Chapter 59: This kid, on purpose

Meng Shusheng smiled bitterly and said, "Look at this again: 'The slanting wind and drizzle are falling. The curtain drags the floor. Pingshan has a few songs of seal incense. Idle garden catkins fly. The new green is dense, and the red is sparse. The suckling warbler cries in the sun. The cold lingers through the golden clothes. Luohualang has not returned...... "Meng Shusheng recited "Drunken Peach Spring" in standard Luoyang Yayu.

The poems of the Qing Dynasty are the pinnacle of all dynasties in the eyes of some people, but when it comes to Nalan Xingde, his words are even better, so Nalan Xingde is generally classified as a poet.

The most important feature of Nalan Xingde's words is that the emotions are true and natural, which can give people a direct touch at once.

In the era of the previous life of the Qin Dynasty, except for a very small number of people, it was impossible for the rest of the people to learn to make ancient poems, and because of a certain ideology, Nalan Xingde was beaten into the 'cold palace' in China, but in this case, there are countless Nalan fans, which shows the charm of his words.

This is still the case for laymen who don't understand poetry, let alone those who have really been immersed in poetry for a lifetime.

Meng Shusheng as the first person in the Dali literary circle, his Iloya language is naturally the words are round, completely in line with the "Guangyun", and then read the words of Nalan Xingde, the soft words such as catkins and spring breeze, the tough such as Admiralty aluminum, the drag of the cavity, and the previous poems, this full house of literati seems to have a feeling, with the words 'slanting wind, drizzle, painting curtains, screen mountains'...... One image after another jumps out, and a quiet and beautiful landscape painting seems to unfold in front of you.

Meng Shusheng's chanting soon ended, but the whole room fell silent.

After a while, a low chanting sounded, and then this chanting became more and more, I saw Li Shiqi brushing his beard and reciting the word repeatedly, Shen Wei squinted his eyes and sighed, and Liang Hu shook his head......

This one. At this time, Huang Tongming's deep voice sounded, "One sentence and one scene, and no scene is not emotional, fresh and elegant is nothing more than this." ”

"Hmm. Yi Shaogong also said, "Natural, beautiful, elegant, like a cluster of new chrysanthemums in the field, which is endlessly evocative. ”

"Old Meng. ”

Wu Xinguo looked directly at Meng Shusheng: "We made this word, and it's at this level, give him a high score, what is your headache?"

"I didn't say this word badly, but ......," Meng Shusheng sighed, "You will know if you taste it carefully." ”

"Again?" Wu Xinguo frowned.

Guo Xuzhen said in a deep voice: "I think I know the reason for Lao Meng, although this word is natural and fluent, it reads fresh and easy to read with an aftertaste, it is a good word, and most importantly, this style seems to be unique." ”

"Unique?"

Wu Xinguo was stunned, Wen Shida, Yi Shaogong and some others also looked at Guo Xuzhen in surprise, and then thought for a moment.

"Yes, it does seem like a self-inflicted faction. Wenshida nodded.

"It's just a word, it's kind of self-made, it's just a little special. Yi Shaogong was not surprised.

"It's not a self-opening faction, but the words are really good, and they are a little different from the words of the past dynasties. Guo Xuzhen said, "Such a word should be given a good score, but have you noticed that this word is different from Tao Yuanming's style." As soon as these words came out, they all showed a sudden look.

"Although the name of this word is 'Drunken Taoyuan', the content is mainly to say goodbye to the spring. Huang Tongming nodded.

"Tao Gong has an elegant temperament. Wu Xinguo squinted his eyes and said, "If you want to hurt or regret, you will also hurt the suffering of the people, how can you be such a sad and bitter child?"

The word Nalan Xingde is made in imitation of the 'flower body' at that time, and the word between the flowers is according to the words of Nalan Xingde, which is 'the ancient jade in the word, which is precious and not applicable, and the Song word is applicable and less valuable. But this "oblique wind and drizzle is falling" is different from the ordinary flower body, that is, a sweep of the flowers carved meticulously, bright and fragrant soft style, become fresh and elegant, but the central meaning of this word, as everyone said, is to express the sadness of the spring and regret goodbye.

"The words are good, but not to the point. Meng Shusheng's voice sounded, "Tell me, how many points should be given for this test paper?"

"How many points?"

Immediately, I had a headache one by one.

"It's not easy. Wen Shida snorted, "Didn't everyone say it before, if it is not to the point, half of the points will be deducted, since this kid regards himself as a woman, what kind of sadness and farewell should he write, hum, we don't have to be polite, follow the rules." ”

"But this word, even if you hear Shida, you may not be able to do it ......," Liang Hu said in a deep voice.

"I agree with Brother Starr. Li Shiqi smiled, "Look at this kid, how well the previous poems are written, and he completely grasps Tao Gong's temperament and interest, but this word ...... , others didn't see our intentions, so they wrote the poems out of touch, but he, seeing it, still wrote like this, hum, this kind of arrogant boy, maybe he deliberately gave us a problem and didn't teach us a lesson......"

"That's right. ”

"It's time to deduct points. ”

More than half of the people in the whole room said loudly, knowing that they made mistakes and challenging the rules, it seems to be a trivial matter in this Tianlong Temple's annual exam, but people with this kind of character will easily make big things and suffer big losses in the future.

"The deduction for not being on topic is 14 points, 14 points for poetry, 14 points for words, this kid's poem hits the topic, but the words are off topic, it stands to reason that only 14 points will be deducted, but. Li Shiqi said, "This kid is different from others, his poetry skills are obviously very deep, and he can be completely relevant, unlike others who are not enough to be relevant enough." ”

Indeed, to be able to write this word poem, the poetry skills of the candidates who do this test paper are absolutely first-class, and it is impossible to write this kind of word because they can't write the 'Taoyuan' words that meet Tao Yuanming's style.

"Therefore, this punishment should also be different from others, and I will also deduct 14 points in terms of the poem. Li Shiqi said.

"This ......"

Some people frowned, "Brother Shiqi, isn't this too heavy." ”

"This kind of person, the punishment is not heavy, how can he have a long memory?" Li Shiqi sneered.

"But in this way, will it have the opposite effect and cause ......," Liang Hu said in a deep voice.

"If we really can't even stand this punishment, we don't want this talent. Li Shiqi said, Li Shiqi and Liang Hu argued a few words one by one, and finally everyone agreed with Li Shiqi's idea, and the next thing was to score the poems.

"Although the poem is good, on the whole, the simplicity is not enough for Tao Gong, and the artistic conception is not as long as Tao Gong......"

"The word entrance is good, but it can be tasted for a long time, and it is not shallow enough, not as far-reaching and vast as Empress Li......"

One by one, the word "poetry" is really good, but when you think of the master behind the scenes, just a student of Tianlong Temple, it is impossible for everyone to really regard it as a truly perfect masterpiece, not to mention that this poem is not the best in Nalan Xingde's works.

The most important thing is that I answered so well in this first paper.

It is conceivable that the level of this issue must be very high, if this first one is given too high a score, and if you encounter a better one later, how to score, is it possible to evaluate 1oo with a full score of 1oo, or even 1oo+ is not successful.

Tianlong Temple's annual examination poetry score, has never been on the ** ten, can be on seventy, is a first-class work.

After some rhetoric, the 36-point poem after deducting the irrelevant 14 points was rated 28 points, and the words were 32 points, adding up to a total of 6o points.

After the first one is determined, the second and third scores are also quickly determined, the standard is established, and then one by one they read the poetry volume, time has passed, and there are many excellent works among them, which can make one by one the readers wonder that even those excellent works are far from these two, when the last poetry test paper is read and handed over to Meng Shusheng.

Meng Shusheng's face was very heavy: "This time the poems, I just counted them, there are only 2 poems above 60 points, and they have just reached the line of 6o points, and there is no one above 70 points." ”

"What?7o not a single one?"

"Only two of the 6o points?"

Wen Shida, Li Shiqi and some other people were stunned, the full score of the poetry department was 100, there were at least two or three normal 70 points, and there would be about 10 above 60 points.

"Old Meng. Huang Tongming smiled bitterly, "This can't be blamed on everyone, we are all evaluated according to the standards of the previous three test papers, and in the later poems, it can't be said that there are no good products, I compared it in my heart, this year's poetry is actually not worse than previous years, but much higher than previous years, but ......"

Shen Wei, Liang Hu and others all nodded in agreement, why the overall score is low, it is not that there are no good poems in the back, but because the first one is Nalan Xingde's two, and the standard score of the first one is naturally nothing, so the results are originally very good, but the score is far worse than in previous years.

"Then what should you do?" Meng Shusheng said lightly.

"What else can be done, naturally, according to the usual practice. Wen Shida said with a smile, everyone also nodded, poetry, strategy, and prose because there is no standard answer, generally the first three are used in advance to set the standard, this standard will generally be slightly low, and then adjust the overall upward adjustment afterwards.

"This time it's better than in previous years, so the most appropriate way is to raise 15 points overall. Li Shiqi said.

"This method is very fair, improve 15 points, there are 6 over the 7o point line, this year is better than in previous years, six over 7o is normal. Huang Tongming nodded, then sneered, and looked at Li Shiqi with a smile, "Brother Li, among the 6 people who have passed 7o points, there is the first test paper." ”

"The first one?" Li Shiqi was stunned for a moment.

"That's right, Brother Li, if the first one is over 7o points, he may not be able to see the punishment we gave him. Liang Hu also laughed, and a score of 7o in the poem was a high score.

Li Shiqi frowned, the overall mention of 15 points is not just as simple as the first score reaching 7o points, you must know that the word poem is deducted 28 points that did not completely cut Tao Yuanming's style, that is to say, just in terms of the quality of the poem itself, the difference of two points in that test paper is a full score.

Full marks of poetry, no one will believe it.

Since the establishment of Tianlong Temple, even these literary masters, it is impossible for them to make full marks in the examination room, but a temple student, the examination room to do the examination poems reached 98, close to a full score?

Not only Li Shiqi frowned, but the entire lobby also frowned one by one.

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