After more than a month of uploading, the first volume has finally been written, and the protagonist Lu Shaoyu is also leaving Xuanyang Sect and going to another big environment.

In this volume, the protagonist has changed from a strong man to a child, and there are many places and dialogues, all of which seem childish and ridiculous, not at all like the character of a strong man in the infancy, for this reason, the book review has been complained about many times.

Actually, my goal was to write from the perspective of a child, not to be too prominent, so that the protagonist was like an ordinary child. But maybe it's because the protagonist is the reincarnation of a strong man from the beginning, so that everyone thinks that the strong must have the character of a strong man. In addition, the writing is not good, and the descriptions are not in place, and it becomes a little nondescript, and it feels a bit counterproductive.

The first volume is generally quite satisfying.

But from the second volume onwards, the protagonist will mature and become much more independent.

The protagonist's parents are dead, and like many books, the protagonist's parents are always particularly easy to hang up, as if the protagonist is the nemesis of the born parents, and then the protagonist uses revenge as a clue to open another main line.

Hehe, it's inevitably cliché.

But I think that the protagonist is destined to be strong, and his parents are just ordinary people, so instead of watching them slowly grow old and die, it is better to use this as a guide to create another pattern. Of course, there are also people who say that you can give the protagonist's parents exercises so that they can become powerful together or something. This kind of writing of one person attaining the Tao and the chicken and dog ascending to heaven, I personally don't like it very much.

In his life, the protagonist may meet many people, relatives, brothers, friends, and enemies...... But the main line will always be only him, and the others can only become short-lived supporting roles, because if you want to divide the main line on other people's descriptions, I am afraid that I will not be able to control it with my pen power.

So, for the time being, it's time for the protagonist's parents to end.

The death of parents may not be a burden for the protagonist, but in the fantasy world of Xianxia, anything is possible. Maybe someday, countless years later, his parents will appear in another form, perhaps enemies, friends, strangers who have passed by in a hurry, or ...... In the end, it did not appear again at all.

Who knows.

There is reincarnation in this world!

Of course, the same is true of his sister! Maybe one day in the future, this sister, whom I have never met, will appear in front of the protagonist in another way? But when, where, and what storyline will appear? I don't know myself, because I haven't thought about it yet. Or, in the end, it still doesn't show up, maybe it doesn't show up.

I have a habit of writing books, that is, I don't like to be constrained, the outline only sets a specific direction, and then I write on the will, play at will, and write wherever I want, sometimes a small plot can completely change the direction of the future, and even I don't know how it will end. Hehe, there's a sense of imagination.

I want to write a classic, a fairy tale of my own. But most likely, what was written was a piece of rubbish, an obscure book.

Who knows.

But I'll try, as long as I do my best, that's fine!

Fuyan

2013.5.20