The fifth part summarizes and asks for leave and a guaranteed monthly pass
Ahem, if I write directly about the Tarot meeting at the beginning of the next part, I write that everyone is holding a normal meeting under the gaze of Mr. "Fool", but "World" Gelman Sparrow seems to be wearing a monocle, and Mr. "Fool" is more leisurely than usual, with a slight tilt, his right elbow supporting the armrest, and pinching his right eye socket from time to time...... This, will it be drowned by the thrown blades?
Hehe, just kidding, no matter how dramatic the turn is, it must conform to the Basic Law, no, the basic logic, in the case of the foreshadowing and clues given, it is not that I can write how I want, you can rest assured.
The whole fifth part, I have actually summarized the main problem before, that is, for a long time, Xiao Ke is more confused, is a lack of enough endogenous power, which leads to a gradual decline in the tension of the plot, after all, it is not the beginning stage, you can follow Xiao Ke to recognize this novel world little by little, there are other things to cultivate and maintain interest, in the middle and late stages of a book, everyone must still want to see the development and advancement of the plot, and it must be the kind that people can look forward to.
However, when I first made this part of the structure, I considered that this transformation should not be too abrupt, after all, after such a big impact at the end of the fourth part, Xiao Ke will definitely need a lot of time to digest and accept, and he has to use a lot of foreshadowing to slowly find new momentum, you see, the plot tension of the next part is not at all to worry about now.
While writing Xiao Ke, I also had to take care of other characters, describing their growth, their obsessions, and their inner conflicts, so the rhythm was further slowed down, which was like a squid, waving its many tentacles, from the beginning of controlling two or three simple lines, to manipulating seven or eight dozen story lines and character lines, it was really getting more and more difficult, and I couldn't let this affect the story structure of this part, and I couldn't let it be bulky and staggering.
It's a pity that for this reason, the plot of some characters can only be temporarily suppressed so that the story structure is not unbalanced.
In addition to the problems summarized above, there are two more points to say now, one is that it took almost two hundred chapters to complete the upgrade, in terms of story structure, it is too slow, but in terms of actual process, it is too fast, although all kinds of foreshadowing makes this result seem reasonable, but I still think it is too compact, and it is more gentle to deal with Xiao Ke's digestion for another one to two years of promotion. This point should be noted in the future, this is a problem in the overall story arrangement, and there are not too many blanks for skipping the timeline.
It's too fast.,And it's too slow.,I don't know if I've summarized it before.,I don't remember it anyway.,Then say it again.,For many authors,The main role of the upgrade is to provide cool points.,I'm no exception.,But I have a different understanding of the upgrade.,This is my tool and scale to grasp the rhythm of the plot.。
Why can this be?,My understanding is the word "change",A stage of the story lasts for a long time.,Everyone will be eager for something new to join.,Desire something different.,Don't want to be the same.,At this time,Upgrades can naturally provide "change".,Very soft.,And it's not just a change in the environment.,There's also a change in the protagonist himself.,From the inside out.,Both inside and out.。
Therefore, it is not impossible to write that does not directly contain upgrade elements, but there must be a "change" node, in a sense, this is internalization, softening of the upgrade, just like some romances, the feelings of the hero and heroine can also be regarded as an upgrade, from less to more, plus regression, splitting, reconciliation and other elements.
The second point is that many plots in the fifth part are gradually detached from the middle and low-level extraordinary, out of the social environment, which is an inevitability brought about by the improvement of Xiao Ke's strength, personality and participation in things, and it is also a problem that I hope to find a way to solve, because once there is no environment, there is no sense of realism, the whole story will have no roots, only dramatic conflicts remain, which is the reason why my previous books developed faster and faster, except for martial arts, it is because the repetition is too large, and the "change" brought by the upgrade to the plot is too little.
One of the original intentions of the sequence system and the acting method is to let the high-ranking people who have escaped from society re-enter the world through the acting method, give them a life, and return the world to reality.
This point, due to the problem of the main tone of this film, has some embodiment, but it is not too much, and I hope that some enhancements will be made in the future.
Back to the fifth part, the theme of "Red Priest" is to represent the war, there are not many positive descriptions, but throughout the whole text, it is the bright line of the plot, and at the same time the encounter in this environment is used to show the sense of drowning and struggle, Triss is one, Xiao Ke is one, and the characters who are struggling to support in the face of the torrent of the times are.
I have repeatedly emphasized drowning before, just to not mention it in the last dozen chapters, to create such an atmosphere and feeling through the story itself, I believe everyone can experience it, after seeing Triss say those words, falling to the mausoleum, Amon put on monocles in front of Xiao Ke, the feeling of the struggling finally sinking into the water comes out.
The corresponding figure is erected.
It is precisely because of the need for such an atmosphere that the encounters in this part actually don't have many dramatic turns, and in my opinion, being attacked by the enemy, being attacked by the enemy, and then being attacked by the enemy may not be as gloomy and depressing as the step-by-step foreshadowing that has been struggling and trying to break through, but can't find the direction.
And it's because of the problems summarized above.,Since the fifth part,Chase has been falling.,Occasionally pick up a little.,But the trend hasn't changed.,It's almost down to 10,000.,So,I said it's necessary to ask yourself.,Because it solves the problem of endogenous power and plot tension.,It's a little harder.,But the effect is very good.,Immediate.,Since then,Chasing has risen steadily.,Recently, it has reached the state of the peak.,The average order is now 80,009.。
The sixth part is called "The One Who Chases the Light", which comes from the sequence 2 of the "Sun" pathway, which was called "The One Who Chasers the Sun" in ancient times, which means literally, but it symbolizes many people and many things.
This part is very important to me personally, it is the most important part of the overall story structure, it is the preliminary completion of the world structure, it is also the opening of the situation, and it is the key to whether the impact of the plot can be formed.
I'm a little nervous, I don't know if I can write it well.
Well, the next three, each chapter will definitely not reach two hundred chapters, how much, I can't say, maybe in the early hundreds, maybe one hundred and forty fifty, or less than a hundred, this is mainly before the sixth part is written, I can't predict how many can be written in the seventh and eighth parts.
I'm a crumb squid with no outline and no outline, only key points of the plot, climactic picture, general development, and main structure, so before each chapter is written, I have to take a long test for nearly 1 hour, and sometimes it will be more, well, it's not that there is no outline and no outline, it's all in my head, and it's dynamically updated every day. A friend asked me to look at the outline before.,I found out what the hell it was.,In addition to the world setting.、Character setting、Power setting、Historical chronology is very detailed.,The outline is often just a decoration.,Basically, I won't write it ==.
Okay, it's time for the much-anticipated part again, the fifth part is over, and the rest is three and a half days, this time, I have to get a more detailed outline of the sixth part, otherwise just rely on the deduction in the brain, the later the more difficult it becomes, and there are too many things to consider.
Well, half a day starts at noon on Saturday, and the last chapter is updated in advance, that is, half a day off on Saturday, Sunday, Monday and Tuesday, and Wednesday at half past twelve at noon to resume the update.
Also, at the beginning of the month, don't forget to buy a monthly pass, give me the motivation to write the sixth part~
I will give the first monthly pass in November, and I will present it at a critical time in the plot!
Ask for a monthly pass, ask for a monthly pass, ask for a monthly pass, and say important things three times~