Originally, I had been thinking of a Xianxia, and the outline had been listed with more than 10,000 words, and it took a lot of effort to change it while it was listed. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

It's been a long time since I wanted to write, and my heart was itching, but I didn't want to be hasty.

It just so happened that "Qingyunzhi" was on the air, which reminded me of watching "Zhu Xian" back then, so I planned to write a book of the same people to enjoy it first, while continuing to conceive.

"Zhu Xian" is the first online article I read, and it left a deep impression on me.

The principle and goal of "Top Ambition" is to live in harmony with the content of the original work, that is, the content added or subtracted is as wonderful as possible, but it will not cause great damage to the content of the original work, and it complements each other and has a certain degree of independence. (It shouldn't be easy, I'll do my best.) ）

Some people think that "Zhu Xian" is a fairy tale, but in fact, I think it is a martial arts with added fairy tale elements, and the essence is still martial arts. And I saw that martial arts happened to have an essay, so I chose martial arts.

My pen name originally wanted to be called Qianqiu, but it has been registered, so it was changed to Baishiqiu, and it feels good.

The characters in my works are not too emotional, especially the morbid emotions will never be revealed, such as yelling at me to go against the sky, I want to become a demon, etc. Of course, I'm not a person who is too serious, a villain or something, and a little psychopathy should still be reasonable.

Teenagers account for a large proportion of the audience of online novels, and the impact of morbid emotions on teenagers is very bad, which can be called a spiritual toxin, and the victims are widespread. So I pay a lot of attention to this, and I will also create more calm and calm characters in the novel, and I think that any good person should have the ability to control emotions.

My view of love believes that the realm of true love is faith, and true love for a person is to make the other person an indispensable part of one's worldview and support one's cognition of the world. Have you ever seen a devout believer who believes in more than one religion at the same time?

So I'm resolutely rejecting the harem stallions.

So the male protagonist I wrote, the number of wives is less than or equal to one. And the common progress of both partners is the embodiment of true love, so there will not be much to write about the love of children, and the point is over.

It's just that you have to learn to be flexible if you don't forget your original intention......

In view of the bad atmosphere of the times, in order to survive, it is still necessary to arrange a few romantic encounters for the male protagonist, of course, just encounters.

A person's concept of love has a decisive role in his marriage and family, and the mainstream concept of love in society plays a decisive role in ethics and morality, so I will not promote an inferior concept of love.

I advocate equality between men and women, although some people are not women, but any mother is a woman, any wife is a woman (well, in fact, this is not strict), and any daughter is a woman, so the harm of gender discrimination is very pertinent. I know that in these two generations, my grandfather was patriarchal and abusive, and my mother was patriarchal and divorced. I'll admit that as a man, I sometimes involuntarily exude a sense of gender superiority over men, and after all, I don't know much about women, so my work will focus on men, and there will be less content about women. However, I would like to emphasize my position on the promotion of equality between men and women.

Making money accounts for a large part of my motivation for writing, but even so, I can't write that kind of bad book full of low-grade fun.

I didn't think I could make any money with this fan.,The main thing is to accumulate experience and make a name for yourself.。 If there's any goal, it's to hope that "Top Gun" can become the best "Zhu Xian" fan.

In the case of piracy, in view of the national circumstances...... I won't say more, I just hope that everyone who has money will have a money field, and those who don't have money will have a personal field.

I would like to send you a quote from Kant: "There are two things, the deeper and more persistent I think about them, the more the wonder and awe they evoke in my soul will change and grow with each passing day, and this is the starry sky above my head and the moral law in my heart." ”

I would like to send you another sentence, in this sentence, Yan Fu said that "the world must advance, and the future is better than the present", and Guo Lusheng said "believe in the future......

Well, let's get here first-.-

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The most tangled part of the book "Zhu Xian" is the issue of age.

Tian Buyi and his wife are old and have a daughter, Qi Hao, Ling'er, an old husband and a young wife, and so on.

And from the Heavenly Emperor's Treasury to the Battle of Shura, the time in between is too short. Xiao Fan's cultivation skyrocketed in this short period of time, and he flew all the way up to Taiqing from the level of the lower rank of Shangqing.

The main plot line of this book is still the original book, so this time problem can only be on par with the original book. is that in the second half of the book, the protagonist's strength grows at a similar rate to Xiaofan. Otherwise, Xiaofan killed Shura with a sword, and the male protagonist is still fighting monsters and leveling up, which is not appropriate.

The upper limit of the level of this book is the Taiqing Realm, and the level positioning of the Beast God and Shura is also the level of the Taiqing High Rank, and the Eight Desolation Fire Dragons should be higher than the Taiqing Realm, but this product has exposed the dragon head a few times, so it is not counted. Regarding the detailed division of the Taiqing realm, it will be mentioned in the book, and it is my own thought, which is relatively concise.

There will be no big bosses, and there will be no such thing as the upper realm and immortals, and there will be no such thing as various worlds messing around.

In view of the original book's setting of weapons, magic weapons, and fighting methods, the combat methods in this book can be regarded as semi-air-fed combat, that is, there are both close and space-fed, of course, the space is generally not too far, especially when the level is relatively low. Of course, I watched "Zhu Xian" very early, and many details have been forgotten, although I am reviewing, there will definitely be some differences and even loopholes, I hope you can understand.

Before the protagonist grows up, the strongest among Luo Xiafeng's disciples is Ren Jiyan, which has already been mentioned, followed by senior brother, which is more reasonable. The strength of the rest of the disciples will not be too strong, after all, it is Luoxia Peak, and at present, most of the disciples above the fourth level of Yuqing are basically known and surnamed.

Regarding the heroine, I have to say that "Qingyunzhi" hurt me viciously.

The specific situation is not disclosed now.,But there won't be too many children in my book.,H bridge point to the end.,It's the kind that makes children don't know.。 After all, I was born out of nowhere, but I am not here to fill the gap caused by the anti-pornography on the Internet!

In this type of novel, it's still okay to control the world or something, so the protagonist will not become a god-like existence in the world in the end.

At the end, I've already thought about it, and it belongs to the kind that leaves three points of leeway, and it also brings a little surprise.

Thank you all for your support!

Let's get here first-.-

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Looking at the book review area, many readers asked to create a group, so they built one

Group number: 573582975

If you are often online and are interested, you can apply for an administrator with me

But I don't often play QQ, and it's the first time to build a group, so you can discuss it freely after you join

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1. Respect each other

2. Free discussion

3. Disagree when reserved, don't try to convince others

The third point is very important, and I can tell you with my amazing wisdom...... Generally speaking, if there is a difference in understanding and perception, the probability of convincing others is very low

Because at this time, the argument is no longer about good and bad, but about the standard of good and bad, and if there is no higher standard that can measure both standards at the same time, then it will never be clear, it will evolve into a quarrel, and then it will start to tear up

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Yi Yun can be said to be a "super hero", as for what the concept of "super hero" is, you can slowly understand it in the future

Although it won't blow up the sky, there is no doubt that Yi Yun is very NB

So there will be no fewer women who like him, the heroine with the female dragon and so on

But there are at most two or three entanglements with Yi Yun

True love is one or none

So friends who want to see the harem, I have to say I'm sorry......

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Although I didn't receive the tip at all (I heard that it will be given after accumulating a certain amount, I don't know if it's true or not), but I'm still very happy and thank you for your support

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A big part of my motivation for writing is to make money, but this fanfic didn't think about making any money

It is mainly used as an experience, and it is also a remembrance and reinterpretation of "Zhu Xian".

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The background I arranged for that little mouse is very nb, I don't know if anyone can guess it-.-

Let's get here first-.-

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Regarding Xiaofan's cultivation that appeared ten years later, some readers raised questions. I checked the original book and found that there is indeed such a passage:

[He (the Ghost King) turned around, smiled at Qinglong, and said: "With his cultivation at this time, coupled with the strange magic weapon 'Soul Devourer' in his hand, even if you have the Qiankun Clear Light Ring, I am afraid that there is only a fifty percent chance of winning. ”】

But there is also this passage:

[This kind of arduous practice, coupled with her (Lu Xueqi's) extraordinary endowment, finally made her the first to break through the Shangqing realm among the younger generation of Qingyunmen half a year ago. 】

This is the author's account when Xiao Fan and Lu Xueqi fought before entering the Heavenly Emperor's Treasury, and Xiao Fan and Lu Xueqi fought equally, so Xiao Fan's level should be in the lower rank of Shangqing.

I think the narration should be more credible than the words of the characters in the novel, so I still prevail in the lower ranks.

Of course, there are some problems with any novel, and even more so with a fantasy overtone, which everyone must understand.

In addition, in terms of fighting methods, there are indeed a lot of cases of air fighting, which is a bit negligent on my part. This book will definitely change in the future, of course, in the case of a lower level now, there will be more close-ups.

The main character's magic weapon will be a sword.

If it's a clock tower or something, it doesn't seem like Edgeworth is flying too conveniently.

And if the function of the clock tower is not against the sky, it will be very chicken, if it is very against the sky, it will not conform to the style of this book. Although I don't like to abuse the master, the protagonist NB has to have a limit, he can be chic and chivalrous, but he must not kill gods and Buddhas and destroy the world.

To be honest, every time I see a novel in which the protagonist is constantly blowing up, I feel that the author is a murder Matt schoolboy or something.

The sword is the head of a hundred soldiers and the weapon of a gentleman. It's true, and it's been around for thousands of years, but that's just a sign that swords can stand the test. After all, only a few truths are in the hands of a few, and the public's eyes are still relatively bright.

In "Zhu Xian", it is said that right and wrong are not in utensils, but in people. The protagonist uses everything the same, the key is that people can't be small. In contrast, the sword that is subtle but not revealing but does not lose its edge is more popular with me.

I've already thought of the name of the protagonist's magic weapon, but I can't announce it now......

Of course, the masters are in the people, and the masses are gods.

If you have any good sword names, you may wish to tell me, if it is really good (standard: low-key luxury has connotation, Chinese style. Forget about the gorgeous hanging bomb or something. Maybe it will be adopted.

Let's get here first-.-

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The first volume of "The Sword Out of the Clouds" ends

The second volume, "Fame Rises", opens

1. At present, the male protagonist is 19 years old, Xiao Fan Lin Jingyu is 5 years old, Baguio Lu Xueqi is basically about 5 years old, Tian Linger is 7 years old, Xiaohuan is about to be born, and Qin Wuyan is about 10 years old. (Qin Wuyan was described as in his early 20s, and Xiaofan was 16 at that time), Xiaobai ...... Well, a thousand years old. 6 years later, the tragedy in Caomiao Village, and it took another 5 years to reach the Seven Veins Huiwu.

2. The protagonist's magic weapon is not a Nine Heavens Divine Weapon at the beginning, but it is also relatively NB, and it is definitely much stronger than ordinary magic weapons. As for how to upgrade, I won't disclose it for the time being.

3. The heroine's question, this one is more tangled, some people like Baguio, some people like Lu Xueqi, Tian Linger Xiaohuan Jinhua Xiaobai also likes it. But as I said, I won't write too much about children's love or anything, and there will definitely not be sadness or bitterness. Of course, Yi Yun will definitely not be an old virgin.

4. Yi Yun will never betray Qingyun, "Zhu Xian" explores "what is the right way", but I don't think it can be overdone, the right way does have a lot of dirt, and the demon sect does have some goodness, but the right way is definitely cleaner than the demon sect, that's for sure.

5. Innovation is not a mix and match, the set of the Romance of the Four Swords of the Immortals will definitely not appear, and then the book will be messed up

6. Many of the extended plots of this book will intersect with the original book

7. Appropriately add something from traditional mythology, but not too much, and it won't cause the book to spoil the taste

8. I'll try to fill in some of the holes left by Xiao Da

Thank you all for your support!!

I hope you can help promote the publicity~

One hundred and ten autumns

Let's get here first-.-

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