Chapter 92: Essence Book Review

Ending this chapter, I enjoyed the data in the background for a while, Xiaomei didn't arrive, but she waited for Qin Xian'er.

"Xiaomei's mind has been consumed a lot recently, I helped her ask for leave, and the family forced her to retreat. Qin Xian'er said coldly.

"What's wrong?" Tao Qi was surprised.

"I really don't know how you wrote the eleventh chapter, the protagonist's arrow, basically only people who have practiced 'mental strength' can guarantee that it will be shot, and it can protect the fire and not extinguish it. Those who haven't practiced can only rely on luck, and Xiaomei is unlucky. Qin Xian'er said.

Tao Qi was a little dumbfounded, the heart shooting technique is so powerful?

No, is the art of heart archery because the protagonist of the novel has his own skills and can succeed on his own, or because he shouts "vomiting blood", or this is the so-called 'mental power'.

Is it possible to invoke the power of ontology in the book?

It shouldn't be so simple, otherwise I would have manipulated the protagonist to play the Ten Styles of Shadow, and each reader gave the protagonist different martial arts, and the book would be completely messed up.

Perhaps, "Mental Power" is an exception, and it happens that the spell used by the protagonist is called "Heart Shot".

But I'm still very surprised, the big master of Xiaomei's dignified Jindan peak is taller than all the masters of Lou Luomen, and he doesn't know how to "have mental strength"?

"There are too many people who are stuck in Chapter 11, and because it takes ten points to read it once, even Jindan masters can't keep trying, and there are a lot of protesters in your book review area. Qin Xian'er said.

Tao Qi thought to himself, no wonder there were so many book reviews, it turned out to be a protest......

"Do you want to revise Chapter 11, but I can't think of any other way to kill the blood girl?"

"What do you want? Modify the Immortal Book into a world of its own, modifying the Immortal Book is equivalent to reversing time and space, do you think you are a Da Luo Jin Immortal?" Qin Xian'er snorted.

"Forget it, it's no wonder you, open space, the author's control of the plot is already very weak, maybe it's fate, it's useless to write the next chapters no matter how wonderful you write, I estimate that at least half of the readers will abandon the book in chapter 11. Qin Xian'er said.

Tao Qi sighed: "Half is half, it's better than becoming a tomb book." ”

Qin Xian'er shook her head: "I originally had great hopes for you, but now it seems that I can only count on your next book to become a god." ”

Tao Qi thought about it: "I still hope to write this book for a longer time, I can't let go of the characters in the book." ”

Qin Xian'er said: "Actually, even if there is no problem with eleven chapters, you can't write too long, because the later you go, the higher the divine thoughts required to open a new chapter, even if you can get supplements, but the rules of the library are that the divine thoughts consumed to open a new chapter cannot exceed half of the author's maximum divine thoughts." ”

Tao Qi's body shook a little: "This is really a problem!"

At present, Tao Qi only has 43 points of divine thought, which means that he can't continue after writing chapter 22, unless he upgrades.

During this time, the realm rises one level in a few days, and the foundation building period rises by 3 points each time, and it can still keep up with the progress of writing, but the more you upgrade later, the more difficult it is.

"Let's talk about it after twenty chapters. After Tao Qi finished speaking, he clicked on a book review.

"Ladies and gentlemen, I've passed Chapter 11! I really didn't expect that I would realize some of the mysteries of 'mental power' from a book, and it is a book by the author of the Qi Transformation Period!"

I am really happy for this reader, and Tao Qi didn't expect that he could also "teach" things in the god period when he was in the foundation period.

After listening to what Tao Qi said, Qin Xian'er said decisively: "Add essence to this reader, put it at the top!

Tao Qi did so, spent two points of divine thought, and added refinement to the top.

"In this way, the shortcomings of Chapter 11 have become advantages! Those who want to comprehend their mental power before the refining period will definitely come to read your book! Those who abandon the book will also come back!" Qin Xian'er's eyes lit up.

"In fact, the reader understands a little bit of mental mystery, which may be accidental, or it may be caused by his own accumulation, but this is the point of hype!"

Tao Qi smirked: "I've always had good luck. ”

"Hmph, it's your blessing to know Xiaomei!" Qin Xian'er hummed.

She didn't say the second half of the sentence, but Xiaomei has been dragged down by you.

The edge line has a lifting effect on the weak side, but it is often a burden on the strong side.

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A "pop" sounded in the empty valley.

"Brother Ying, what's wrong?" a young man asked, turning his head and frowning.

The young man in white stretched out his hand: "Just killed a mosquito, damn it, suck so much blood from me." ”

The young man's face sank: "'Xiruo Bat' is the most sensitive, I told you not to make a sound! No, you have the Jindan stage true qi to protect your body, what kind of mosquito can bite you?"

The young man in white said depressedly: "I want to see the map, so I dispersed the true qi in my hand, who knew that there were mosquitoes in such a coincidence that there were mosquitoes, and I also saw a key point, and I fell into a trance." ”

"Didn't you take the insect repellent powder? and the coercion of the Jindan period!"

"This mosquito may just be cold and can't smell it, and the brain can't sense my momentum...... In short, I was unlucky. The young man in white shook his head.

"Chance comes from necessity, the heart is righteous and evil, your heart has never been enough, you have to practice more when you go back!" the young man shouted.

At this time, a small man next to him whispered: "Senior Brother Mang, you are talking too loudly......"

As soon as he finished speaking, the sky was black and pressing, and it was full of giant blood bats, flying over.

"Damn, the sneak attack failed, force kill!"

......

The valley was covered with flesh and blood, and the group was also embarrassed.

"Ying Wushuang, you have always had problems with the task recently, go back and ask the master to calculate a hexagram for you. Senior Brother Mang said angrily.

The little man also said, "Senior Brother Ying, are you stained with any cause and effect?"

Ying Wushuang shook his head: "Cause and effect are naturally there, my father and Senior Sister Lu's realm have improved very quickly, they are people close to me, and a little drag is nothing." ”

"Senior Sister Lu is your future Taoist companion, it's really nothing, but your mortal father, no matter how much resources you waste, you will rush to the stage of returning to the gods, and you should have left him alone a long time ago!" Senior Brother Mang snorted.

"When they all reach the stage of resurrection, the power of involvement will be much smaller. Ying Wushuang didn't want to talk about it anymore.

"Yes, if you get married in three years, Senior Sister Lu will bring you a lot of sweetness. Several senior brothers laughed at the same time, and there was something special in their laughter.

"Three years later......" Somehow, Ying Wushuang felt uncomfortable in his heart, as if his heart was pulled by something.

"Do you really want to ask the master to calculate a hexagram?"

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"Da Hunt, have you had enough grinding for foreign workers, go out!" Gongsun Erniang shouted, scaring Da Jie directly back to his original form.

"Do it yourself......" Tao Qi comforted the Venus flytrap.

"I really don't want to die. "The flytrap squeezes out a few drops of sap.

At this moment, a thunderclap rang out in the sky.

"Lou Luomen, you remember! Everyone always has a time to meet!" The long whistle gradually faded away, and the voice was full of unwillingness.

"Hey, the door is blocked?" Erniang frowned, disappointed.

After a while, the salvia Taoist came down: "Old Qian is back, and he is still bringing guests, let's go out to greet you." ”

Erniang snorted: "The guests of the old money must be annoying, I still grow vegetables, big catch, you have an abominable face, don't be ashamed, come with me." ”

The Danshen Taoist people were helpless and only took Tao out of the mountain.

The person next to Qian Keju is wearing an official uniform and a lovely smile, but his realm is not very high.

"This is Xue Tuiguan of Fucheng, and this time thanks to Lord Xue, he can correct the name of this door. Qian Keju said with a smile.

Danshen Taoist people are not good at compliments, and they casually said something that was not nutritious, and invited Xue Tuiguan to enter the door, ate some fairy fruit and fairy tea, and left with some gifts, and did not talk about anything nutritious.

Or Qian Keju roughly said about the process.

"This incident, the government at all levels attaches great importance to it, the state city re-sent people to the Liumei Hall General Altar to investigate, the results from the underground digging out of the property, found a Buddha statue, was stolen by Guangfa Temple many years ago, proving that Liumei Hall is indeed full of evil deeds, five lights because of this matter, commend the door for no fault, reward merit 100, chivalrous hall also expressed 50 points of chivalrous value. ”

Danshen Taoist frowned: "The Buddha statue of the old corpse is very valuable, and the five lights only give 100 merits, it's too dark." ”

Qian Keju coughed and said: "This incident is not small, if it weren't for Wudeng's gesture, do you think the officials at all levels would give face? Even so, I have sent more than a thousand immortal coins out of the river." ”

Danshen Daodao: "So much, you wait and ask Erniang, she will scrape off at least two magic weapons from Liumei Hall!"

Qian Keju was taken aback: "I don't dare to look for her, anyway, you have to find a way, the master of the door, I have less and less working capital now." ”

Danshen Taoist paused: "This master is really not a human being, it's a big deal to close the door!"

Qian Keju shrugged: "This set is useless to me, what do I lose by closing the door?" Okay, tell me some good news, Xiao Tao, you have built the third layer of the foundation? I really didn't see the wrong person, well, I have a business here, you can finally make a contribution to the door." ”

Tao Qi listened to this, mixed blessings, having a business means having external water, but he may also have to fight with his life.

"Jin Sanshun of the county town celebrates his son's success in building the foundation, and hopes that Lou Luomen can send someone to support the party, and you can get a red envelope of five immortal coins if you go over with this invitation. Qian Keju handed over a red sticker.

"There are so few five immortal coins, and you have to go to the county seat specifically?" Tao Qi didn't understand.

"Are you rich?" the eyes of the two masters shot at Tao Qi together, like two dogs that saw flesh and bones.