Since I am a newcomer to writing a book, I will write almost whatever I have in my head, which has led to many readers having a lot of opinions about this book.

For example:

Invincible text is not invincible, the system flow is not systematic, pretending to be x stream is not pretending to be x at all/pretending to be x is too much, the protagonist is too lucky, where to go where to have an accident, the beginning is highly poisonous

Wait a minute...

I'm sorry for this, I'm reading and replying to most of your comments, and I've already started to revise some places, but I'm still writing in the direction of my own mind.

Don't ask, asking is that I'm just framing a book world of my own daily dreams.

Some of the plots after that will be a little bland and excessive, and I will also add the system appropriately.

Since everyone said that the hanging is not strong at all, then I will hang it more violently...

I hope everyone can put forward any suggestions~

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