Chapter 191 Chapter 191: How to Write Without Digression (2)
Naturally, a powerful big brother like Bian Que couldn't let people know about his medical skills.
After all, a slight gastrointestinal upset or somewhere discomfort no one thinks is the beginning of the disease.
Although, sometimes the words 'drink plenty of hot water' seem to be a bit of a concern. However, that's about it.
Then, Mr. Li said: "However, you must know that with the progress of the times, in fact, many aspects of modern medicine are doing what Bian Que's eldest brother and second brother did, and in fact, this 'unsung hero' is much more important than you imagined." ”
After a pause, Mr. Li continued: "The increase in life expectancy is not only an improvement in living standards and the ability to treat serious diseases, but also includes great progress in disease prevention. ”
It is true that although the improvement of modern people's living standards and the increase in life expectancy have not yet been exposed to in the classroom, they are already common in newspapers.
So, it's the same for the essay, in order not to go off topic, we have to make some precautions. For example, in medicine, we have succeeded in eradicating smallpox, a serious disease with a very high mortality rate, through the development of a vaccine. Teacher Li said.
Hearing this, Wu Zhenzhen raised his hand.
After getting permission from Mr. Li, Wu Zhenzhen stood up and said, "Does this mean that it is difficult to correct the composition after discovering that the writing is off-topic?
Teacher Li said, "Haha, your mind jumps fast, indeed. In the end, this is the effect, but I haven't finished talking about the foreshadowing in the middle. ”
Then, Mr. Li said: "So in order to keep the essay from the topic, we also want to give the essay a 'preventive shot' like vaccination." ”
Hearing this, everyone began to talk about it.
Indeed, this vaccination seems a bit too abstract.
"Okay, everyone, be quiet, this vaccination is actually very simple. Teacher Li cleared his throat and said.
Hearing this, everyone quieted down, after all, if the essay is not off topic, then the results of the Chinese test will be much more stable.
Teacher Li smiled and said, "That is, make an outline before writing, although it seems that this matter is not very important." But it's really the best way to prevent digression. ”
After a pause, Mr. Li continued, "After having an outline, the writing will have a framework and scope, so that it will not be so easy to digress. ”
Speaking of which, Mr. Li wrote the outline on the blackboard.
At this time, the students also suddenly realized that it is indeed difficult to deviate from the topic after preparing the outline.
However, Mr. Li's chatterbox continued.
After writing the outline, Mr. Li continued: "So it is very important to write a good outline, and there is a very important step before that. ”
After a pause, Mr. Li continued: "Because writing an outline is actually just a simple explanation of the content of the essay, and what needs to be done before this is the most important task of writing - reviewing the topic. ”
All of a sudden, the children's minds became clear. The process of reviewing the topic, writing the outline, and writing the text is more specific in everyone's minds.
Indeed, only an accurate review of the topic can produce an accurate outline and a body that is relevant to the topic.
In this way, the course suddenly returns to how to review questions.
Looking at everyone's suddenly realized expressions, Mr. Li smiled brighter and brighter.
After everyone had almost digested it, Mr. Li continued: "Therefore, during the exam, don't try to be convenient, and don't confuse the text without seeking a clear understanding of the question. ”
Because in this way, it seems to save time, but it is very likely to cause a situation of digression. And if you digress, it is likely to mark that all the hard work of the essay has been in vain. Teacher Li continued.
After a pause, Mr. Li continued: "Therefore, after completing the previous basic questions and reading comprehension questions in the exam, it is best to drink saliva and calm down, read the questions carefully three to five times, and then make an outline, and wait until you are confident before starting the essay on the composition page." ”
Naturally, at this time, someone stood up and said, "However, I was actually blank before I wrote the essay. Because I've never made an outline, and I tried to make a simple outline when I was in elementary school, but it didn't work, and I didn't know what to fill in after the outline. ”
Teacher Li thought for a while and said: "So, this involves another aspect, writing seems to be just the ability to use the language in the examination room, but in fact, it is also a test of how much ink is in the stomach. ”
After a pause, Mr. Li continued: "When you don't have enough things in your stomach, even if the examination is in place and the outline is listed, you can't write a full essay, because you don't have anything in your stomach to fill the framework involved in the outline. ”
Then, Mr. Li emphasized: "All these examination questions and outlines are just some writing skills, and writing is ultimately inseparable from 'reading thousands of books and traveling thousands of miles', and only by reading enough books of all kinds can you write fluently." ”
By this time, everyone basically understood this series of questions related to composition.
It is true that there are skills and skills in composition, but it is more about accumulation, and it is really impossible to write decent things without enough nutrients.
Wu Zhen thought about it carefully, indeed, when he writes, he always likes to quote things from the Three Kingdoms period because he has read "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" many times, so he is familiar with many plots in it. So it's easy to write at your fingertips.
At the end of the class, Mr. Li emphasized again: "On the one hand, this writing must be done from the review of the topic to the outline, and on the other hand, I must read more classics when I have the opportunity, and if I see any favorite content, I must add it to the book accumulated in the language." Of course, before the exam, you have to read this book carefully. ”
Naturally, hearing this, Wu Zhenzhen immediately opened the thick book of daily excerpts, although there are not many new words added every day, but there are already more than a dozen pages in the period of time that has been carried out.
Although I haven't felt any obvious effect yet, according to Mr. Li's statement, it seems that this is necessary, and only by persevering can it be possible to really write a good composition.
At this time, the bell rang suddenly, and Mr. Li left after briefly summarizing the content of the class.
Yuan Li turned around and said: "I think this story of Bian Que is a bit far-fetched. ”
Wu Zhenzhen said: "Indeed, if you think about this story carefully, there are loopholes, but since this article expresses the meaning of Mr. Li, why do you want to 'carefully examine its texture'?"
Yuan Li said: "Well, my mother always told me that the requirements are really pragmatic. The latest chapter of "Real Perspective Claw Book House" is free to read for the first time.