Quartet.

In addition to the character design and plot, there is also the rationality of the system, which is actually the balance of various settings and standards.

Such as rank and strength, currency and value, identity and status, and so on.

As for the secular money in the book, I basically regard a penny as the concept of "a dollar" in reality.

For example, a monthly salary of several thousand yuan, a bunch of ingredients cost a few hundred yuan, and two fish cost dozens of yuan...... Although it is a little rough, it is not far from the ancient background of real history. I think this is the equivalent of "renting" a more mature set of real-world value measures.

Based on such a monetary value system, I have made a correction to the production and price of bluestone, which should have been discovered by careful readers. In this way, the importance of the bluestone industry has been proven, and the development of many plots in the following has a reasonable basis.

To maintain the rationality of the setting system, I think the most important point is to strictly abide by the objectivity of the law, in short, there must always be some rules that cannot be broken and must be followed, even the protagonist cannot escape.

In fact, in a sense, the rules are set for the protagonist. Because only by putting the protagonist in the rules can everything advance and unfold normally.

For example, in a game, the rules of the game are set for the player, not the NPC, and the fun of the game is generated by these rules. If you turn on the modifier, erase these game rules, and hack and kill a few bosses wantonly, after a while, the game will be nothing to play.

The protagonist is free of play, and the book naturally has nothing to write about or read.

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The above are some of my personal shallow views on the rationality of the novel, casually talk, it is related to the first work of "You Tianque", readers can feel free to comment and comment.

Speaking of "You Tianque", I have a lot of feelings in my heart.

finally got a contract, but as the year was approaching, the website traffic plummeted, and the recommendation results were dismal.

And among several books of the same period, this book has been harvested, ranking at the bottom, and the number of hits is even less bizarre (could it be that the title and introduction of the book are unsightly?). Although the number of recommended votes and reputation are not bad, I am afraid that there is still some way to go in popularity.

Thinking of the words of a certain veteran driver who was born in the middle of the last century, "the road must be taken step by step", I suddenly felt that "there is a long way to go".

The road is long, and I hope to write a good book, a fire book, and encourage you.

ps:Send another copy temporarily in the body part.,If you think this casual talk is a little bit of the level of elementary school students.,You might as well reprint it.,It's also a help to paste an advertisement......

The Chinese New Year is approaching, and I wish you all a prosperous Year of the Rooster.

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