You can add it and talk to me...... After all, I first wrote it two years ago, and although I read it again when I started writing, I still missed a lot of things.

Then I want to say that when I read this book two years later, I looked at it completely as a reader, and I felt that the beginning was not very well written, but later, I felt a little bit from the first time Su Han killed Su Ying and the monks of the Seven Sects in the ruins. Before and after it was put on the shelves, the battle of Chihai City, although when I read it when I finished writing that paragraph, I didn't feel very good, but when I looked at it again this time, I found that it was really quite wonderful.

Later, sometimes there will be plays, but most of the time I can still watch it, but I can only say that the writing skills are not solid, or too frizzy.

Let's talk about it here.

Originally, in the previous idea, there should be a large section to write about going north to the snowfield, but when I picked it up again, I found that it would be very tiring to write according to the original idea, and the things that were written were also very long, and then I broke it. The finish should feel a bit rushed. But further north I really can't write it, so I decisively let the protagonist go home to play.

Then add the group, point out something and foreshadowing or something, and be grateful...... (To be continued......)