Niu Er looked at the title of the book he had just changed, and the more he read it, the more satisfied he became.

He even felt that this was the core of the novel, and it was the most appropriate title for the novel.

Although Chen Qingyang is not a broken shoe in the true sense.

But after all, she betrayed her husband in prison, and was tricked by Wang Er in the name of "great friendship", and then she got involved with Wang Er, the first brother.

And when they meet again after reaching middle age, the two still can't help but relive their old dreams again.

So it doesn't seem too much to say that she's a broken shoe.

As for the background of the times and the significance of the characteristics of the times, those are all things that the teacher teaches in class and what needs to be focused on before the exam.

Readers are mostly happy to read a novel, and at most they can get some artistic edification and ideological enlightenment along the way. None of them had to delve into anything else.

The legendary experiences of the characters and their character traits and fates are what the reader cares about.

What makes Niu Er a little worried is whether the word "broken shoes" can pass the trial smoothly. Just as he worries about the whole novel of The Golden Age, he worries about the same problem.

Dongsheng Shenzhou's standards for the review of literary and artistic works are not very clear to him. Only by constantly probing and reading more other books, especially the more popular books nowadays, can we gradually grasp the appropriate scale after comparison.

Of course, the maverick pig, which was successfully published without moving a word, still gave him a lot of confidence.

After the title of "The Golden Age" was finalized, Niu Er's mind began to turn to "The Green-Haired Monster".

He felt that the title of the book had to be changed. Even if the title of "The Golden Age" is not changed, this one must also be changed.

When Niu Er first read this novel in his previous life, he was very uninterested in this title. He almost missed the book.

The dialogue between "Lao Chen" and "I" is verbose and contrived, and it takes up a lot of space before and after, but it is useless. On the contrary, it seriously weakens the core content and highlights of the book.

There's nothing wrong with the magical ending of the second half. Because she still gives hope to the reader in the face of impossibility, and gives the reader a space for imagination. Although it ends in tragedy, when the reader knows that Yang Suyao is just living in another world in another identity, the feeling of despair and sadness will naturally be somewhat alleviated.

This may also be one of the reasons why Wang Er finally used the title of the book "The Green-Haired Water Monster".

However, a touching first love or love story, or even a love story that people will never forget when they read it, when you first see the title of the book, you simply don't know what to do.

If you go to a bookstore and decide whether to flip through the book or not by just looking at the title, the title of the green-haired monster will definitely lead to an unexpected loss of some of the target readers, or even a lot of loss.

At least the title of the book should not immediately remind people of the main content of the book. Even the title makes it impossible to guess what the book might be about.

If it weren't for him on the bookshelf of the fiction category, many people might have thought of him as a biological book or an anecdote or something.

The current Dongsheng Divine Continent is almost close to the era when he hiccuped.

Whether it is pure literature or fast food literature, it cannot be whispered on the same day as Wang Er's time. The title, introduction, opening and other elements almost determine whether the book is left in the bag or dismissive.

In particular, Niu Er has deleted most of the content of the second half of the green-haired water monster, and this title is even more inappropriate.

But Niu Er pondered for a long time, but still could not find a title that satisfied him very well.

In desperation, he had no choice but to cross out the top of the title of the green-haired water monster and first write the two big words "first love".

Niu Er silently looked at these two big words for a long time.

I still don't think it's right enough.

If Wang Er hadn't been tied to the bed because of a severe cold, for the sake of love, he would not hesitate to be a water monster with Yang Suyao.

If Wang Er had received Yang Suyao's letter earlier, he would definitely have to go to Jiaodong to find Yang Suyao......

The two missed too many opportunities to be together.

The two have too many opportunities to stay together for the rest of their lives.

However, because of all kinds of mistakes, because Wang Er was not resolute and resolute before, he finally separated the yin and yang.

This is a first love that should not have been lost.

Yes, the first love that should not be lost. At least there is more suspense than just the word first love, and there is some obvious sadness, which is obviously closer to some plots than the word first love.

Niu Er thought about it further.

Losing the two words is still a little flat, and it lacks a bit of ups and downs.

Chen Hui lost Yang Suyao because of his carelessness and procrastination. Because his temperament is not sharp enough, he lacks some of the decisiveness that a man should have.

lost Yang Suyao, it is better to say that he lost Yang Suyao......

"First love that shouldn't be lost".

The final title of "The Green-Haired Water Monster" was finalized by Niu Er.

Although Niu Er didn't think it was very good, he couldn't think of a better name for a while.

At this point, both novels are considered finalized.

When Niu Er took out the large envelope and was about to write the delivery address, he suddenly stopped writing again.

Originally, he wanted to vote both novels for "Meng Xin".

After making so many calls today, he has a new idea.

In this grand prix jointly organized by five magazines, in addition to the Bole of "Meng Xin", two magazines, "September" and "Eagle Flying", offered him a remuneration of 1,000 words and 100 yuan, which is the highest remuneration offered to him so far.

The premise of "September" and "Eagle Flying" is that Niu Er's novels only need to be of the standard of publication, and no matter anything else, he will be paid according to the standard of 1,000 words and 100 yuan.

"September" and "Eagle Flying" say so, and there is nothing wrong with doing so.

After all, Niu Er has only published an essay so far. Whether he will write a novel or not, and what he can write a novel, is a suspense that no one knows.

Historically, there have been many essays or essays, but not all of them are masters of writing novels.

Niu Er just took advantage of the current fame and popularity.

While it is up to the editors and editors-in-chief to decide whether the level of publication is sufficient, it is almost not.

Otherwise, it is not only Niu Er who is laughed at, but even those editors and editors-in-chief will have to take the blame together.

But as long as Niu Er's novel can be published under the review of the editors or even a little revision, and even as long as it has the value of revision, it can still be published under the editors' brilliant pen.

As long as it is published, the magazine earns it.

Niuer's current popularity is high, as long as Niuer's name appears in magazines and propaganda media, it will definitely be able to harvest a wave of fans.

"Meng Xin" also increased Niu Er's remuneration, reaching 80 yuan for 1,000 words. The premise is similar to those two, as long as it can reach the level of publication.

Niu Er didn't know that there were so many entanglements and even filthiness between "Meng Xin" and "September". If it weren't for "Meng Xin" publishing his debut novel, he would have thought about it almost nothing, and would have thrown these two novels into "September" and "Eagle Flying" respectively.

He only needs to make money, and he doesn't have so much spare time to take care of the rest.

The hesitation he made in the end is the belonging of these two novels.

However, after only a moment's thought, he immediately made a choice.

"The First Love That Shouldn't Be Lost" voted for "Meng Xin".

"I Gave the First Time to a Broken Shoe" voted for "September".

Because "I Gave the First Time to a Broken Shoe" has 40,000 words, the remuneration standard for "September" is 1,000 words and 100 yuan, and the remuneration for this novel alone is 4,000 yuan.

"First Love" is only 22,000 words, and the remuneration standard for "Meng Xin" is 80 yuan per 1,000 words, and the remuneration is 1,760 yuan.

Knowing that there are more and less, you can settle the account.

It was the interests that helped him make the fastest and final choice.

However, after calculating the remuneration, the total remuneration for the two books totaling 2,000 words is only 4,000 yuan for broken shoes plus 1,760 yuan for first love, which is only 5,760 yuan.

Niu Er looked at the calculated total remuneration and was stunned for a long time.

There are not twenty or thirty newspapers that have earned more money for reprinting that little article.

This is still a secondary creation.

Especially "The Green-Haired Monster", the first half is almost rewritten, and the second half is the same...... It's already taken a lot of effort.

If it is original, the number of brain cells that need to die is incalculable, and the time spent cannot be only a week or two.

If you don't take into account the prize money of the tournament and the possible royalties in the future, this business seems to be really bad.

Not to mention making a head of hair half-bald, making these few bird money may not even be enough for the tobacco money burned when the hair is picked.

However, looking at it, Niu Er suddenly grinned silently and smiled.

My mother worked hard to sell vegetables for a day, and with the cost and labor, the income was only 180 yuan.

When I first came through, my lunch and pocket money didn't exceed ten yuan every day.

If Mom gives an extra three or five yuan, it will be enough for him to be happy all day.