528 20,000 Words (I)

"There are a lot of people, and most of these people come to the bookstore to buy Science Fiction World. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. biqUgE怂 ļ½‰ļ½Žļ½†ļ½ā€

Thinking in his heart, Ning Yuan also held the latest issue of "Science Fiction World" in his hand, shuttling through the crowd of people in the bookstore.

"It seems that everyone is paying attention to who wins and who loses in Luoyang and Bai Yi, and it is certain that the loser will definitely lose face because of this, because this matter has attracted the attention of countless people across the country. ā€

Ning Yuan's identity is a special commentator on the Dragon Country Phoenix Network.

In the Luoyang Baiyi incident, Phoenix.com has always played a very active role, always releasing first-hand information about this matter, and for this reason, Phoenix.com's recent traffic has also skyrocketed.

This made Phoenix.com taste the sweetness.

So as soon as "Science Fiction World" was released, they sent a special commentator, Ning Yuan, to follow up.

As a special commentator, Ning Yuan owns his own comment column on Phoenix.com, and the name of the column is very poetic, called "Moon Shadow Book Review" - "Moon Shadow Book Review" is still quite famous on Phoenix.com.

Ning Yuan's writing is excellent, and every time he reviews the story, he is also very fair.

Therefore, a large number of people are loyal fans of "Moon Shadow Book Review".

Even when some readers are struggling with what new books to buy, they will give priority to the evaluation of the current hot books in "Moon Shadow Book Review".

The task assigned to Ning Yuan by Phoenix.com is to comment on "Country Teacher" and "God of Flowers", in fact, even if Phoenix.com does not appoint it, Ning Yuan will take the initiative to buy "Science Fiction Magazine" to see these two works-

It's been so much that the news has been in trouble for so many days, who isn't curious about which of the two works is better or worse?

Back home, Ning Yuan's eyes fell on the cover of "Science Fiction World" - the cover composition of "Science Fiction World" is symmetrical, with a red flame background on the left, with the word "Flower God" on it, and a blue mountain background on the right, on which the four characters of rural teacher are engraved.

As the double main work of this issue of "Science Fiction World", the meaning of the two books fighting in the ring has long been about to come out.

Ning Yuan opened the magazine and the first story he saw was Bai Yi's "God of Flowers", which tells the story of the future world, where industrial civilization continues to develop, science and technology progress rapidly, and the composition of society is becoming more and more homogeneous.

Animals are extinct, and even cockroaches, which are said to be the most tenacious, no longer exist.

Animals are extinct, plants and nature have suffered the same thing, and humans have abandoned nature in the glory of science and technology.

But soon human beings found that it would not work against nature, without the existence of animals and plants, even human science and technology had encountered bottlenecks, and just when everyone was desperate, a real flower appeared......

"The writing is old and spicy, the description of the characters is particularly good, and the moral is great, but it is full of bugs, and the story lacks a twist. ā€

After reading it, Ning Yuan calmly commented, as a special commentator of "Moon Film Review", Ning Yuan undoubtedly has a professional vision: "If the highest five-star recommendation is high, this work is worthy of four-star recommendation." ā€

This is a relatively good evaluation, especially today when science fiction is dying away.

"Let's take a look at "The Country Teacher" next, threatening to make the name of Luoyang resounding with the science fiction award, saying such proud and conceited words, I am curious about the quality of your work, if not, I will not show mercy. ā€

Ning Yuan is a disciplined person who does not hesitate to praise good works.

But for those works with poor performance, Ning Yuan is definitely very viper.

After drinking a glass of water, Ning Yuan opened "The Country Teacher" - there are 20,000 words behind the title, and it seems that this "Country Teacher" belongs to the relatively long short science fiction in China.

[He knew that this last lesson was going to be taught in advance.]

Another sharp pain hit his liver, almost knocking him out.

He couldn't get out of bed anymore, so he struggled to move closer to the window next to the bed.

The moonlight reflected on the window paper, shining silver, making the small window look like a door to another world, and everything in that world must be silver, like a boxscape made of silver and snow that does not freeze people......]

After reading the beginning of "Country Teacher", Ning Yuan said a good sentence softly.

After finishing speaking, I continued to read, the key to whether a science fiction novel is good or not is not the writing.

After watching it for a while, Ning Yuan probably knew the main plot in the early stage, a hard-pressed rural teacher was about to die, and the students had already begun to burn paper to pray for him, and the sick teacher was still reminiscing about the past over there.

Ning Yuan's brows were already slightly furrowed, and he said silently in his heart:

"Although the early writing is good, but the theme is too slow, and this plot is full of rural documentary flavor like the title of the book, if Luoyang only has this level, then Bai Yi will win. ā€

Although he thought so, his status as a commentator kept him patient.

Ning Yuan deeply knows that if you want to evaluate a work, you first have to read it to be qualified.

Reading continues, and the story finally begins to enter the sci-fi theme: [In the distance of 50,000 light years from Earth, in the center of the galaxy, an interstellar war that has lasted for 10,000 years is nearing the end. 怑

"5,000 words are starting to get into the sci-fi theme, and the pace is acceptable relative to the total number of words. ā€

The plot has reached this point, and finally the plot that science fiction should have been written, Ning Yuan's slightly frowning brows are loosened.

Flipping through the magazine, Ning Yuan continued to read it, and this time, the next plot actually attracted him firmly.

This "Country Teacher" directly shows the boldness and the strength of the description, a war detonates thousands of supernovae, and all kinds of chaotic space-time structures are incomparably in line with physical knowledge.

"What a solid science fiction war depiction ability......"

Ning Yuan's eyes gradually became hot, and people were also excited.

In the story, humans belong to a type of carbon-based creature, but they are not eligible to participate in the interstellar war of the carbon-based alliance.

Now that the crisis has quietly arrived, the supreme consul of the Carbon-based Alliance, under the command of the Parliament, has begun to conduct civilization tests on the stars in the Isolation Zone.

It is necessary to sacrifice the low-level life around the stars in the barrier, so as not to use the stars to make interstellar jumps when the silicon-based empire resurrects - so what kind of civilization is a low-level civilization?

That's below the 3Cs.

The Earth is in the barrier set up by the Carbon-Based Alliance.

If the civilization test does not pass, then all life on the entire earth will be destroyed together!

Seeing this, Ning Yuan's heart had already begun to beat, since storytelling became a job, he hadn't encountered a work that could make him suspenseful for a long time: "Can the earth pass the evaluation?"

Or to put it another way, in what way will the Earth pass the evaluation?

(To be continued.) )