Naturally, there was no additional review for the section exam, but Mr. Li took the time to give an extra award for the composition class.

Indeed, composition is always the most important first aspect of language.

After all, according to Han Xin's allusion, we can say that the language test is "success and composition, failure and composition." ”

Composition is indeed something that tests one's language proficiency.

Therefore, Mr. Li also seemed very serious in this class, and the jokes that were usually easy to pop up did not seem to come out like this.

And the main content of this class is to talk about composition, and never go off topic.

Teacher Li smiled and said, "What will you do when you feel that your essay is wrong during the exam?"

It seems that this is a very high probability of happening, so the answers harvested seem to be varied, and even some of the answers are a bit ridiculous.

So, Mr. Li said, "Okay, let's talk about it in three stages, that is, finding a digression at the beginning stage, finding a digression in the middle of writing, and finding a digression in the middle of writing." ”

Then, immediately moved on to the first stage of the discussion.

Indeed, at the outset it seemed that there were many ways to change this dilemma.

After all, there are still many opportunities to correct later, and it seems that some content can be modified in front of it to name the topic.

Therefore, in the first stage, Mr. Li didn't say too much, and in the end, he just asked everyone to take a look at what they had written before after each paragraph, so as not to get out of context.

Although it feels like writing very quickly when you are writing, it is easy to get out of touch if you don't pay attention to the context.

Then, on to the key question.

What to do if you find that you are digressing in the middle of writing.

Because at this time, it is already half of the high-rise building, and the time is not abundant, so it is unrealistic to tear down and start over, so it will be very helpless to find it at this time.

And the next writing will also make people feel a lot of pressure because of the previous problems.

Teacher Li said: "In short, in the middle of writing, I found that I digressed, and the first taboo was panic. ”

After a pause, Mr. Li continued: "Panic will lead to the loss of all the work that follows, and eventually make the whole essay look very unsmooth, and even lose most of the score of the essay due to this panic. ”

So, the students fell silent.

It is true that this does not usually happen, but when it does occur, it does have a very large impact on the people who are taking the exam.

Since what Mr. Li said was indeed to the point, everyone listened attentively.

Then Mr. Li said: "Naturally, the first thing to do in this case is to adjust your mentality, as for how to adjust your mentality, you can ask the teacher of ideology and morality, although I can also give you the answer, but after all, it is not professional." ”

Hearing this, the children suddenly looked forward to the method that Mr. Li said. After all, in the previous exams at the elementary school level, it was true that a digression would mark an avalanche in the essay's score.

Although sometimes the teacher will give some points for friendship because he is familiar with the student's words, the final Chinese score will definitely be worse than usual.

Teacher Li said: "In this case, then review the question again to see how the content can be summarized to fit the topic." If this is found, then the score of the essay will not be very low. ”

However, this passage does not seem to have any nutrition, after all, anyone in this situation will do it, this is the instinct to ensure the grades, so the children seem to be unable to sit still.

At this time, Wang Sheng had already raised his hand.

So Mr. Li called Wang Sheng up.

Wang Sheng said: "Generally speaking, it is really difficult to remedy the digression in the middle of writing essays, for example, when I was admitted to our school, it was because of the composition, so the Chinese only scored 63 points. At that time, I found that some digressions, and then I really tried my best to summarize the topic. But in this way, the whole article appears very empty and contentless. So there is no good score. ”

Teacher Li motioned for Wang Sheng to sit down, and said with a smile: "Haha, after all, composition is the most important part of the language, so it will definitely not get all the marks if you remedy it after doing half of it, after all, you have to add summary words to re-highlight the topic." But in this way, too many summarizing words will make the composition seem hollow, so this is something that cannot be helped. ”

Hearing this, everyone understands that halfway through this writing, it seems that there is no good way to digress from the topic. After all, no amount of relevance to the topic can reverse this situation. The essay exam is not football, and it is impossible to win the game by scoring a few goals in the second half.

So, Zhou Wen stood up at the signal of Teacher Li and said: "Halfway through the writing of those essays, I found that there was no good way to digress the topic, so after writing all of them, wouldn't it be even more helpless to find that the digression?

When Mr. Li heard this, he frowned and said, "Indeed, there is no good way to write halfway, so after writing, it is true that there is basically no way to use the knife on the article itself." ”

Hearing this, everyone felt that Mr. Li seemed to be a bit pitted in this lesson, so the class was no longer quiet.

Then. Teacher Li raised his voice and said, "However, at this time, you can re-examine the question and change the title of the essay to a new topic that conforms to the meaning and content of the essay." Because at this time, it often takes too much effort to move directly into the article, and it will have a great impact on the volume. ”

Although this method is fantastic, the implementation does not seem to be so perfect.

After all, some are semi-propositional essays, some are picture essays, but some essays have the topic set first.

Hearing this, everyone seemed helpless, as soon as Mr. Li explained, he didn't know what to do off topic.

However, at this time, Mr. Li suddenly told the story.

"Everyone knows that once upon a time there was a miracle doctor named Bian Que, who could cure any incurable disease. Teacher Li told me eloquently.

As soon as I heard Mr. Li tell the story, everyone fell silent, and the natural story was still very attractive.

"One day, there was such a person who asked Bian Que, you are so good at medicine, then you are the first in medical skills today. Teacher Li said.

Hearing this, Wu Zhenzhen actually remembered what he was going to say, but he didn't know what Mr. Li wanted to express at this time.

Watching everyone listen quietly, Mr. Li seemed very happy and continued: "Bian Que smiled and said, 'Although it seems that I have a good reputation, my medical skills are indeed inferior to my two elder brothers. ’”

Naturally, everyone understands the following content.

One of Bian Que's elder brothers was good at treating the disease when it first appeared. Therefore, although it can be regarded as healing many people, because the disease does not seem to be serious, it is only famous in Bian Que's hometown, and no one knows about it outside Bian Que's hometown.

Bian Que's eldest brother is even more powerful, and he can prevent the lesion in advance before it occurs, so no one in Bian Que's family knows that the eldest brother's medical skills are excellent. Take a look at the latest chapter of "Real Perspective Claw Book House" to read for free for the first time.