Yi Chao's mother praised Zhang Han on the phone, saying that she was both capable and beautiful.

"Mom, I'm driving here. You didn't go back beforehand, I'll see you another day. ”

Zhang Han was embarrassed and pretended not to care, holding his mobile phone to block his face, pretending to chat.

"Mom, that's it, I'll talk about it later. Yi Chao didn't listen to his mother's continued rambling, and hung up the phone directly.

Yi Chao looked in the rearview mirror and observed Zhang Han's reaction.

"What are you looking at?" Zhang Han was a little impatient, "Drive your car well." ”

Yi Chao smiled: "Yo! You are not deaf! ”

Zhang Han bit his lip and simply sat in the middle, his waist straight, and patted the back of Yichao's seat.

"Do I need to dress? Auntie was just praising me, and it was just housework. No matter how much my aunt praises me, it has nothing to do with you. Don't even think about what Auntie means! Also, you go and explain it to Auntie yourself!"

"You're a hedgehog, you're still blowing up!" Yi Chao said with a smile, "You want to have a half-dime relationship with me, I'm not happy about it! You're not afraid of being delayed by gossip?" You'd better move out!"

"Hey, the ghost is willing to have a half-dime relationship with you. Zhang Han reacted, "Speaking of which, you still want me to move out." I've been delayed, and you're not delayed, so let's be single together. ”

The two were like fighting cocks, scolding each other all the way.

When Zhang Han got out of the car, he suddenly remembered: "By the way, you are also a supermarket employee, and I arranged for you to be on duty tonight." ”

"Who let you make your own decisions!" Yi Chao objected: "You won't want to take a man home at night, will ......you?"

Zhang Han scolded: "Get out! Who let you say that I am a hedgehog and blow up my hair." I just meant to take revenge on you. ”

He grimaced and was about to close the car door, when he suddenly said, "No! The hedgehog is hairless, and the one who fried the hair is a kitten." ”

grinning, casually waved his hand away: "Thank you! Go back, I'm going to work hard for you at night!"

Yi Chao shook his hand gently, imitating Zhang Han's gesture of sending people away: "It's a kitten who is fried, hey......"

When I got home, my mother was verbose and told me a lot before leaving.

At lunchtime, Yi Chao took some of each dish according to what Zhang Han said, mixed it together and fried a hodgepodge.

I sent Zhang Han over at twelve o'clock, and I went directly to the studio for a lunch break.

It was nearly half past two, and everyone arrived one after another. Li Zhikai didn't come over because of yesterday's fight and a bruise on his face.

After everyone rested for a few minutes, Jiang Lei turned on the computer and said: "Today, I will explain the three golden chapters for you, the outline and the design of the outline, and when the article opens next month, I will talk about it by the way." ”

While he was looking for documents, Yi Chao said: "The design of the outline is the emotional drama of the male and female protagonists, the process of the two from meeting and knowing each other to falling in love.

The outline is how to meet, get to know each other, fall in love, and other things that happen in between.

There may be some hot-blooded essays that don't write emotions at all, and the heroine is basically a decoration.

Similar to the system text of the upgrade mode, the protagonist goes from mortal dust cultivation, to the fairy world, and then to the god world. In this kind of online text, the main outline is the growth process of the protagonist. ”

"What are the three golden chapters? In fact, they are the first three chapters at the beginning of the online article, that is, the beginning. Plus gold, which illustrates its importance.

As you know, publishing an online article requires editorial review. To keep editors interested, quickly pass the review, and even quickly meet the criteria for signing, and attract more readers to collect, comment, and vote, the first three chapters need to be different. After Jiang Lei was ready, he began to explain.

Jiang Lei paused: "I'll just talk about it directly." There are rules for online articles, and there are also several rules for the three golden chapters.

First, the opening should not be too much foreshadowing. That is, the description of the scenery and the historical narrative at the beginning should not be too long, three or five hundred words is about the same.

Second, the protagonist appears early. It is best for the protagonist to appear within 3500 words, according to the length of a chapter of 2,000 to 3,000 words, if the protagonist is not visible after 500 words, the reader's interest will be greatly reduced, and some people may simply abandon the book and not read it. ”

Qin Xiangyang sighed: "Wow, according to this meaning, the opening mode of traditional martial arts novels is completely unsuitable for online articles!"

Jiang Lei nodded: "That's right! Like Jin Lao's novel, the beginning is a poetry analysis, and then a large description of the scenery, and then a group of supporting characters perform on the stage, and the protagonist is late. In the online literature industry, it is not valued by editors in the early stage.

Even if the writing is brilliant and the writing is very good, it must be boiled slowly to increase the readership.

Third, the beginning should be chaotic, contradictory, and not bland.

This chaos means that the protagonist should appear in a chaotic event, or in a whirlpool of contradictions. In fact, this can be referred to at the beginning of the TV series. ”

Liu Chunyan started the live broadcast today, and then interjected: "It's simple for you to say so." At the beginning of a modern TV series, it is nothing more than tearing up the junior, breaking up and running away from the marriage scene, the doctor's appearance is always accompanied by an accident, and what else is the scene of the crime, the scene of the trial defense, the scene of the company's negotiation, ......"

Qin Xiangyang added: "There are also martial arts scenes, all kinds of fighting scenes. ”

Yi Chao affirmed: "Your analysis is good. Normally, the first episode of a TV series or the first twenty minutes of the beginning is what we call the Golden Three Chapters.

For example, the costume martial arts drama "No. 1 in the World". At the beginning, several big inner secret agents all appeared on the stage to complete a small task, which involved the contradiction between the two forces. There are fights, there are contradictions, and the way several important characters appear is consistent with the character. ”

Jiang Lei coughed: "Fourth, the protagonist successfully resolved the crisis, thus showing the protagonist's character and at the same time leading to the protagonist's golden finger."

Fifth, it further involves more and greater contradictions and conflicts.

In terms of length, the first chapter is basically about the crisis encountered by the protagonist, the second chapter is about resolving the crisis, and by the way bringing out the setting of the golden finger, the third chapter is about pulling out a larger contradictory relationship, and then improving the world framework. ”

Let's start the discussion.

"I'm going to talk about the time travel, rebirth text. Yi Chao took the lead in analyzing, "First of all, the protagonist has an accident that causes a crossing or rebirth.

There are basically two ways for the protagonist to appear in another world.

First, he appears directly at the scene of the competition or in a chase and fight, and the protagonist fuses his memory while fighting.

Second, lie in bed and wake up from a coma, reminiscing or listening to others tell what happened.

The first thrill, with a punch, is more suitable for the beginning of the Golden Three Chapters. ”