I didn't go out this month, and I've been staying at home honestly, and I've been coding words seriously, but I still encountered something.

Last week I had a little inflammation in my eyes, which caused the vitreous to become a little more serious, and after dropping some ordinary eye drops had no effect, I still hurried to register to see a doctor, before leaving, my daughter-in-law, an ophthalmology graduate, said, this is nothing, as long as it is not a fundus lesion, it is nothing, I asked what the fundus lesions contain, she said macula, and then the others forgot,

When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor checked and said that the vitreous was indeed cloudy, but the black shadow was small, it could move, there was no flash, and the problem was not big, that is, your macula didn't seem to be very good, I was scared to pee at that time, and immediately made an appointment for a follow-up examination, and I was depressed at home for two days, but fortunately, after the final examination, I said that there was no problem, and I would remember to do regular checkups in the future.

Gentlemen, if you have a high degree of myopia, please remember to take care of your eyes and use your eyes scientifically!

Well, this month finally pushed the plot to the beginning of the war, connected a lot of foreshadowing that was reserved, and paved the tense atmosphere, and this part should be over in November, and early December at the latest.

Because considering that the war is a continuous process, it is impossible to reach a climax at once like the Beckland smog, there are many foreshadowings to take back, and there are many tragedies, so I did not use the writing method at the end of the second part, but only slightly exaggerated the atmosphere of the war and the reactions of different people.

This also leads to the fact that the chapter of "self-questioning" does not have enough emotional foreshadowing, of course, I didn't write that chapter as a climax, for me, it is just a more important point in the plot structure, it is not important to sensationalize, not to shout in the heart, but to change the state of the fifth part from the beginning to the present Klein has no big purpose and no strong appeal, and stretches the tension of the plot later.

Therefore, what I need is clarity, a certain explosiveness, and a nail into the plot to tighten the story behind.

With this in mind, I ended up using the repeated interrogation technique that I didn't intend to use in this book, because if I used a sideways, or blank description, and subtle method to express it, the whole point that needed to be highlighted would not be clear, which would lead to the emotions conveyed in the later story far from enough, if it weren't for the existence of the previous chapter, the hidden emotions and touches in the dialogue with Bernadette would not be so lightly presented, as for the way of talking to other people's objects, I wrote a version at the beginning, which was very embarrassing, many times more embarrassing than asking myself。

Of course, because it was a temporary change in the way I changed the way I wrote, it led to a lot of redundancy in that part, and at that time it was because I wanted to let the emotions slowly unfold and then tighten, well, now it seems that it is too much, and sometimes, I have to remind myself of the word "restraint" repeatedly.

For the war, because of the foreshadowing of the whole style in front, Xiao Ke is unlikely to go directly to the battlefield, and I am not very likely to describe the specific war head-on, at most highlight two or three battles to achieve the purpose of outlining the situation.

The above is the summary of October, and the first chapter has been updated today.

Also, October is the first monthly pass, thank you, this should be the first three times, well, add more to the middle and late part, the key moment of the plot, and then ask for a monthly pass~