Chapter 360 - [Thank you book friends (free)]

（............ Thank you, book friend............ ）

（............ Thank you, readers............ ）

As of today, half a year, many friends have supported as always, and Xiao Seventeen is extremely moved.

With this free chapter, let the clouds ride the wind, and let Little Seventeen always remember his friends.

1 garlic is which onion, helmsman.

2 After the rain, the helmsman.

3 Worship a brother, helmsman.

4 smiling ghost emperors, deacons.

5 Book Badger, disciple.

6 Zhan Xiaoci, disciple.

7 bloodthirsty ☆ war king, disciple.

8 Shi Fei Shengmi Yan, disciple.

9 book friends 130606, apprentices.

10 days silkworms eat Xihong, apprentice.

Those familiar names:

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Friends that can't be forgotten:

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Every time I see your name, it's familiar:

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Thank you friends for your support:

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There are also a lot of friends who collect and recommend, friends who read votes on the QQ channel, and friends who read books in foreign wars. I remember the "reincarnation" in "Book Chasing Artifact" the most, thank you for your support.

There are also many friends in Xiao Seventeen's book friend group, "308649830".

Everyone enlivened the atmosphere of the group. There will always be red envelopes from time to time, thank you, red envelopes from friends, Xiao Seventeen can only be moved.

There are also friends in the "Storm Flash" post bar that must be remembered. Several friends have been silently growing the popularity of the post bar, Brother Bai 2000, Qin Shengbao. Chen Qi was shocked all over the world, wait, wait.

I still remember the long comment posted by "Book Badger", which is very moving and has made me improve a lot.

The first excerpt is as follows, Xiao Seventeen will always remember everyone.

Part 1 [Crested Head]

Generally speaking, it is said that the crested pork belly and leopard tail are said, which covers all works that attach importance to the plot, including novels and screenplays.

Online novels are different from traditional novels, but they pay more attention to the plot than in the past.

Therefore, the "crest" of online novels is particularly important.

The beginning of "The Flash" (later called The Flash) is, in my opinion, decent and slightly cramped.

From the first chapter to the eighth chapter, the protagonist becomes the disciple of Xiongba, and it takes less than 2w words, and the speed can be said to be relatively fast.

But the way to do this is through the more clichéd field trials...... This can't be said to be bad, but it can only be counted as midstream, which is not good.

After [Qilin Demon Body] and [Breakthrough Innate]

The upgrade was too fast.,The result was a bug (so a series of troubles are behind.,I also designed the paragraph of the moon in the Matchless City),In addition to the upgrade is too fast, it's a bit unexpected......

Seventeen, you love the Qilin Demon Body too much, right...... Each of the main characters is a unicorn demon body......

The bright moon (Hua Meng) that led to the Wushuang City should be, it was expected, but it was a little strange, blowing the flute (fog) for Mao Mingyue as the protagonist, and the protagonist not only did not provoke the fire, but became calm?

...... These two sentences are understood by gentlemen.

and Mingyue's emotional drama...... I have to say, it's a little contrived, and it's clear that the text is an expression of the meaning of mutual affection, but when I read it, I had the illusion of going to the bright moon for the sake of going to the bright moon...... This may be my personal feeling deviation, or it may be that Seventeen's attainments in emotional drama still need to be further strengthened.

About the sibling relationship between the protagonist and Mingyue...... and when it comes to the subsequent blood recognition, it seems to be a bit of a fuss.

First of all, it doesn't matter if it's a brother or sister.

Secondly, it doesn't matter if it's a brother or sister.

In the end, it doesn't matter if it's a brother or sister.

Gentlemen, you get the idea.

After saying goodbye to Mingyue, the protagonist returns to the world meeting, and draws a circle like this, completing the beginning of the whole book.

Overall rating of this beginning, I give it a 6 points.

It's decent, and although the plot is a little cliché, it's obviously all well-designed, but sometimes the brain can't turn around and can't play at a full level.

Other words...... I don't think the Flash's start is fully at the level of seventeen.

Because he (she) writes better than this beginning, more than a step better.

Part 2 [Breaking the Peerless]

Since the traditional term "pork belly" can refer to everything after the beginning, but this book is still far from finishing, so I will explain the main plot branches later in the text.

According to my personal division method, it is 29 chapters [Closing the Waves] to 43 chapters [Battle Heroes Fall into the River]

For the assassins of the Huo family, it's a bit of a pity that they didn't die...... Because I'm a person who prefers tragedy, O(∩_∩)O haha~

Seventeen plays the true nature of the fast-moving plot, and the plot of this part is full of ups and downs, which is very refreshing and comfortable to read.

It's a bit awkward to recognize relatives with Mingyue's blood, which has been mentioned earlier.

Looking for the fire, it was only here that the "right" timeline of movies, TV and comics was connected.

Why emphasize what is right?

Because whether it is TV, movies or comics, the main body of the story is the story of Fengyun's adulthood, that is, ...... In the comics, the steps are shocking and the city is broken, and Nie Feng and Qin Shuang capture the fire monkey.

The paragraph of Yun Chengfeng's encounter with the mud bodhisattva can give a glimpse of Seventeen's ambition about this Flash.

Kill the one who prophesied. Will the prophecy come true?

This is a paradox.

Kill the mud bodhisattva, and the hero will not be attacked by the wind and clouds K.O?

Or is it that without the prophecy of the mud bodhisattva, there would be no storm?

This point is put forward, it is interesting, and it is worth thinking about.

But...... I guess there aren't many readers who can tinker with these strange things like me

Part 3 [The World is Easy]

The subtitle I chose myself means that the world will change hands and fall on the protagonist, and the identity of the martial arts overlord is the same.

This...... It is different from the previous fire unicorn. Seventeen chose to kill the male overlord and violently seize the qualifications of the Tianxia Association and the martial arts overlord.

To put it simply, it's good, I like it.

+ There is progress.

The foreshadowing content of this part is the birth of the Thunder Robbery Knife.

From the beginning of Chu Chu's disappearance, he went directly to the climax.

Whether it is the combination of the protagonist's front hard anus, wind and clouds, or the design of Chu Chu's encounter with the phoenix dance dragon sleeve, it is very exquisite.

Killing the hero, the writing is very powerful.

But a wave of unevenness has arisen again and again. Fight Juggernaut ...... Finally, he relied on near-light speed to move to destroy the body of the Juggernaut.

It's all a classic plot.

Compared with the sword saint in the comics, he was slapped down by the passing step shocking cloud...... The plot here is more cleverly designed.

For this paragraph, I give 9 points.

Add [Tianxia Yi]

In this part, there is a plot of Nie Feng's escape, which is reasonable. Although it seems a little unpleasant, it is an event that should have happened.

In line with the principle of "the characters themselves drive the plot".

Generally speaking, there are 2 ways to guide the plot of the story.

The first is that the author creates suspense, events, and accidents. to guide the characters in the story in the direction of the goal, in this case, the driving force of the plot is the invisible "hand of God" (Seventeen's keyboard);

The second. It is the character itself that already has a concrete image, and makes a choice according to its worldview.

There are also those writers who force the story characters to do this and that, which is abrupt and unreasonable in the eyes of the reader, and they fall into inferiority.

Nie Feng's departure is obviously in line with the second situation.

The first case applies in all cases.

The second situation is applicable to characters that have already been concretized, that is, there is already a character design, or a character that is gradually becoming clear.

From a certain point of view, the second way of progressing the plot involves the writer's respect for the work itself and the characters in the story...... This is a metaphysical statement.

Rigor is not blowing.

The "movement" of the protagonist is certainly conducive to the development of the story.

However, the "movement" of the supporting characters can show the writer's skills and creative attitude.

I think...... This one arrangement, Seventeen did a great job.

Part 4 [Sword Sacrifice]

Chapters 65 to 79 can be considered paragraphs.

The protagonists of this paragraph in the original work are Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng, and the main supporting roles are Broken Waves and Jian Chen.

As for Sword Demon, Aotian, Sword Poor and others, it is just to set off the above small characters, this is from the story itself, not from the internal worldview of the story.

Due to Nie Feng's retreat and the rise of the protagonist, the dominant character in this part has become the protagonist, but the protagonist of this part of the story is still in shock.

Don't beat me yet...... Because that's how seventeen is written.

Yun Chengfeng is obviously not a good person.

That's why I met **, so I fell into the trap of Aotian and Mrs. Ao, and after the joy of fish and water, I recovered my sanity and hacked Mrs. Ao to death again......

It's really spicy!!

Cruel! Fierce! I don't know how to pity the fragrance and cherish the jade!

Strongly protest ahhh

Why did Mrs. Ao want to kill her, wouldn't it be better to tie her up and play in front of Aotian and show her PLAY, shame PLAY?

OK, the above is a complaint, the spit is over.

Seventeen used the ** incident to lure Yun Chengfeng away from the sword sacrifice, which led to the loss of power of the Tianxia Society in the peerless sword competition.

It is precisely because of the loss of momentum that the step can be highlighted.

It is precisely because of the loss of power that he was able to give way to Jingyun and be promoted to the protagonist of this part.

This can be regarded as a little compensation from Seventeen to Bu Jingyun, after all, he took the descendants of the gods of the people, and the god of death who could never be subservient to people, as his subordinates......

Remark:

Leng Yanwei's arrangement of not saving Bu Yunyun and committing himself to the divine doctor is also reasonable and ingenious.

Many times, it's not because the woman takes it all and the protagonist doesn't die.

That's really cool. But it's also tedious.

Why does Leng Yan have to commit to the divine doctor?

Answer: Because the protagonist wants to kill the miracle doctor, and he wants to kill the people very happily, he must first make the reader disgusted with the miracle doctor. @展小狸小姑娘, don't be so babbling in the future, can you be steady?

At last......

For the part of the sword sacrifice, I give 8 points

Where are the two points deducted?

Just look at my complaints

Part 5 [Absolute God]

Chapters 80 to 98, as the name suggests, there is absolutely no god, referred to as absolute god

Let's start with an outline, which gives a high score of 9 points in this part

It is based on the decisive battle between the protagonist and the absolute godless.

The image of the broken army is just like the character in the comics. Vicious, shameless, bad, and bad, I have always liked it.

The only regret is that in this novel, Po Jun died too early...... alas

This is a deduction~~

Because the military master is very popular after whitewashing

There are three highlights of the decisive part

1. There is no god's will to fight to the death

Jeonosuke is dead to the end, which is more admirable than the image of the hero in the comics

2, the protagonist has never been able to take advantage of it

After all, the online article...... Many times if you are not careful, the protagonist will be hung too much

3. The proposal of cloud friction and thunder and lightning

The original author of Fengyun proposed that "the wind is phaseless, the clouds are impermanent, and the wind and clouds are combined." Maha Immeasurable"

Seventeen proposed that "clouds and gas friction breed thunder and lightning"

It's a creative act, and while it may seem awkward, it's a new theory. That's why I didn't adapt to it at the beginning

I hope that Seventeen will continue to innovate in the future~~

Don't be overly attached to the original like I did

Part 6 [Chaos]

Ran, as the name suggests, originally means the division of power, that is, the meaning of power being divided.

The emperor is dead, the false emperor is dead. The world is in chaos.

The so-called "Qin loses its deer, and the world chases it"

That's how the heroes came about

The protagonist kills the gods. Create chaos, but don't set things right.

Confirmed his wolf ambitions.

A few days ago, a book friend said

"The protagonist betrays his teacher, is untrustworthy, and does a lot of evil, and has nothing to do with 'chivalry'"

That's probably what the original post meant, and it's been deleted......

Actually, I want to say

He was right

Yun Chengfeng is indeed not a chivalrous man, he is a bad person, and a bad person who feels good about himself.

If this kind of character is the protagonist, it is probably acceptable.

Because the reader will unconsciously substitute himself as the protagonist, in this way, in the thinking consciousness, from the protagonist doing evil to doing evil himself, it will be selectively ignored.

If it's for another role...... I guess I've died 10,000 times

I'm pretty weird too

Why are the protagonists of the wind and clouds written by Seventeen all the scum of this kind of human face and beast heart...... The previous one broke the waves, and this one cloud rode the wind, all of them are bad people

Seventeen should be spanked

Therefore, the protagonist also began to take the path of hegemony.

I have always disagreed with martial arts novels getting involved in military struggles, so I will briefly talk about this aspect.

It can be seen that from here, seventeen began to close the line.

The appearance of Xiao Sanxiao is proof of this.

I don't have a good impression of this old turtle.

And the act of laughing three smiles makes the protagonist feel less good (although I don't know it yet).

It is foreseeable that there will be a battle between the protagonist and Xiao Sanxiao.

Nie Feng and Bu Jingyun in Fengyun's original work also exist in the possibility of the protagonist breaking up and dying.

The protagonist himself is fighting the world, the emperor, and the imperial court

This part is only 30 chapters

There are so many forces on the stage and participating in the competition

There is also the encounter between the gods and the broken waves

It can be said that ...... Disorderly.

The plot itself is messy enough.

Today's fan fiction,I'm used to seeing the plot.,Virgin's feet.,Don't kill people for the plot and so on.,There are many direct and massive plagiarism of the original work.。

But in this book, I saw a different style, a different fandom

1. From the very beginning, he perfected the things before Fengyun and the entry, and perfected the conjecture that Qin Shuang was accepted as an apprentice.

2, after the change of the hero, the plot has been changed, Kong Ci is not dead, Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng are not chased and killed.

3. In the changed plot, everything is based on the character of the characters and the structure of the wind and clouds to advance the plot.

4, in the original work, there is no god invasion, and the emperor is simply beaten, except for Nameless and others, all the palace ministers show up, and they are regarded as idiots. This book gives a reasonable explanation.

5. Just imagine, in the past, 100,000 forbidden troops could hunt down and kill Nameless and Mu Yingxiong, why the imperial court couldn't resist the godless thousand-person team.

6. I've seen too much chaos with the same people, but in this book, I saw that many characters have maintained their personalities in the original book and have not changed their taste. Although the time-traveler came, the story was still driven by the original characters.

7. In the original work, the Dongying people are extremely powerful, and they casually invade the Central Plains, which is simply the ambition of the people and the prestige of the Central Plains.

8. But in this book, I clearly saw the oscillating Central Plains. Those Japanese people, when they arrived in the Central Plains, everyone was at the end of their rope.

9. I remember that in the original book, as soon as I decided to take possession of the world of the child emperor, the child emperor became a subordinate of the emperor Shakti, and he was a very bull B who plundered the Central Plains.

10, in this book, I arrived at the helplessness of the Dongying people, the emperor is powerful, right, then let the gods come out to clean you up, similar to this setting, it's really good

Support this book,I've seen the most enthusiastic Fengyun fandom.,I hope Seventeen writes a good book.,Don't pay attention to those brainless trolls.,Brainless scolders with a lot of dirty words.,Write a book of more than a million words of Fengyun Homo.。

It seems that the wind and clouds are the same people.,There's not more than a million words yet.。

Most of them were scolded as eunuchs.

Seventeen hard work, there are many people to support you!(To be continued......)