Chapter 59: Feedback Perception

Tang Zhi shook his head, saying that he didn't seem to have watched "Yongxue".

This article is very short, about an impromptu conversation between Xie An and his nephews in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, which probably means that once Xie An and his nephews were talking about literature and righteousness, and it suddenly snowed heavily. Xie An was interested, so he asked his nephews: 'What does the white snow look like?' translated into the vernacular is to ask: 'What does this white snow look like?' At this time, his eldest nephew Xie Lang replied in a particularly popular language: "The difference between the salt and the air can be imitated." ’”

Tang Zhi repeated in a low voice: "Can the difference between sprinkling salt and air be simulated ......?"

"That's right, it's almost like sprinkling salt in the air. ”

"It's vulgar enough. ”

"But it's very vivid, isn't it?" Jiang Dongliu continued: "Xie An's niece Xie Daoyun replied and said a famous sentence that is better than snow. ”

"What's the famous phrase?"

"If the catkins are raised by the wind. Jiang Dongliu translated as she spoke: "She compared the snow to the wind blowing willow catkins flying all over the sky." ”

Tang Zhizan said: "Obviously, this is better!"

Yes, the article "Yongxue" is praising Xie Daoyun's poetic talent. Judging from this conversation alone, it is not an exaggeration to say that Xie Daoyun and Xie Lang are Yangchun Baixue and the other are from Xialiba. ”

Jiang Dongliu changed his words: "In ancient times, comparing snow to flying flotsam was obviously more elegant and stylish. But in our era of vernacular, the elegance has long been lost, and everyone prefers straightforward and vivid metaphors. Now if you want to compare two people to snow, Xie Daoyun's 'flying flotsam theory' has fallen into a clichΓ©, because many people in history have compared it like this. On the contrary, it is Xie An's 'salt theory', which is ingenious and humorous, so that it is more popular with the public. ”

Tang Zhi was silent, although she didn't want to agree with Jiang Dongliu's elegant and vulgar theory, but if she thought about it carefully, she couldn't refute anything.

"Xie Daoyun's 'Theory of Flying Flosh' and Xie Lang's 'Theory of Spreading Salt' are like Liu Yong's 'Yulin Bell' and my 'Blind Man'. From a literary point of view, "Yulin Bell" is definitely the more elegant one, but from the perspective of life, my "Blind Man" is the one that is closer to life and can get closer to ordinary people. ”

Jiang Dongliu took classes endlessly, and as a person who had never written a song, he actually told Tang Zhi about the creation scripture seriously: "Regarding the creation of dialect works, blindly pursuing elegance will not work." Elegance does not avoid vulgarity, vulgarity does not hurt elegance, this is the right way. Only by grasping this essence can we write works that blend scenes and make people resonate. ”

Tang Zhi has his own cognitive outlook and values, which cannot be easily fooled.

She stubbornly reasoned with Jiang Dongliu: "But I still think that your song is too vulgar, and the vulgar ones are all scum...... Teacher Jiang, don't blame me for speaking badly, but look at what you wrote: 'Ah, the sky is so big', can we polish it a little?

"Polishing it, and you're falling into the trap of vassal elegance. In today's era of fast food culture, things that are vassal and elegant are the most vulgar and undesirable. Something that is so vulgar has a 'real' texture. ”

"I can't agree with you. Tang Zhi insisted on expressing his opinion: "Artistic creation still needs a little elegance in it, even if it is vassal elegance." Otherwise, the professional judges will not approve of your creation. ”

"Yes, you're right, so I added a Peking Opera lyric to this song. Peking Opera, you can't say it's indecent, this is the most elegant thing in Chinese opera. Use the most elegant embellishment and the most vulgar, and put the finishing touch, so that you can play it in a high-end way. ”

"Your songs are all vulgar like this, can you have the finishing touch with Peking Opera embellishment? Don't end up making four dislikes. ”

Realizing that he couldn't make sense with Tang Zhi, Jiang Dongliu had to retreat: "Alas, I won't raise the bar with you, I'll tell you the principle of rocket lift-off, and you told me that it's better to use newspapers and briquettes to ignite, this is a typical debate between insiders and laymen." Let's talk with our results. For today's song, if the professional judges don't vote for me, my name will be written backwards in the future. ”

Tang Zhi said helplessly: "You are really similar to our boss, you can change your surname at every turn, or write your name backwards." To tell you the truth, I have a primary school classmate named Liu Dongjiang, I hope you don't follow in his footsteps. ”

"I pour. ”

Jiang Dongliu tilted his body.

"I'm kidding, don't take it personally. Your strength is obvious to all, and I, as a layman, am not qualified to comment on your creation. But as an ordinary listener who is closer to the public's preferences, I will give you some feedback on my impressions from my point of view, and I hope you don't care. ”

"I understand, humility makes people progress, and I still understand this truth. Give me more feedback on your opinions in the future, as long as you don't raise the bar with me. ”

"I'm not raising a bar with you, I'm just talking about my feelings. ”

"You're raising the bar with me. ”

β€œ......”

Tang Zhi was speechless, and she didn't dare to speak, so as not to be regarded as a bar lifter by Jiang Dongliu again, she was not a bar spirit.

"Knock knock!"

Suddenly, there was a knock on the door outside the rehearsal room.

Qin Donglei came in with a big fat face in anger.

As soon as he entered the door, he apologized to Jiang Dongliu: "Teacher Jiang!

Jiang Dongliu was stunned, helped his sunglasses and asked, "What's wrong?"

Qin Donglei said bitterly: "I just called my niece, that girl went to Shenhai to participate in the International Comic Con, she is not in Shangluo, she can't come back today!"

Jiang Dongliu relaxed: "Hey, I thought what was the matter, she couldn't come back if she couldn't come back, let's make an appointment when we have a chance in the future." ”

Tang Zhi immediately flipped through the phone address book: "I'd better call my friend." ”

When she found the other person's number, she immediately dialed it.

But the other party may be busy and didn't answer her call.

Qin Donglei swallowed his saliva, moistened his throat, and asked Jiang Dongliu as if making up for his mistakes: "Or, Mr. Jiang, I'll try to help you sing?"

Jiang Dongliu cheered up Qin Donglei: "Okay, as long as your voice is not so hoarse that you can't make a sound, you will definitely be competent." ”

He had heard Qin Donglei roar Qin Yan before, and his confidence and domineering spirit were better than Tan Weiwei in another world.

This fat sister's voice is the most domineering female voice he has ever seen, and there is no one.

It's a pity that she is not in good health, she is too fat, her physical strength is not good, and she has a little asthma, so she can't sing and fight continuously.

Otherwise, with her potential, she is definitely a super nuclear weapon on the stage.

lived up to Jiang Dongliu's trust, and recorded the song this morning, Qin Donglei helped Jiang Dongliu record the finishing touch of Peking Opera singing very easily.

Qian Dachao woke up for a morning of drinking, and only came to the club at noon.

When he came over, he heard that Jiang Dongliu was recording a song in the club, so he specially brought Xu Ji's seafood takeaway to Jiang Dongliu.

It also brought good news to Jiang Dongliu.