Liu Qianqian had already learned these basic things last time.

The foundation of character creation in the script is the core three elements.

The desires, hindrances and actions of the characters.

There is a desire to hinder, and there is an obstacle to action.

Falling into this script, the male protagonist's desire is to teach the male partner a lesson, and his obstacle is that he is inexplicably sucked into the box world, so he can't teach the male partner a lesson immediately, so he can only leave the box with the male partner.

After reading the outline, it is the speaking stage.

At this stage, everyone constantly puts forward their own ideas and finds sparks of inspiration in the collision of ideas.

Basically, you can say whatever comes to mind.

Liu Qianqian listened to the discussion for a while and said her thoughts: "I think it's a little weak at first, it seems to be a conflict, but it is not the core conflict, and the contrast and highlights are not enough." It should be more interesting to adjust the relationship between the male protagonist and the male supporting role. ”

Andy said: "I agree, according to the current setting, the female supporting role will be difficult to deal with, I don't see that there is a supporting actress plot in the back, if she can't play any role in the plot, then Y doesn't have to appear." ”

Other writers said, "Where do you start?"

Liu Qianqian thought for a while: "The relationship between the male protagonist and the male supporting role, the hostile relationship must be retained, but can it be more hostile and more pure conflict?"

Luke said, "The cop and the thief, the gangster, the righteous and the evil?"

Other screenwriters said: "I don't think there's a need to be so rigid in conflict, it can be more natural, the opposition between black and white is a bit cliché." ”

Liu Qianqian thought for a while: "Father and son, brother?"

Luke asked, "What did father and son say?"

Liu Qianqian: "Suppose it is a father and son who have a very poor relationship, and the son comes home this time to ask for money, and the father refuses to give it, thinking that the son is doing bad things, but in fact, the son just wants to realize his dream, and when the two have a dispute, they are sucked into the box left by the mother." ”

After discussing it for a while, they thought that Liu Qianqian's was quite interesting, and Luke asked her, "Didn't you tell your son's dream to the family?

These questions must be asked, and if one sentence can clearly explain the contradictions and misunderstandings, there is no need to expand and write, because how to write is a poor toss.

Liu Qianqian didn't think about it so completely, this kind of meeting is like this, everyone said it by instinct.

Andy took it: "The son's dream should also play a certain role in the box, and the father's profession is also, so that when the two of them act, it will not be too abrupt." ”

"Motorcycle racer. A screenwriter proposed, "But my son was actually injured and has retired, so he can only be the owner of a car dealership, but for some reason, he needs money, and he has no choice but to talk to his family." ”

"But I think that the profession of a car dealer owner generally does not cause my father to be dissatisfied, after all, it is a stable job. ”

"That's right. ”

Luke said: "Then I will first write down that my son is in urgent need of money, and he is more anxious than his father and must get out of the box immediately." ”

"Shouldn't the son get married, people with family burdens need money even more. ”

"Yes. ”

"But there is a contradiction here, if something happens to his son's family, it is impossible for the father to stand by and watch, right?"

"Do you want to set your dad as a scumbag, alcoholics or something. ”

"Is the father-son relationship broken because my father can't do it? ”

The meeting was held from afternoon to evening, and the discussion continued, and it couldn't be decided for a while, Liu Qianqian was dizzy with hunger and drank coffee. Luke glanced at her: "Let's stop here today, tomorrow morning at half past nine, come on time." ”

"Got it. ”

"Oh my God, I'm so hungry!" Ranwen

Liu Qianqian was packing her things, and Andy came over: "Do you want to eat together?"

"I asked Du Xiao. ”

"Let him come along. ”

"He's in a special situation, wait for me. ”

[There are thousands of hearts: where is it?]

[Du Zi who won't be hungry: company. 】

[There are thousands of hearts: how to eat at night. 】

[Du Zi who won't be hungry: You eat it yourself. 】

Liu Qianqian closed her phone: "Then where are we going to eat?"

Luke said, "Fast food restaurant?"

Liu Qianqian: "......"

Andy asked, "I've seen your Weibo." ”

After cooperating with Liu Qianqian before, he knew that Liu Qianqian was not a screenwriter, but an actor, so he watched all of Liu Qianqian's works and went to Weibo to flip through them.

"Are you making a cooking tutorial video?"

"yes, what?"

Andy shook his head: "Then don't go to the fast food restaurant, I'll take you to eat something good!"

Luke said with a smile: "It's not that I don't speak for my country, but our country E is a famous food desert, only afternoon tea snacks are not bad, believe me, after you eat the food of country E, you will agree with my decision to go to a fast food restaurant, after all, although the hamburgers produced on the industrial assembly line are not particularly delicious, but there will be no problems." ”

Liu Qianqian groaned: "It makes sense, I actually studied in Europe, and my brothers and sisters have also opened restaurants in Europe as chefs, but most of them are in country F or I, and they don't seem to be in country E." ”

Luke said, "We don't think it's delicious ourselves, but it's all traditional food, so what can we do?"

Andy sneered: "I don't know? I took Liu to a special restaurant, it's a local restaurant, hey, you also know, it's Fufu Building." ”

Luke was silent for a while: "Why don't you pick Fufulou?"

Liu Qianqian asked, "What's wrong with Fufu Building?"

She hadn't heard of it, and it was probably a local restaurant opened by a foreigner, after all, natives rarely gave restaurants such names.

Luke said: "Fufu Mansion belongs to the Ye family, oh you don't know yet, it is the property of the Alicia family. ”

Liu Qianqian said: "I've heard of it, but isn't her family in the seasoning business, why did she still open a restaurant." ”

Andy said: "It hasn't been open for long, it seems to have only opened in the past few years, it tastes good, most of the local dishes in country E are eaten by international students, and the shops with many people are always more authentic, and Fufulou is one of them." ”

Luke frowned and said, "Andy." ”

There was some reproach in his tone.

Andy shrugged: "What are you doing? We're just going to eat! Besides, there is nothing in the first place, and the more you hide, the more you look weak, how strange it is, it's better to be frank!"

Liu Qianqian nodded: "Andy is right, this way, I'll invite everyone to eat, you have already had a treat last time, and the move has caused you trouble before." ”

"It's all right," said Luke, "where to be embarrassed to let you come." ”

Liu Qianqian said: "What's embarrassing, you think so, I make a lot of money, and I should have a treat." ”

Indeed, Luke only then remembered that Liu Qianqian is not only a screenwriter, but also a big star in his country.