9. It must be a comic

PS: Big Brother Xiaobai asks for a recommendation ticket

Seeing the scar cute little white children's shoes, like a little rabbit, quickly slipped away, Zhang sighed didn't understand what's going on, as if he was afraid of him, didn't he talk very easily just now? Oh, Xiaomi is not easy, the whole process is afraid.

Xiaobai's machine-gun-like words just now, Zhang Si was a little stunned, and it took three replays in his mind to understand that it was for the Xiaomi platform, and it was quite a little bit of a young lady's style.

Zhang Si picked a movie at home and watched it on the sofa. Last time, I picked a movie with a high rating, and this time I picked a movie with a high box office, the score is relatively high, and the box office is really high.

After reading it, it was already very late, Zhang Si went downstairs and came to the activity area on the first floor, some children had already gone back to the dormitory to sleep, and some children were watching TV, sitting on their own small chairs, holding their little heads high, pressed and brushing.

Xiaobai sat in this part of the children, a pair of big eyes were almost glued to the TV, and there was no other existence in the eyes.

Zhang Si couldn't help but look at her a few more times, because she was too "domineering".

I saw the little white children's shoes holding millet in his left hand, Meng Chengcheng's shoulder with his right hand, with a band-aid on his face, wearing Great China, looking like I am a big brother, which makes people look sideways.

Teacher Koyanagi reminded her several times, but it didn't work, and saw that she just looked like a big brother, not really a big brother, so she didn't see it.

Zhang Si chatted with the staff for a few words, telling the children not to watch TV for too long, but the staff turned around and turned off the TV, driving the children to sleep like ducks.

Zhang Si: β†’_β†’

What do you mean? I haven't had time to leave yet! Doesn't this make the children hate me?

Xiaobai stared at the TV that had been turned off for a few seconds, ran to the staff, and asked if she could watch it for another 5 minutes, 2 minutes, she must know if the little donkey will die, otherwise she won't be able to sleep tonight, and her dreams are full of donkeys.

The staff looked at Zhang Si with an inquiring eye.

Zhang sigh:*&%Β₯#@

It's not fun for you to push me into the fire pit, you have to use a loudspeaker to identify me! What will this make Xiaobai think of me? I just reconciled!

Sure enough, Xiaobai glared at him, sharpened his little milk teeth, pulled the staff to him, and asked, "Uncle, what is this?"

Two fingers were stretched out and dangled in front of his eyes.

What does it mean?

Zhang sighed and said, "2. ”

Say I'm 2??Fart black just canceled.,It's a new nickname?

After making sure that Zhang Si was not drunk, Xiaobai relieved himself and begged to watch TV again and see that the little donkey was alive, otherwise she would not have a good life tonight.

Zhang sighed and said, "Then watch it for 5 minutes, and start the timer now." ”

He said to the staff, "You can take the other children to the dormitory, and I will take care of them here." ”

After 10 minutes......

Zhang sighed: "5 minutes has already arrived, and now it has been two 5 minutes." ”

Xiaobai stared at the TV and said without looking back: "But the little donkey hasn't been rescued yet." ”

Zhang Si is also watching cartoons, he is a screenwriter, if he writes, the little donkey will be rescued at least after two episodes, and he will have to satisfy the appetite of children before he can get out of trouble, how can it be so fast, first suppress and then raise, in order to attract innocent children like Xiaobai.

"Sleep, sleep, I'll turn off the TV, you can continue watching it tomorrow. Let me tell you, I have seen that the little donkey is not dead, and it will definitely be rescued. ”

finally drove Xiaobai to the bedroom, Zhang Si also returned to the room, sat back at the desk, turned on the computer, saw the boiled peanuts in the bowl, pinched one, peeled off the shell, revealing two plump cooked peanuts, a fragrance wafted to the tip of the nose, making people want to send it to their mouths.

He moved his mouse and opened a real estate agency to check the housing prices on West Chang'an Avenue, and indeed as the private chef owner said today, the housing prices in this area are ridiculously high, and the rent is prohibitive.

Zhang Si browsed for a while, but didn't see how many houses for sale were on West Chang'an Street, most of them were only rented and not sold, and they were priceless and not marketable.

Zhang Si estimated,If the land of the Little Red Horse School Park is sold,He will immediately be worth hundreds of millions,No longer have to worry about the funds of the school park,Don't worry about work,You can choose to live the life you want to live。

If he has passion, he can write a script by himself, pull up the crew by himself, be a director by himself, get started, chase his dreams, completely omit the stage of starting and accumulation, and do it in one step. Of course, it is not known whether it will succeed or not.

Zhang Si was very moved,The only concern is,The little red horse school garden was left to him by his grandparents,And,Although he doesn't know anything about it,But you can guess,When the two old people were still there,Cherish this place very much。

The Little Red Horse Late Night School Park embodies the hard work of the two elders.

Zhang sighed hesitantly, didn't figure it out, closed the webpage, and went to sleep!

I came to the company early the next morning, and a staff member brought a new script.

Zhang Si opened it and took a look, the name of this script is "Under Tianyu Mountain".

These days, Zhang Si's workflow is generally to read the script in the morning and hold a meeting to discuss it in the afternoon.

Others also received it, Jiang Rong, who was sitting opposite Zhang Si, turned her head from the front of the computer and asked, "Zhang Si, what is the name of the script you received?"

Everyone doesn't necessarily read the same script, sometimes everyone has a copy, which is different, sometimes it is the same book, sometimes several people are the same, and the other people are different, so Jiang Rong will have this question.

"Under the Tianyu Mountain". Zhang sighed and said, "What about yours?"

Jiang Rong showed him the script in her hand and said with a smile: "What a strange script, it's the first time I've seen such a long name." ”

Zhang sighed and saw: "This brave man is obviously very strong but overly cautious"!

Isn't that the script that came with him when he submitted his resume??!!

He also thought that the studio had forgotten about the script, and it seems that he intends to evaluate it today.

"I think the name has a lot of personality, it's easy to remember, and it's very pointed, it's strong, it's overly cautious, I think it's funny. Zhang Si silently boasted.

Jiang Rong heard this, thought about it, nodded and said That's right.

The scripts they evaluate are anonymous without the author's name, so that everyone can speak openly and without worry.

The script in Zhang Si's hand also has no name, but after reading it, he feels that it is definitely written by an old hand, and the plot is rigorous and logical, which is very attractive.

"Hahaha~~"

Jiang Rong, who was sitting opposite, suddenly laughed, turned his head sideways and said to Zhang Si: "Zhang Si, this script is so funny, so funny, do you want to take a look? This brave man is funny, it's a serious kind of funny, do you know how he beat a slime at the bottom of the biological chain?"

Zhang Si is quite supportive.

"How?"

If you want to support the scene, you will work hard to the end, Zhang Si pretended to think about it, and then asked: "Use the ultimate?"

Jiang Rong smiled: "I guessed some, but it's not accurate, keep trying." ”

Zhang sighed wrongly twice, Jiang Rong couldn't help it, and laughed: "He actually went all out, with all his strength, do you know? He is a brave man who was summoned to save the world, a peerless genius in the God Realm, he has to go all out to kill a slime, haha." ”

Zhang Si laughed twice, and Jiang Rong said again: "Do you know? When he fights with others, he has to prepare three pairs of armor, one to wear, one to spare, and one to spare, hahaha." Who wrote this, it must be a joke. ”

Zhang sigh:( Μ„γ‚§ Μ„;)

Allow you to reorganize the language!

Zhang Si didn't reply to her, and the others interjected.

"Yes, yes, I'm also reading this script, this brave man is going to laugh me to death, I've never seen such a cowardly person. ”

Another person said: "People don't call it cowardice, they are overly cautious." What kind of person is this, what the hell has he been through. ”

Someone else answered: "He is a man who is greedy for life and afraid of death." ”

"I don't think he's cautious, but he's definitely not a greedy person for life and afraid of death. ”

"Isn't this called greed for life and fear of death?"

......

Jiang Rong also joined their discussion: "He's a tease. ”

"Which script are you talking about?"

Because he has his own script, Zhang Si is looking forward to the evaluation meeting in the afternoon.

In the afternoon, after lunch, I took a nap, and at two o'clock, the deputy leader notified everyone to go to the conference room for a meeting.

Zhang Si took his laptop, came to the old position and sat down, Jiang Rong sat on his right hand, and excitedly lowered his voice and said to him: "I finally want to know which one of the brave people wrote this book." ”

Zhang Si stared at her for a moment, thinking to himself, are you sure you want to keep calling this author funny?

Lao Liu, the leader of the group, was the last to arrive, and when he sat down, he said: "Old look, come, talk about the script in your hand, Zhang Si will come first." ”

He sighed first every time.

Zhang Si was used to it, and said when he heard the words: "My script is called "Under the Tianyu Mountain", which is about ...... Lots of advantages......"

After talking about a lot of advantages, let's start talking about the disadvantages.

Jiang Rong whispered beside her: "There are three shortcomings. ”

Zhang sighed: "There are three shortcomings. ”

Jiang Rong glanced at Zhang Si proudly, she was used to Zhang Si's habits, and she doubted whether he had obsessive-compulsive disorder, and every time he evaluated the script, he listed three shortcomings.

As for the advantages, there may be one, or there may be many, but the disadvantages will always be three.

Zhang Si continued: "First, the whole story is a bit boring, lacking novelty, and slightly boring......"

After finishing speaking, the team leader Lao Liu asked again: "For these three shortcomings, you can talk about the solution." ”

Zhang sighed: "For the first one, I think we can add a supporting role, the main function is to enliven the atmosphere, for example, pet ......"

There are many such examples, such as Mushu Dragon in the cartoon "Mulan", because of the addition of this small character, this cartoon is much more lively and interesting.

There are such settings in many anime, not only anime, but also live-action film and television, often setting up a comic around the protagonist to enliven the atmosphere, such as the fat man in "Notes on Tomb Robbery".

After listening to it, the team leader Lao Liu nodded noncommittally, and asked the three colleagues who also received this script to talk about their views.

After everyone finished speaking, he said: "I will give feedback to the crew all the opinions you raised." ”

"Crew?" someone asked curiously.

Lao Liu nodded and said: "This is actually a project that the factory is preparing to start, this script is written by the screenwriter in the factory, I came to listen to our opinions and suggestions, you are all good." ”

Everyone was a little excited, this was the first time they had encountered a script that they had evaluated to put into use.

Lao Liu: "Okay, let's continue, Jiang Rong, I see that you are eager to try, tell me about yours." ”