0131, "Bandage Freak Villa Murder Incident"

"I didn't expect Tang Yu to be a dream of the southern kite. ”

Yun Feng, who returned to the bedroom, still remembered this matter.

I think it's too coincidental, I'm afraid I don't even dare to write like this.

Shaking his head and smiling, Yun Feng leaned back in the chair, crossed his legs on the bed bar, and began to reminisce about the Conan anime.

He still has an impression of the 1,800 cases in the Conan anime such as "The Tottori Spider House Incident", "The Kiritengu Murder Incident", "The Bandage Monster Villa Murder Incident" and "The Piano Sonata 'Moonlight' Murder Incident".

"Which case to write well?"

The first two involve local legends of the island country, and it is estimated that many people will not be able to understand them.

"Then choose one or the other. ”

Yun Feng suddenly thought that "Piano Sonata 'Moonlight' Murder Incident" had a small design with the piano piece "Moonlight" in the case.

And the historical trajectory of entertainment on the Blue Star has been different from that on Earth since 1636, so there is no Beethoven person, and there is no piano piece "Moonlight", so this case cannot be written.

"I don't have a choice, I have to write about the case of "Murder in the Villa of the Bandage Freak". ”

Yun Feng picked the corners of his eyes, and just now he boasted about Haikou, saying that he would write a few articles and send them to Zheng Rong's mailbox, but the result was just one.

Or because it's hard to write.

He opened his laptop, created a new document, then banged on his keyboard to start writing the short story.

Shinichi is a high school student who is also a detective.

On this day, Shinichi and his girlfriend Xiaolan were invited by their good friend Yuanzi to go to a villa in the mountains to play.

The forest trail, although the road surface is uneven, is the fragrance of birds and flowers, and the air is fresh.

Xiao Lan said: "It's strange, I remember that villa is in this area, yes." ”

"Could it be that the two of us are going the wrong way?"

Xiaolan said, "How could it be that I went the wrong way, I should have taken a detour to another road." ”

A few minutes later, the two walked through a grove of trees and finally saw the villa.

The villa is located in a strange location, a few meters ahead, there is a bottomless ravine, there is no end in sight on the left and right, and it needs to be crossed by a wooden suspension bridge.

"Shinichi, it's over there. ”

"There seems to be a man on the bridge. ”

......

The two saw a man in the middle of the wooden suspension bridge, wearing a long black cloak, walking forward.

"Huh!"

Suddenly, the man in black turned around.

Both of them were taken aback, the head of the man in black was wrapped with white bandages, and only his eyes were exposed, this dress was really a little terrifying......]

An hour later.

Yun Feng pressed the key combination of "Save Text".

"Huh. ”

The text real-time statistics column shows that 8546 words were entered in one hour.

Unexpectedly, the hand speed was fast again.

That's right, the speed of Yunfeng code words has already reached 8,000 words per hour.

But you don't have to think about the plot, and this short story is written while thinking about the plot.

To know.

The limit of code word speed is not hand speed, but brain speed.

It's often a quick hand, but you can't quickly turn the plot in your mind into words.

After writing it, Yun Feng checked it three more times.

Because it is a story of solving the case, it is necessary to see if there are any bugs in the plot and whether the reasoning of the case is reasonable.

After confirming that there was no problem, it was sent to Zheng Rong.

I can't say if I can win the first prize, Yun Feng is also the first time to write a short story with such a small number of words, but he is still very confident in entering the top 20.

His requirements are not high, as long as he can be compiled into a collection of Chinese short stories, mainly to mix some of the achievements of his main business [writer], of course, the higher the ranking, the better.

Meanwhile.

Zheng Rong, who was working overtime, saw a new email prompt.

"It's okay so soon?"

opened the email and saw that it was Yun Feng who sent the manuscript to participate in the National Short Story Competition, Zheng Rong was a little surprised.

It's only been less than three hours.

Although the word count requirement is relatively small, it does not mean that it is easy to write.

It's not easy to tell a story in just 10,000 words, and it's exciting.

Zheng Rong then opened the text and saw that the story written by Yun Feng was called "The Murder of the Bandage Monster Villa".

"Killings?"

Suspenseful reasoning ......

Zheng Rong can see from the name what kind of short story this is.

This is also the choice of many authors.

"More than 8,000 words, okay. ”

The number of words is neither long nor short, just right.

Zheng Rong forgot to talk about this just now, and he was worried that Yun Feng would write a short story of about 150,000 words that was serialized on the microcircle.

He lit a cigarette and began to read the text.

"Did you write the murderer at the beginning?"

After reading the first few hundred words, I found that the murderer had been written.

The name of the story says "Bandage Monster", and the protagonist sees a "Bandaged Man in Black" on the wooden suspension bridge at the beginning, and it is clear that this is the murderer.

Doesn't writing like this make the reader feel less expectant?

Or is it deliberately written that way?

"It's kind of interesting. ”

Zheng Rong continued to look down.

["What, there are so many rooms here on the second floor, which one is it, our room, it should be in the ......"

I saw Xiaolan step forward and open the door of the first room on the left.

"Ah......h

There was a man inside who was changing clothes, and Xiaolan quickly apologized, "I'm sorry, I'm sorry." ”

However, the doors of three rooms were opened in a row, and there was a man changing clothes inside......]

Change of clothes?

Could the man in black with a bandage walking to the back of the villa be among them?

Zheng Rong's curiosity was aroused.

In the villa, in addition to Shinichi, Xiaolan, and Yuanzi, there are five people.

This is followed by a bland plot that only mentions a friend who died a few years ago.

The bandaged man in black did not reappear, nor did he have any clues about the killing.

Zheng Rong's heart also relaxed with the bland plot.

However, at this moment, Xiaolan was attacked with an axe by a man in black wrapped in bandages in the woods.

"It's coming!"

The plot finally unfolds.

Someone was killed.

And Xiaolan has also been attacked by various men in black wrapped in bandages.

"It seems that the murderer is one of the men who changed clothes in the three rooms, but who could it be?"

Zheng Rong couldn't help but recall the previous plot, and then reasoned, but in the end he failed, because there are too few clues known so far.

I can only keep watching.

Half an hour later.

Zheng Rong exhaled a long breath, feeling a little chilly in his back.

The horror of the whole case is greater than the degree of reasoning, but the method is not good, and it can be said that the murderer is very bold.

By cutting off the victim's head, then using the model to disguise himself as a bandage monster, and swinging the model directly from the side of the house to complete his alibi, putting the head of the corpse into his clothes to disguise himself in his false body shape, and taking the head out of the villa, these two methods of pretending that he is not the murderer can be said to be very powerful, putting the head in the clothes and holding it and running.

Such a bold murderer had to be convinced.

is just over 8,000 words, and the content is extremely complete, so that when people read it, they can't help but reason who is the murderer.

Zheng Rong looked at it again, and this time he looked at it very carefully.

After reading it, I had a new harvest, and I couldn't help but sigh, "Human nature, human heart." ”

It's not just a story, it's a cautionary tale.

Just like the words written in the last paragraph, the betrayal of a friend, which led to the death of a friend, this tragedy also turned a friend into a devil, and it didn't take long for this villa to finally get relief from this tragic night, but everyone should be careful, once negligent, this murderous devil will appear in everyone's heart, in the name of revenge, mutilating life.

"He is worthy of being a cross-border king. ”

Zheng Rong believes that the first prize of this national short story competition is stable.

But......

He felt there was a small flaw in the story.

What is the significance of the appearance of Xiaolan's character?

If you say, just to push the door and see the murderer change clothes, and then the murderer wants to kill people and carry out various attacks, you can completely replace it with the protagonist.

"I don't understand, I don't understand. ”

Zheng Rong gave up thinking about Yunfeng, it was not at the same level, and he couldn't figure it out at all.

After arranging the version, he sent the manuscript to the mailbox of the National Short Story Contest.

All that's left is to wait for the selection, and the results will be announced on July 1.