Chapter 13 Educating New Talents (Kneeling for Collections, Recommendations)
The next morning, my colleagues came to work with a bunch of dark circles under their eyes, and today is surprisingly that Li Li has not yet arrived.
Lao Kong yawned: "How is everyone's copywriting prepared?"
"I stayed up all night, and finally finished writing the movie review of "Donkey Gets Water", and the other two have not been written yet, which trapped me. How is Lao Kong writing?" Cheng Juan rubbed her eyes.
Lao Kong said confidently: "I stayed up until more than two o'clock in the morning, and I only finished writing a film review of one film, but it was quite level." Last night, it was like a spring of thought, like divine help!"
"You say, will Xiaoli's copywriting level remain the same as before?"
"That's unrealistic! Li Zi confessed to us, that day, the inspiration exploded beyond the level. Copywriters know that they can't write when they are suffocated when they are not inspired, and when inspiration comes, they will pour thousands of miles!"
"I also think it's unrealistic, inspiration is the most ethereal, it can only flash occasionally, and it can't always flash. ”
I don't believe that anyone has that kind of pen and can complete Li Li's copywriting level in an hour. ”
"I don't know how Xiao Lizi's copywriting is, Xia Xue, Xiao Lizi is sitting opposite you, you know his situation best. Sun Yun asked.
Xia Xue said: "It seems that I haven't been writing for long before I watch the movie, and I still watch other films, I guess it's not finished yet!"
"Hey, the main writer is easier than us, and it's almost time to go to work, so let's give Xiao Lizi a lesson!"
Sun Yun proposed: "I propose, when the meeting is held in a while, let's show Xiao Li the copywriting in turn, and give him a disgrace first, so that he can realize the gap between the amateur novice and our major."
Then, under our overwhelming talent and tremendous pressure, let Li Li show his own copywriting in shame. There is an idiom that pales in comparison!
Finally, someone is responsible for finishing the whole story, so that Xiao Li can see the top pen power!"
Lu Kai smiled: "Your braggadocio appearance is really speechless, but this program of training newcomers is okay, but who will finish it?"
Lao Kong Mao then recommended himself: "I'll come, I said before, I was inspired last night, and I wrote exceptionally well!"
"Okay, that's it, let's go print the copy, and teach the newcomer a lesson in a while!"
Xia Xue had a black face all the time on the side, why do all the copywriters love to brag so much?
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Li Li was almost late this morning, he came to the office in a hurry, but when he saw that everyone was looking at him, he said, "Morning teachers!"
Lao Kong said: "Xiaoli, today is a little later than before!"
Li Li nodded: "Well, when I got up early today, I was writing at home, and I didn't finish it in a hurry." ”
Everyone looked at each other and smiled, look, the previous copywriting was a flash of inspiration, right?
Lao Kong said: "That, let's get together to study the copywriting, everyone must fully cooperate with Xiaoli, Mr. Li is the chief writer of our show!"
"Teachers, don't make fun of me, in front of you, I'm nothing, everyone is a senior, experienced and superb, I'm far behind!"
The choreographers didn't go to the conference room, and they gathered together on the table and chairs, each holding the printed copy.
"I'll read mine first, everyone will correct me!" Zhang Qing was a little impatient, "I wrote the film review of "Sewing Machine Band":
As the second film work of director Dapeng, "Sewing Machine Band" has made some progress compared with the first film, but in terms of the production level of domestic films, it is only barely enough to reach the passing line.
The vulgar plot, the forced rock feelings, and the chicken soup for the soul, "The Sewing Machine Band" is too strong and makes people feel uncomfortable and embarrassed!
……”
After reading Zhang Qing's copywriting, he couldn't hide his smugness and asked, "Xiaoli, what do you think?"
Frankly speaking, this film review is a true evaluation, objective and fair, and it is a sincere film review with a conscience when put into any TV platform film review program.
However, there are no bright spots in the copywriting, there is no place for people to applaud, and there are no golden sentences and jokes that can be circulated, which is a failure in communication.
Of course, with Li Li's high standards, more than 95% of film critics in the country are unemployed!
Li Li said politely: "It's really good, and he deserves to be a film critic with many years of experience." ”
Zhang Qing frowned subconsciously and picked, "It's nothing, eating this bowl of rice, it's just a routine operation, I can write this level in every article!"
Li Li was stunned for a moment, and said in his heart: God, that's a disaster!
Everyone looked at each other and smiled, young man, frightened, tell us if we were frightened?!
Xia Xue touched Li Li and said softly, "Can you show me your copywriting first?"
"Wait a minute. After downloading the copy in the cloud disk to his mobile phone, Li Li handed it to Xia Xue.
Xia Xue took it in her hand and looked at it, and after a few seconds, a smile bloomed on her delicate cheeks, and she left quietly to print.
Although everyone wants to give the newcomer a horse, but after all, work is work, usually giggle and laugh, but when it comes to working hours, everyone is very serious, this is professionalism!
Everyone discussed Zhang Qing's copywriting sentence by sentence, and singled out the inappropriate wording or unprofessional standards.
After more than 10 minutes, Zhang Qing's copywriting was finally studied. During this whole process, Li Li did not express any opinion.
Zhang Qing closed the copy, "Okay, I'm slightly modifying and revising!"
At this time, Xia Xue came back with a pile of copywriting, and she couldn't wait to urge: "Who's next?"
"I'll do it!"
After Cheng Juan read the copy of "Donkey Gets Water" written by herself, Xia Xue said: "This one is carried away, and the next one is next!"
Cheng Juan: "Huh?"
Xia Xue grinned: "I mean, everyone reads the copy first, and then focuses on the discussion, this means!"
Sun Yun nodded and said, "That's okay, okay, I'll read mine, the movie review of "The Sewing Machine Band......"
Xia Xue: "Carry this one away, the next one!"
Cai Kun: "I wrote the film review of "Donkey Gets Water"......"
"Carry it away!" Xia Xue couldn't suppress her urgency, "Next!"
Lu Kai: "...... the speechless narration of the film "Pure Heart, Dream Showbiz", ......"
"Carry it away!"
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"Carry it away!"
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The more people pondered, the more wrong it became, how could it be so similar to moving corpses? It looked like we had died in battle!
Xia Xue patted Li Li's shoulder, "Xiaoli, it's your turn!"
Li Li looked at Lao Kong and said, "There are still Mr. Kong who haven't read it, please read it first." ”
Xia Xue said with a smile: "No, no, no, Teacher Kong's family has to wrap up!"
Lao Kong: "......"
Xia Xue was a little excited, "Why don't I read it to you?"
Li Li smiled: "Okay!"
"Ahem!" Xia Xue coughed lightly twice, glanced at everyone, and said in her heart: It's time for you to wake up!
(PS: Kneel and beg for collections, recommended votes!)