Lin Su went to the hospital for an examination to confirm that the pregnancy had been two weeks later, and then notified the elders of the two families. Fu Chenhui also told Fu Jie that he would come over to take care of her after Lin Su showed her pregnancy.

During this time, Lin Su's idea of revising the script was almost conceived, and he began to write it officially.

Different from the previous story, Lin Su changed the main plot and background setting this time.

Originally, she wrote two plot lines, one is the love line between Sister Hong and Brother Song, and the other is the family line that Xue Xin can't ask for, she wants to criticize the pedantic thinking of patriarchy from the side.

Pedantic ideas are good, but Lin Su's ability is limited.

She is used to writing TV drama scripts, and if these two lines are placed in dozens of episodes of serial scripts, she will definitely be able to present them perfectly, but unfortunately this time she wants to write a movie script, which is only more than 100 minutes long, and there are two plot lines that cross together, and she can't grasp the rhythm.

Therefore, the whole story presented in the end is cumbersome and bland, and if it is shown on the screen, the audience will definitely complain after watching it that they don't know what this movie wants to tell.

Lin Su remembered what his teacher once said: movies are concise and to the point, and if they are too complicated, they are easy to fail.

This is why the main idea of Huang Dao's statement is not clear enough.

It's not that there can't be multiple plot lines in the movie, but Lin Su's current pen power can't handle complex content well in two hours.

It's easy to find the problem.

After thinking about it repeatedly, Lin Su decided to combine the two lines into one, the heroine's character design combines the two character settings of Sister Hong and Xue Xin, and the story background is also to integrate the stories of the three of them, and then add or subtract.

After the revision, the new script tells the story of the male and female protagonists who love each other and redeem each other.

The male protagonist Yi Song is a retired armed police soldier, who opened a homestay inn near the mountain attractions in his hometown, with a serious personality, and he can't tolerate a trace of sloppiness in his work, and because he has been hiding guilt in his heart, he usually gives people a feeling of depression and happiness, but he is sincere and kind.

The heroine Hong Xue is a volunteer teacher who graduated from a college graduate school, and her family conditions are good, but her parents are patriarchal, and the disaster ten years ago took away her younger brother, and her parents have changed their temperament since then, often beating and scolding her, and the double torture of her body and mind has caused her character to become taciturn since then, and even depressed for a while.

Fortunately, Hong Xue's grandmother felt sorry for her, took people to her side and took care of them, and when she was in better spirits, she supported her to re-enter high school and take the college entrance examination.

Hong Xue took the exam twice before she was admitted to university, and after graduation, because she was withdrawn and afraid of facing people in society, she decided to continue her studies because of her withdrawn personality.

A year before she graduated from graduate school, her grandmother passed away, and the only loved one who loved her was gone, and she realized that her life could only go by herself, and she would have to face the world on her own in the future.

After graduating, I mustered up the courage to teach in the mountainous areas.

She hopes to be happy with those simple and lovely children.

In terms of the background and growth settings of the characters, Lin Su made these changes.

However, the beginning of the background setting of the story is similar to the previous version, starting from the earthquake ten years ago, Yi Song participated in the rescue, because the information he got was inaccurate and he made a mistake in judgment, which finally caused Hong Xue's right hand to be disabled.

As a third-year high school art student, the abolition of her right hand was a fatal blow, coupled with her parents' attitude towards her, which cast a shadow on her heart.

At the same time, Yi Song also retired with guilt.

Since then, the two have embarked on their own new lives.

It has been ten years since they met again, one of them is depressed, the other is silent and withdrawn, but they are each other's antidote and the light in their hearts.

The script is narrated from the perspective of the heroine, the main scene of the story is the B&B inn ten years later, and the heroine's past mental journey is basically presented in flashbacks and interspersed.

In addition to the male and female protagonists, the main characters also have supporting actresses.

Originally, the female supporting role was based on Xue Xin, but Lin Su put her character on the heroine, so the new female supporting role naturally has a new personality and identity, and she is a student who is about to enter the third year of high school, because her parents are doting and her personality is arrogant and rebellious.

It's just in contrast to the heroine's personality.

The female partner and her friends came to travel here, and they lived in Yi Song's inn, because they accidentally learned about Hong Xue's growth experience, and suddenly realized that they were in the blessing and did not know the blessing, and began to reflect on their relationship with their parents.

Lin Su's newly revised script takes patriarchy, the relationship between parents and children and how to get along as the core theme, hoping to resonate and think with the audience at that time.

This is also a question that she is thinking about herself.

In fact, issues such as patriarchy and parental partiality were mentioned by Lin Su as early as in the script of "Chasing the Murderer".

Because she and her sister Lin Shengnan have been cared for and loved by their elders since they were children, they never realized these problems until the appearance of the murder case, which shocked her sister and scared her at the time, and that case not only made the two sisters discuss it for a long time, but also was written into the script by her.

Lin Su remembered that after the episodes of "Chasing the Murderer" were broadcast, many viewers on the Internet analyzed and discussed the case, but because it was an online drama and most of them were watched by young people, the discussion was not deep, and it did not cause a wide range of dissemination.

In the future, the movie will be released, and it will be aimed at all audiences, and I hope that it will arouse everyone's heated discussions and deep thoughts.

I hope that parents with patriarchal ideas can realize their mistakes after watching it, and show more care and love to their neglected children, and I also hope that some arrogant and rebellious children can find out that their behavior is inappropriate through the movie and can be more considerate of their parents.

To be able to get these feedbacks, even if the box office is not good, Lin Su is satisfied.

With this attitude, Lin Su's writing was smooth and easy, and he finally wrote the first draft of the movie completely after 40 days of revision.

The time is close to the middle of January, and Fu Chenhui's class has finished all the important topic experiments this semester, leaving only some theoretical classes, and the new research project will be decided after the start of next year, so the students and tutors are idle.

When Fu Chenhui came back, he saw Lin Su leaning on the sofa watching TV, so he walked over and hugged her and asked, "Have you finished writing the script?"

"Uh-huh, I circled the end at noon today. ”

"It just so happens that my school is also idle now, so I'll help you type out the scripts on the computer. "Fu Chenhui had intermittently typed some of them before, and they all secretly typed during Lin Su's lunch break.

Lin Su hugged him with an arm, "Don't worry, you relax for a while, our project won't start until the next year at the earliest." ”

Huang Jing and Qin Zhengfeng have always kept in touch with her, often chatting about some project plans, according to their plans, as long as the script is typed out before the year.

This first draft of the script was written according to the duration of two hours, and all of them added up to more than 40,000 words, and two hours of typing every night was more than enough time for a week.