Answers to questions raised by readers

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Recently, I received some questions and suggestions from some readers about the content of this book, and Mu Bai expressed great satisfaction. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

First of all, of course, I would like to thank you for reading carefully, and for helping Mubai find out some problems. With your criticism and correction, Mu Bai can continue to gradually revise and improve this book. The road to martial arts creation is arduous and not easy, and without the feedback of readers, Mu Bai will not go far. Therefore, I hope that you will continue to give us a lot of valuable comments in the future.

With your encouragement and support, Mu Bai will definitely do his best to write and improve this book and live up to everyone's high expectations.

Without further ado, here are some answers to some of the questions raised by readers:

1. Mu Wangye's question of recruiting Zhong Yunlang

Many readers think that Zhong Yunlang is just a small catcher, and the big Song catches thousands of fast, why does Mu Wangye have to recruit him?

This is Mu Bai's mistake in the writing process, and he did not render enough [Zhong Yunlang's identity] and [Wang Ye's attitude towards him] in the early stage.

(1) As far as Zhong Yunlang's identity is concerned. In fact, Zhong Yunlang and "Yi Long Tu" have a close relationship, Wang Xiangye and Mu Wang Ye both want this Yi Long Tu, and Zhong Yunlang is the key. I didn't highlight this at the beginning, but it was my mistake to let Zhong Yunlang slowly integrate into this matter as an outsider.

(2) As far as Mu Wangye's attitude towards Zhong Yunlang is concerned. I wrote in the first chapter that Zhong Yunlang escorted everyone from King Mu's Mansion to look at the city. There are many military attachés, generals, and internal guards in the DPRK and China, and they are not necessarily inferior to Zhong Yunlang in martial arts, so why is Zhong Yunlang guarding Mu Wangye? Everyone also knows that Mu Wangye should not need to be guarded. With his martial arts, coupled with Chai Junfei and the people around him, why do you need Zhong Yunlang to go on this trip? In fact, the truth is that Prince Mu prefers Zhong Yunlang to escort him, and he has been recruiting Zhong Yunlang from the beginning. It can also be seen from the conversation between Zhong Yunlang and the shopkeeper that Zhong Yunlang is proud of this escort mission.

Because of this escort, Zhong Yunlang was already biased towards Prince Mu in his attitude from the beginning. But unlike Yang Yuankai, who is clearly Wang Xiangye, Zhong Yunlang is only biased towards Mu Wangye in his attitude, so if Mu Wangye wants to clearly win him over, he must propose to ask Zhong Yunlang to join him.

2. The problem that the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is too fast

This question, Mu Bai has to apologize, before the appointment in the Huxin Pavilion, there should indeed be some plot and emotional conflicts, and my hints in the front are not enough. [Ning Panqing should have taken a fancy to Zhong Yunlang from the beginning. When this is modified in the later stage, Mu Bai will refill it. This piece, everyone may look a little abrupt, let's take a moment. Sorry, sorry.

3. Digging pits and not filling the problem

For example, the nine lights in front of the Xinglong Inn, why are four lights on and five off, this is a few chapters, fill it in immediately. [Actually, it's just a signal]

4. The problem of plot drag

Or is it because Mubai's update is too slow, I'm sorry for everyone. This kind of work should be 5,000 words a chapter, and two more chapters a day, right?O(∩_∩)O haha~ I've heard you say yes. However, as a newcomer, Mu Bai can't finish it a bit. I try to have one chapter a day, four or five thousand a chapter, everyone forgive me.

Or you can save a few chapters to read together, which may be more enjoyable. Mu Bai now has 2,000 words per chapter, and it basically takes three or four chapters to change a scene. /(ㄒoㄒ)/~~

5. On the issue of Miss Ning's sword theft

Or did I give too little explanation, the sword was stolen because the clue that Sect Master Ning gave her was the Qingluan Sword, and she saw that Zhong Yunlang had that sword. When she stole the sword, she didn't know that Zhong Yunlang was Mu Feng's apprentice. As for why you don't ask Zhong Yunlang, this ,,,, is a bug, and it may or may not be made up in the future.

Okay everyone, if you have any opinions and doubts in the future, continue to put forward, so that Mubai can continue to improve. [Now, the plot continues to develop at this pace, and around the end of the first volume, I will make changes to the previous text.] 】

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