The writing is very good, the writing is delicate and makes us girls embarrassed, the text exudes a strong atmosphere of classical martial arts, and the embellished poems seem to come easily, very appropriate, and very natural.

In the third chapter, I always felt that the meeting between Lin Wei and Lin Yu was a little inappropriate, and the introduction was not very natural. In addition, Liu Ziqing's appearance has added a lot of bright colors to this chapter, I secretly think that Qi Feiyang is a strong opponent, haha~ Also, should "untie your hands" be replaced with "toilet"? Okay, you can ignore this sentence...... Because I'm a paranoid~~ Also, Qing'er is a big foodie, like me, I like it, haha~ In addition, I don't read many male frequency books, I don't know what the male frequency's description of feelings should be, but if you imagine me as the male protagonist, I also think that some progress is a little fast. Uh, language is weak, in fact, what I want to say is that it is possible, maybe a real boy can be able to read a person in his heart and hold another person in his arms?

In the fifth chapter, the two were eating in the natural residence, and the "eighth master" under the window pulled the woman into it a little abruptly, maybe the center of gravity changed too suddenly. In addition, I was surprised that it turned out to be the Western Regions Corpse Demon Yin and Yang, but I didn't expect it at all!!

Now all I can say is "I'm hungry" is Qing'er's mantra, really. The full text is based on martial arts, and there are children and daughters, love and hate, and it is a rare masterpiece~ In addition, I have a strong interest in sword idiots now