Chapter 103, Goldfinger

When everyone's discussion was intense, Zhang Han rang the doorbell of the studio.

"Go ahead, I'll ask for something. Zhang Han went directly to ask Yi Chao, "Where is the clothing store of that big beauty?" You send me the address." ”

Yi Chao said strangely: "Didn't you add her as a friend?

Zhang Han slapped him on the arm casually and said with a smirk: "I asked, she may be busy and didn't reply to me." So much nonsense, tell me quickly. ”

Jiang Lei hurriedly said: "Pedestrian Street, Ping orders the world's clothes." ”

Zhang Han smiled gratefully and said, "It's still the boss, thank you!"

Seeing Li Ya dressed in the workplace, intellectually elegant and slightly sexy, he couldn't help but propose: "Hey, beauty, how about we go shopping together at night?" I see that your clothes are so tasteful, I want to buy them too." ”

Yi Chao casually pulled out the corner of her shirt tied around her waist, and quipped: "With your thick waist and fat buttocks, no matter how you wear it, it's an ugly word." ”

Zhang Han was startled, and his little hand quickly twitched Yi Chao's arm a few times: "Hooligans, in public...... Thick waist and fat buttocks, I'm afraid you're not blind!" raised his hand and made an eye-gouging motion.

Li Ya refused: "I'm afraid I don't have a chance, I have to take my son when I go home." ”

Zhang Han smiled and said, "The little guy is so cute, bring it out to play together." I'll treat you to dinner, and I'll get back to you later. ”

When he beckoned to leave, he suddenly kicked Yi Chao: "The night shift of the supermarket is from eleven o'clock to seven o'clock in the morning, and you have to come over to hand over the shift before half past ten, you know?"

Zhang Han glared at Yi Chao fiercely, and waved goodbye to everyone again.

The elevator door closed, and Jiang Lei quipped: "She really takes good care of you!" ”

Yi Chao was surprised: "Cute, she is cute in your eyes, she is a 30+ old aunt......"

Qin Xiangyang smiled and said, "I also think it's cute! Especially when she's angry with you......

Yi Chao looked sideways and was so frightened that the fat man shrank his neck.

Liang Yue'e agreed: "Just because of 30+, I can still have this mentality, it's very good! I also hope that when I am thirty years old, I can still be as happy as her." ”

Li Ya was a little envious: "Her attitude towards life is indeed worth learning from." ”

Jiang Lei was quite touched when he saw her appearance, and deliberately said: "You don't have to go shopping with her more, you are much cuter than her." ”

Poof......

On the side, Liu Chunyan, who was broadcasting live, couldn't hold back her laughter for a while: "I said uncle, your love words are more earthy than earthy!"

Li Ya looked at Jiang Lei and said inexplicably.

Jiang Lei felt a little embarrassed, coughed, and said to Yi Chao: "She is very suitable for the role of the big heroine, and she welcomes the other characters in the whole text with a smile, but for you, the male protagonist, it is a love-hate relationship, and there is no good impression in the whole process." ”

At this time, Teacher Wang suddenly asked, "Students, where did the teacher just go?"

Everyone looked at each other, not knowing how to answer.

After a few seconds of silence, Mr. Wang came back to his senses and reproached: "Oh, if you want to discuss the three golden chapters, discuss it well, how to talk about it." ”

Qin Xiangyang was clever, and hurriedly said: "Yes, yes, yes, creation is important, how can you chat! Let's discuss it according to the genre, which theme will the great god discuss first?"

Jiang Lei and Yi Chao glanced at each other, and Jiang Lei briefly gave a few lists of modern urban romance that he was good at.

Next, Yi Chao is given the genre, given the synopsis of the story, and let everyone try to discuss how to write the first three chapters.

Everyone discussed for more than an hour, Yi Chao took the laptop and concluded: "The three golden chapters are easy to say, and if you want to write well, you have to keep practicing.

Roughly these five points he summarized. I would like to add that in addition to the necessary description of the environment, the first chapter basically portrays the protagonist from a small contradiction, and it is necessary to fully show the most unique side of the protagonist, and strive to make the protagonist different and attract readers.

As for the golden finger, it is generally presented in the first or second chapter. The third chapter is a preliminary description of the world framework, showing the protagonist's environment and relationships, and must be accompanied by an event that pulls hatred. ”

Yi Chao said as he downloaded the materials he had prepared to the computer.

Open the document, and continue: "Okay, now let's analyze the cheat."

You're new to the industry, and you may not have heard of Goldfinger, so you don't know what it means. It's very simple, the protagonist's golden finger is similar to the protagonist's BGM. What the protagonist has and others don't have can be called the protagonist's golden finger.

It's like an idea in business, if you set a good golden finger for the protagonist, the chances of success of the online article are much greater. ”

Yi Chao explained it simply, and directly gave an example: "For example, in traditional martial arts novels, the protagonist's golden finger is basically a lost peerless martial art, unique to the protagonist. ”

Jiang Lei emphasized, "Why is the Golden Three Chapters important? Some people sign contracts with less than 10,000 yuan, and some people can't sign contracts with more than 100,000 or 200,000 yuan.

Not necessarily! The more important thing is that this golden finger is special enough, different enough, and absolutely attractive. What the editor likes is the author's conceptual setting. ”

Yi Chao took over: "Let's look at the works on the list, basically because the setting of Goldfinger is different. Moreover, with the passage of time, Goldfinger is also constantly innovating.

The earliest golden fingers, like fantasy, cultivating immortals and the like, the protagonist either has an artifact hidden in his body, collectively known as a treasure. Either he has the soul of the great god hidden in his mind, or he has directly obtained the inheritance of the great god. ”

Yi Chao coughed: "Let's briefly count the gold finger settings that have appeared in the online article." While borrowing from it, avoid plagiarism. At the same time, open up our own brains and think more about whether there is a different cheat setting. ”

Qin Xiangyang sighed: "I feel that online articles are not as popular as before, and it is also because of the golden finger you mentioned, readers have seen a lot, and it is becoming more and more difficult for readers to feel novel." ”

Yi Chao nodded and said, "So, readers will only become more and more critical." In fact, there are only a few kinds of gold fingers, but others have played new tricks.

As I just said, the gold finger that the protagonist carries with him is basically weapon fragments, gems and the like. What is it now? Horror house, game system, etc., like I have a text about something.

There is also a category where the protagonist predicts the future or has an excellent memory. ”