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At this moment, he lost his identity as an ordinary commentator on Phoenix.com, and like an ordinary reader, he was eager to know the following plot.

For people like Ning Yuan, who love stories, work can be started at any time, but the happiness brought by reading books is rare, so he just wants to feel the charm of "Country Teacher" as a reader and from the perspective of a reader at this time.

In the next plot, the carbon-based aliens conducted a sampling survey of the planets within the range, and soon it was the turn of the earth.

Unexpectedly, it is reasonable that the aliens chose the student of the village teacher Li Baoku in this small village, in fact, by this time, Ning Yuan had already faintly felt the context and intention of the story-

But instead of losing interest, he looked forward to it even more!

The aliens began to ask the group of children questions for testing, and asked several questions in a row.

This group of children was silent, after all, they were only students from the countryside, with limited knowledge, and they had not learned many things, and the teacher Li Baoku had already passed away.

There are alien high-ups who have lost patience.

Ready to destroy the planet directly, weapons are ready.

But the question continues, "3C Civilization Test Question No. 14: Please describe the relationship between the forces of two interacting objects." ”

The children returned in unison: "When an object exerts a force on a second object, this second object also exerts a force on the first object, and the two forces are equal in magnitude and in opposite directions!"

Bless to the soul!

Newton's Three Laws!

Ning Yuan couldn't help but stand up from his seat: "That's it!"

He shook his fist fiercely, as if he was proud of it, happy for the children.

Yes, the answer to the question extracted by this group of aliens is the three laws of Newton, which the rural teacher Li Baoku tried to memorize for the children at all costs at the end of his life.

And below, "The Country Teacher" continues:

["3C Civilization Test Question No. 14 passed, 3C Civilization Test Question No. 15: For an object, please explain the relationship between its mass, external force and acceleration. ”

The children said in unison: "The acceleration of an object is directly proportional to the force it exerts and inversely proportional to its mass!"

The alien intelligence voice sounded: "The 3C civilization test question is passed on the 15th, and the civilization test is passed! It is determined that there is a 3C civilization on the 3rd planet where the target star 500921473." ”】

The story has been completely reversed!

Ning Yuan's eyes sparkled: "A rural teacher taught students the three laws of Newtonian mechanics before he died, and in the end, these students saved the earth by memorizing the three laws, such a wonderful idea is really wonderful!"

If the mood at the beginning was disappointment, then at this moment, Ning Yuan's mood can be described as a surprise.

It wasn't until ten minutes later that Ning Yuan's mood gradually calmed down: "Okay, I'm going to watch this "Country Teacher" again, as a special commentator on Phoenix.com." ”

It's his job.

There is a very different feeling between reading a story through the eyes of a professional and reading a book through the eyes of a reader.

It took another half an hour, and Ning Yuan finally finished watching "The Country Teacher" for the second time, this time he watched it carefully, so many details that he couldn't find the first time were discovered this time.

First of all, it's the ingenious structure!

This "Country Teacher" uses a lot of contrasts and has a clear structure!

The impoverished dying rural teachers are the preachers who save the planet, and the rural students who have no access to educational resources become the heroes who save the planet, and the smallness of the village contrasts with the size of the planet.

On the other hand, the smallness of the earth contrasts with the power of carbon-based life.

The story of a rural teacher is common, and there are few reports about this in China, but when placed in the context of the universe, after adding the content of science fiction, it has the effect of turning decay into magic.

The story jumps beyond the earth to see humanity and looks at itself from a lofty perspective.

This is something that only science fiction can do - Luoyang has formed its own unique memory point in the story, which is eye-catching, just 20,000 words, but it is exquisite to the peak!

Secondly, in this novel, there is also a tribute to the teacher. ”

The Dragon Kingdom pays attention to a respect for teachers, and Luoyang shows it in the novel-

In the universe, other species are directly disseminated information, and only earthlings choose to use the profession of teacher to transmit knowledge, and there is no need for memory inheritance.

As the bearer of the flame of civilization, the teacher acts as a medium of knowledge between two generations of lifeforms, surprising the alien senators and the supreme consuls, a term used in the primeval era of galactic civilization.

In the end, Ning Yuan concluded: "Although it is still a science fiction novel, it has an incredible artistic conception. ”

After serving, Ning Yuan was really completely convinced of this "Country Teacher", at first he thought that Luoyang was a failure to write a teacher, but now looking at the whole text, he found that this is the cleverness of "Country Teacher"!

Rural teachers, aliens, the two lines are written intersecting, and there is an infectious force that runs through time and space.

In the end, the children used the knowledge imparted by the rural teachers to save the earth, which is a manifestation of outstanding humanistic care.

As a special commentator of Phoenix.com, I have been toyed with by Luoyang's creative thinking, and I am really unconvinced.

And this short science fiction story of about 20,000 words can be called a masterpiece in Ning Yuan's opinion - the brilliance of realism and science fiction is intertwined, making this work a perfect combination of reality and romance.

"The five-star masterpiece has no time to run, Bai Yisheng is not at the right time. ”

Ning Yuan was very emotional, because Bai Yi's "God of Flowers" was not so bad.

As a science fiction work that can be rated four stars, "God of Flowers" is still worth watching, the context in the story is very clear, and the structure is relatively well organized, although there are certain bugs in the middle, but it is not a hard flaw.

But if you have to compare Bai Yi's "God of Flowers" with Luoyang's "Country Teacher......

It can only be said that it is a pity, because there is a grade difference between the two, after all, excellent works like "Flower God" are quite common, but "Country Teacher" is really a masterpiece that can be encountered but not sought.

The media still want to hype, Luoyang vs Bai Yi?

From creativity to the idea of victory, from control to the crushing of pen power.

Ning Yuan couldn't help but think of Luoyang's shocking self-introduction in an interview some time ago, perhaps, this young genius ......

In the future, it is really possible to become an indispensable existence in the field of science fiction in the Dragon Kingdom!

(To be continued.) )