The beginning of "Demon Flame Tongtian" was written a little early, and although it was revised many times later, it still didn't achieve the desired feeling.

And stubbornly thinks that Xianxia should be like this, maybe it is too deeply influenced by the "Legend of Shushan Swordsman" of the owner of Huanzhu Mansion, so it is difficult to jump out of the shackles of thinking for a while, so that he failed to listen to the opinions of the editor and friends.

Now that the text is more than 700,000 words, I also understand some truths. No matter what the theme of the novel should be the same, not that Xianxia should be slower, it can be written more excitingly, why should there be reservations?

Especially after watching the wonderful opening of Tiger's "Superb Bodyguard", I suddenly realized that I understood where my misunderstanding was. I stubbornly think it's a good thing, but in the eyes of others, it's just a boring single side story. The story should be staggered as much as possible, colliding with fun and blood, which is something that an author should consider.

Thank you again for saying "the little white rabbit that grows mushrooms" that "the plot arrangement of the first ten chapters is very insincere", just like Daigo empowerment, thank you for your suggestions and comments-

Because of the above reasons, after thinking about it again and again, I decided to take the time to revise the first nine chapters of the first volume in a big way.

The main aspect of the revision is that the half-white style has been changed to an easy-to-understand vernacular.

In terms of rhythm, try to speed up as much as possible, and continue to bury the stalk about Jiang Yuyang. What you can see will naturally understand, and what you don't understand will not be of any use to say more.

Because the story of the first few volumes has been finalized, there is really no way to work on multiple branches at the beginning, which is a pity. If other book friends have good opinions, you can also tell me, and I will adopt them as appropriate.

I will also find time to write some alternative openings, mainly Zhu Bajiu, Jiang Yuyang and Yan Hui Yan Ming. The word count may be less, which can be used as a side pastime.

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The most important thing is to give your comments and criticisms.

Working behind closed doors will only make people fall into misunderstandings, and brainstorming is a necessary factor for an author's rapid growth