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I won't say much about thanks, but I'm grateful to see a lot of people giving assists.

It's just that I was given a class by my daughter-in-law today, a little bored, she is a master of Chinese from Central South University, and it can be said that she is very outstanding in this part of the article, especially has a good insight into martial arts, and she is also a magazine contract writer.

She said some of my words today, it is indeed very right, looking back, I do have a lot of shortcomings, first, I did not implement the essence of martial arts, so many chapters focus on describing martial arts, and the word chivalry seems to have been abandoned by me, only martial arts without chivalry, how can it be called martial arts. Second, I have too few incidents, and the whole has been focusing on the confrontation between Ye Feng and King Xian, for a long time, the relatives will definitely feel tired, and they should be interspersed with some small events related to the people's livelihood and national conditions, so that they will not make the relatives feel bored, and can highlight Ye Feng's chivalry. Third, the pit buried in front of me was not used well, and the magic gate has a lot of room to play.

Looking back on the previous fifty-three chapters, I did have a lot of shortcomings, and my original thinking was also problematic, and I didn't attach much importance to grades, just as a hobby, but now I want to make a clear goal, since I choose unpopular martial arts, then I want to write the best.

I was a little impetuous before.,People who write martial arts are the most jealous and impetuous.,And I may also be a little complacent because of the results.,Proud and complacent.,The text of the last two chapters is not very natural.,I'll work hard.,Redouble your efforts.,There was originally a change today.,Because of the re-combing of the back plot.,Time has passed a little.,I'm sorry.,It's still going to be updated tomorrow at noon.。

I know that I don't write well, and everyone is welcome to speak to me, I accept any poisonous tongue, and I will slowly improve myself, if you love martial arts, please support "Yunshui Sword", my goal is to write the purest martial arts!!! thank you for your support!!