Chapter 0003: There are signs of fire, signing
A few days later, sometime in the editorial department.
On the boxy seat in the office area of a certain point in the magic capital, a middle-aged man with thick eyebrows, big eyes, blank eyes, and a little decadent spirit was stretching his waist and staring at the screen on the computer and talking to himself.
"The beginning is cumbersome, the language is clichéd, and the whole article is more cumbersome than the plot, so it is dismissed. ”
This middle-aged man's name is Xu Pan, and he is the editor of a certain website, and the editor's network name is Milk Bottle, which means feeding the heroes of the world.
The bottle continues to click on the next submission.
Name: "The Goddesses' Personal Warm Men"
Author: Peak Becomes God
The title of this book obviously follows the trend and is close to the trend of modern novels.
Introduction: Chen Tiangou, a young man in a small town, enters the big city, meets various goddesses, and tastes the story of life.
This introduction is too short, there is no description of the specific cool points, and the content is vague, but it vaguely reveals that the boy is a small person, and after entering the big city, he subdues all kinds of goddesses, and the story of ambiguity with all kinds of goddesses.
This novel is okay, urban stallion harem text!
Bottle nodded, clicked on the first chapter, and looked at the text.
"Chen Tiangou clicked on QQ to check the information.
Xiaorui: Brother Gou, can you accompany me to the hospital after work?
Chen Licking Dog remembers that the last time he chatted with Xiaorui was a month ago, when Xiaorui was also sick, he took three days off plus two days off, and took care of her for five days.
He looked at Xiaorui lying on the bed and was weak, with affection, I saw pity, and those watery eyes seemed to be able to speak.
For the first time, Xiaorui took the initiative to hold his hand, which was white and tender, and it was still very slippery.
Xiaorui said to him: Brother Gou, you are the best, if there is no you, I'm afraid I~
Chen Tiangou's heart warmed, and the corners of his mouth rose slightly, "Xiaorui is afraid that it won't work without me!"
He typed a line on his phone: At six o'clock, I'll pick you up downstairs at your house.
Then he added: Are you sick? Don't drink boiling water, I'll buy you porridge. 』
is very intimate, portraying the image of a warm man very well, echoing the theme.
The language is also very concise and clear, the typography looks very comfortable, and the foreshadowing is good in the early stage, so you can continue to read down.
With such gentle care from the male protagonist, it is estimated that he will be able to be subdued immediately and open the harem mode.
What the hell is the second chapter about?
"Chen Tiangou held the pregnancy test stick in his hand, and two red marks were displayed on it.
He only held the hand of the goddess for the first time a month ago, why did he get pregnant?
Can you get pregnant by touching your hands?
"Brother Gou, I know you're a good person, let's get married!"
"A baby can't live without a father. Xiaorui touched her belly, her eyes full of maternal love.
She looked at the man in front of her and hesitated, and explained, "Brother Gou, although the child is not yours, the daughter-in-law is yours!"
Pregnancy test sticks?happy to be a father!!
Hold the grass, this wave of poison!
What, the male protagonist actually agreed?
Just because the child is not his, the goddess is his?
This, this, this is something that a man can't bear, okay?
The baby bottle resisted the impulse of the outbreak and continued to read the third chapter, good guy, the rich second generation came out to claim the child.
The male protagonist was ravaged in various ways, and was forced to break up, the language and writing are just right, and the psychology of the little people who have just arrived in the big city, from despair to unwilling state of mind, is described very delicately and naturally, so that readers can arouse strong resonance, so as to produce a strong sense of substitution.
The plot of the three golden chapters is compact, the plot description is vivid, the character portrayal is perfect, and the stuck points are also very accurate.
The next step should be to get the cheat counterattack!
Generally, the urban stallion harem stream is such a routine.
Signed, there are signs of fire.
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Gangdong University, 520 dormitory.
Chen Shi, as usual, opened the writer's background and checked the data, the first three chapters had a lot of clicks, the fourth chapter was basically cut in half, and the fifth chapter was even more bleak, very good, very perfect.
Since signing the contract, Chen Shi has continued to code words according to the original outline, guaranteed to save 10,000 words every day, and strived to finish writing before the 23rd, all of which were placed in the manuscript storage box.
Chen Shi crackled on the keyboard and struggled to code words.
The monkey passing by him couldn't help but remind when he saw the code words of Brother Shen's waste sleep and forgot to eat, writing a garbage novel called "The Goddesses' Personal Warm Men".
"Brother God, as a younger brother, I want to remind you that this novel you wrote has no future, and if you continue to write it, it will only be a waste of time, so it is better to play ball with my brother and soak in the Internet. ”
Chen Shi ignored the monkey's words, and after he published it, he recommended the monkey and other roommates to read it, and they were poisoned to death one by one.
even said: I will never believe in love again.
In fact, in the latter content, Chen Shi showed the words spare tire and licking the dog to the fullest in the male protagonist, once it was resonated and had a sense of substitution.
What is love?
And what is a goddess?
That is the most poisonous existence in the world.
The monkey saw that Chen Shi didn't react, and spoke again to persuade him.
"Brother God, instead of continuing to write this book, it is better to write your previous book "The Best Bodyguard"! Although the writing and plot are not as good as this one, at least there is a little readability, this book is completely read once, and it will never be read a second time. ”
"If you are skinned in the future, I will not collect your body!"
Writing such a novel, the monkey is really afraid of what the crazy reader can do.
Chen Shi saw the monkey's expression and was ecstatic in his heart.
That's right, what you want is such an expression, the monkey, as a web worm, can't stand such a novel.
Then not to mention the reaction of the average reader.
Moreover, Chen Shi still has a big move behind him that hasn't been released!
It's still just 4,000 words a day, and although the hits are bleak every day, there are still some clicks.
By the few chapters on the eve of the shelves, Chen Shi's big move is the time to shine, and he will definitely be able to persuade everyone to retreat.
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Weekends, happy hour bachelorette apartment, balcony.
Bottle was lying on his back on a recliner on the balcony, with a white teddy at his feet.
The teddy licked his feet all the time, crispy and numb, with the warm winter sun, it was very pleasant.
"Didi", the mobile phone next to him rang.
When I picked up the bottle and checked it, it was a message from Xiao Zhang from the operation department.
A few books that need to be put on the shelves on Monday, Xiao Zhang sent them to him through QQ, and asked him to notify the time node for going to the shelves, so that several authors can card the plot.
Among them, he saw a very familiar book.
"The Goddesses' Personal Warm Men", Author: Peak Becomes a God.
This book, since he was judged to be able to sign a contract, he hasn't paid much attention to it, after all, there will only be three chapters when he signed the contract, and it's not enough to read.
Now it's going to be on the shelves, time flies so fast, it's most comfortable to fatten up and then slaughter.
Thinking back to the first three chapters, he was looking forward to the next ones.
Even though it's his time off, he's going to keep watching.
He thought, what kind of gold finger will the author arrange for the male protagonist?
The invisible rich? Or the rich second generation who is outcast? I'm really looking forward to fighting back!