Regarding the low sense of existence of the protagonist at the beginning of "Rainbow Sword Song".
First of all, I would like to thank you for your support to me, I have a long road to creation, readers are always accompanied by warm lights, and I will listen carefully to any suggestions you make.
Some readers and friends reported that the opening felt good, the environment brought in a sense of involvement, the characters of Dao Tianshu and the demon Taoist priest were relatively distinct, and they vaguely felt the ups and downs of the development of the plot in the middle and late stages.
I have been thinking about the plot and characters of the novel for a long time, at least the structure of the whole novel, the contradictions between the sects, and the foreshadowing and revelation of the entanglement of love and hatred will make everyone's eyes shine.
However, the presence of Xiao Ran, the protagonist at the beginning, is low, which is feedback from many readers, and I have considered it very seriously after understanding everyone's thoughts.
From the very beginning, my plan is like this: the opening chapter highlights the Dao Tianshu and the demon Taoist, and their basic love and hatred, and the entanglement of the sect, Xiao Ran at this time plays the role of cooperation and vicariousness, there are mainly secondary, there is the overall situation and the part, at the beginning, Xiao Ran is partial.
But this does not mean that Xiao Ran's sense of existence has always been low.
In my train of thought, I hope that through the baptism of rivers and lakes and love and hatred, he will change, from a somewhat silent person to a hero who dares to love and hate, but in this process, there will be many cruel tests, and in the early and middle stages, he will be transformed by the inheritance of Dao Tianshu. He will shoulder the grievances of the sect and the long-cherished wish of the master, and he himself will always make a choice, love and hate are always in a dilemma.
Therefore, Xiao Ran will be a growing character, just like our growth, we want to have a vigorous story, but all this needs a lot of tempering to achieve, isn't it more charming to get it hard?
In every stage of the novel, there will be his primary and secondary, including the character, the character in the novel itself is not Xiao Ran is the only protagonist, but he is the main protagonist throughout, he will have the day when he explodes and grows up, knowing what love is, what is grievance, what is providence, what is fate......
In fact, every person, every story and adventure has its meaning, and even we are not in Xiao Ran, but we find our own traces in the fox girl Bai Qinsang, Miao girl Miao Qian'er, Dao Tianshu, Puxin, Master Prajna and others. Our compassion, our love and hate, our yearning, and our helplessness are all embodied in each and every one of us.
Having said so much, I hope you can watch it patiently, and the character development and plot will never disappoint everyone.
Thank you for your support and understanding, I will still listen carefully to your kind opinions, walk with you all the way, walking in the different journey of "Rainbow Sword Song", everyone is not a visitor but the people inside, including me.