After another half a month or so, Huqi University began its winter vacation, and Fu Chenhui was finally able to officially rest, and on the second day of the holiday at home, he typed out Lin Su's movie script in word.

After saving the document, he began to examine the entire story while interpreting it with his heart.

Fu Chenhui was a very good actor in his previous life, he was talented and attentive in acting, he was very familiar with the story of the script, and he also had his own understanding.

Regarding the ending of this movie, he admires Lin Su's writing, "I like this ending very much." ”

"I also think it's a good ending. ”

Lin Su smiled and continued: "Actually, when I was reimagining the outline, I hesitated, thinking about whether the heroine chose to forgive or continue to resent her parents. ”

Fu Chenhui sat in front of the computer desk, scanned the text on the screen again, and asked her curiously: "These two endings correspond to the dramatic and tragic endings respectively, so why did you decide to use the current ending in the end?"

He smiled and teased, "If you don't have a choice, you will be compromised?"

In Lin Su's movie script, the scene of the final ending is set on the picture of the male and female protagonists standing side by side and looking into the distance, implying that life is still going on, and beauty and hope are blocked ahead.

The penultimate scene is set to be that the heroine calls on the day of the Mid-Autumn Festival, and this call is to the family, this is the first time she has taken the initiative to call back after leaving home, and the dialogue is mediocre, just a simple sentence of "Happy Mid-Autumn Festival".

After the heroine finished speaking, she hung up the phone, a tear crossed her face, but the corner of her mouth showed a relieved smile.

At this moment, she was finally relieved.

Instead of forgiving her parents, she let herself go.

The father on the other end of the phone also has only one dialogue in this scene, which is a question in disbelief when he received the phone call at the beginning: "Xiaoxue?"

When he heard the four words that the heroine responded, the corners of his father's eyes flashed with tears, the hand holding the mobile phone trembled slightly, and his dry mouth opened slightly but he couldn't make any sound.

Lin Su slowly shook his head at Fu Chenhui, "I was hesitating at the time, thinking about what I would do if I were Xue Xin, whether to forgive my parents or continue like this?"

Fu Chenhui stared at her tenderly when he heard this.

Lin Su continued: "Later, I suddenly understood that I am not her and I am not qualified to make a choice for her, the only thing I can do is to wish her to get out of the haze in her heart as soon as possible, to discover the scenery around her, make a few friends, and enjoy her life." ”

So, you ended up thinking about this ending. ”

"Yes, this is my blessing to Xue Xin, and it is also my expectation for the heroine in my movie, no matter how many hardships I have experienced, I can hate or even resent others, but I must not torture myself. ”

Fu Chenhui got up and hugged her, and comforted her softly: "This ending is very good. ”

As he spoke, he stroked Lin Su's little face again, "Maybe Xue Xin is fine now, or maybe she can understand your mind when she sees this movie." ”

"Hopefully she's doing well now. Lin Su immediately replied to the former.

When she was in the inn before, she could feel the loneliness and depression on Xue Xin's body, but she couldn't understand the pain in Xue Xin's heart, until she wrote the script this time, she substituted the heroine's vision, which could understand Xue Xin's state of mind, and she felt more distressed for her.

I hope she's doing well now and in the future.

Fu Chenhui nodded, finding that her face showed sadness, and didn't want her to continue to be immersed in this emotion, so he said, "Okay, let's not mention these sad scenes, the baby should be unhappy." ”

Speaking of the baby, Lin Su stroked his lower abdomen, which had not yet bulged, "I don't know if the little guy is unhappy, and he won't protest yet." ”

The doctor said that the fetal movement usually starts around 18 weeks, and she is only 12 weeks now.

Fu Chenhui also looked at her lower abdomen, she didn't show her pregnancy, and she was wearing thick home clothes on this day, so she couldn't see any signs of pregnancy at all.

But he still couldn't help bending down, and then reached out to cover Lin Su's lower abdomen, and said softly: "The baby said that I am not in a hurry, I am thriving, and I will soon be able to see me standing out and beating." ”

Lin Su laughed out loud again when he saw such a cute side.

After playing around for a while, Lin Su sent the first draft of the script to Qin Zhengfeng and Huang Jing by email.

Originally, she said that she was going to Haicheng, but she was prone to motion sickness in the past month, so she didn't plan to make a special trip to deliver the script now, and wait for the crew to be established after the year.

After Qin Zhengfeng received the script, he immediately read it, and obviously felt that it was much better than the previous version, it was simply a new story.

And he also deliberately paid attention to the character of the female supporting role.

Soon sent a WeChat message to find Lin Su, "The second female not only changed her name, but even her character design was directly reversed? ”

"Well, the new hostess is a fusion of the original heroine and the female partner, so the current female partner is equivalent to a new character. ”

Qin Zhengfeng said again: "Originally, I planned to let Yan Jing play the supporting actress, but now it's hanging." ”

Yan Jing has a quiet personality, and she gives him the impression that she is introverted and rarely talking, so he thought she was a bit suitable for the female supporting role in this script, but he was a little skeptical about the current newcomer.

Lin Su understood what he meant, but he didn't approve of it.

"You underestimate her and underestimate the actor, she is from a film academy and is professional in acting, she plays the role in the play instead of herself. ”

At the beginning, she also doubted the compatibility of the actor's personality and temperament with the role because she didn't understand, but Fu Chenhui woke her up.

So now that she sees others making the same cognitive mistakes, she can't help but explain one or two.

In fact, Qin Zhengfeng didn't doubt the plasticity of the actors, but was worried that Yan Jing was a newcomer and had not yet been able to create a role that was too different from herself, but now after listening to Lin Su's words, she was relieved, because they had worked together, she definitely knew Yan Jing's ability better than herself.

Huang Jing also contacted Lin Su after reading the script.

"Lin Su, you really surprised me. ”

Unlike Qin Zhengfeng, who focuses on the characters, he cares more about the story as a whole, from the structure, background, characters and dialogues, and even the ideas to be conveyed in the work, all of which are very important, and he also attaches great importance to them.

So Lin Su's new script is a surprise for him.

He was satisfied with all aspects.

Especially compared with the previous outline version of the script, this script is simply a good script, and this is only the first draft, and it can be polished later.

Huang Jing couldn't help but say again: "In more than forty days, you have created a new script, which is still a good script." ”

"By the way, I like this version of the ending. ”

And the name is not bad, "Redemption of Love", the male and female protagonists redeem each other with love, this is not only the love between men and women, but also contains the love of family and friendship. ”

"The theme of your integrated story is also very good, it is a social phenomenon, and it will definitely resonate with some people and heated discussions among the audience after its release. ”

Huang Jing couldn't stop laughing while making a speech, you must know that a good story theme is the beginning of success.