postscript
After less than a year of hard work, the book was finally successfully completed, as my first book, in fact, I was very happy, I didn't think I could stick to it when I wrote the book!
But I'm happy to be happy, and when I look back at the book I wrote, I'm still sorry for the readers. The penmanship is jerky and the plot is too bland, which is definitely a shortcoming.,The biggest problem is that this book has a lot of bugs at the very beginning.,This leads to congenital development deformities.,The back is mostly written head-on.,The logical relationship is a little unbearable.γ And my biggest shortcoming is that the architectural design of the book was too big at the beginning, and I couldn't control it, and then I deleted it all the way and it was a bit unrecognizable.
Of course, although this book has a lot of shortcomings, there are still some advantages to squeeze, for example, the plot is quite smooth, and the plot begins to have some ups and downs after the middle period, there are many whimsical ideas in it, and there are many plots that make me feel very satisfied.
Anyway, it is also the first book of the little brother Kua's father, and it can be written with such a result, and what I have to do in the future is to correct the shortcomings and inherit the advantages, and I hope it can bring a better audio-visual feast to all readers!
Finally, there are some small regrets in this book.,First of all, I had a little idea when I wrote the book.,Because I've read a lot.,The basic routine is that there are always fellow or brothers who want to kill the protagonist.,The protagonist can only fight desperately.,When you're cornered, you get unexpected abilities.γ
The younger brother has read more than two or three thousand books, so he suddenly didn't want to fall into the clichΓ©, and decided not to write about brothers killing each other, mainly to find the plot from the outside, and he was still a beautiful person in his thoughts. It turned out to be a fiasco.,When I thought about it and wrote it, I found that I didn't have the ability to control it.,The plot at the beginning was very bland.,I'm also drunk!
And then there's the protagonist's Fist of the Demon King of the Mixed World.,The Demon King Fist of the Mixed World Actually, I've always wanted to write it as the Fist of the Ominous.,Because such a domineering power as annihilation doesn't look like it belongs to the human race.γ So in my thoughts, the protagonist has a catastrophe in the end, and I set the Demon King Fist of the Mixed World, which is the Demon Fist, and after the Mahayana, it will trigger the Demon King's possession and seize Ye Feng's spiritual wisdom. But then the plot progressed too fast, so this plot was also cut.
And the plot about the Central Continent has also been cut in half, originally Ye Feng still had to work hard, but then it improved by leaps and bounds like Kaihang, and many plots have already ended before they have time to unfold! Including the apprentice Chang Le and Ye Feng's master Ouyang Ting, they are all important characters who have been laid down for a long time, and in the end, they all became passers-by, and I also feel very sorry for my friends.
There's also about the fairy world.,In fact, at the beginning of this book, there were still some ambitions to write some stories about the fairy world.,Later, for various reasons, it was cut off.,After all, this book is still written very generally.,So it's no longer a sprint upward.,After all, the foundation is unstable.,Some plots are difficult to develop.,I don't know how to write how many brain cells are burned.γ
Finally, I would like to thank the readers for their strong support, without the support of the readers, I will never be able to stick to the present, thank you so much for your support!
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