Huh, it's a bit difficult to complete the third watch today, because the day before yesterday it was said that it was to get the manuscript, but in fact, it didn't get it, but it took several hours to deliberate on the story and details of the next few sheets. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

I said in this book, it looks good in the details, many plots are honestly more ordinary, unlike my previous books, there is always a twist of God, if you want to grasp the reading experience, you have to work the details, the taste of life, the taste of first love, inadvertent humor, the excitement and blood of the game are outlined one by one, so, when I don't have time to think about the subtleties, that is, the few that play the dream team, the story has, the plot is no problem, the characters are there, the fight design is also consciously OK, the blood and touching are even more out, but it has lost the agility between the words, it seems not mellow enough, and the taste is not wrapped。

After pondering the night before yesterday, three chapters yesterday, the first one and a half today, my subtle feeling is back, the writing is very smooth, some chapters are updated on time, and some procrastination is purely the relationship between my slow fighting and repeated revisions of some details, however, the details of the previous pondering are here, the number of words in the third chapter just now is relatively small, fortunately, tomorrow is the day of two watches, I have time to think, well, tomorrow the two chapters will be at seven and eleven o'clock in the evening, I have a good night's sleep in the morning, and then think about the story carefully, ponder the taste, and sort out the things behind。

So far, 16 days to complete ten times of addition, completed half of the number of additions I promised, the second half of the month to continue to work hard! Of course, there will be a monthly addition in the future, but the number will be controlled, not for the sake of speed, not even time to ponder the story, to be honest, writing things is really interesting, the same content, the same few sentences, the order of position is reversed, plus a sentence of other things, it may be a dry one, and the meaning is long.

Okay, let's stop being verbose, ask for recommendation tickets and monthly passes for half of the commitment! )