"Next," Mr. Peng said.

And the next one happened to be Zhang Long, looking at Teacher Peng a little dodgy.

"What do you think? Twenty years later, you met Mr. Peng begging for food on the side of the road? And then you threw a stone into it? I really don't understand how your parents educated you, this is not only uneducated, but not even a little love. However, this is still true in general, and it shows that you are not satisfied with me, right?" said Mr. Peng.

"Yes, why do you take my cards and don't let me play them. I didn't interfere with the class again. Zhang Long said with a crying voice.

"This game is not for you to play, and it is very bad for you to take this money to win your classmates every day. Teacher Peng said solemnly.

"He won all of mine, why did he only take my cards. Zhang Long pointed at Xiao Zhen and cried.

"I rarely see Wu Zhen playing cards, how can he win all of yours? It's you, Zhang Long, you were playing every day at that time, and you were bullying other classmates with the fifth graders? Can you face up to your mistakes?" Mr. Peng's tone was more serious.

Zhang Long also panicked when he saw that Mr. Peng was so serious, after all, he was already very weak after writing the composition like that. So he stopped his mouth and began to weep bitterly.

"I know your family situation, I have already visited your home, it is not easy for your father to take you, you must study hard. You're still a kid, and sometimes you can forgive some mistakes, but you can't forgive yourself. You must change your ways. You know, Wang Ye has already sent his dad to an Internet addiction rehabilitation center, and I don't want my students to go that far. Teacher Peng continued to hit the railroad while it was hot. And these things Xiao Zhen doesn't quite understand, after all, Xiao Zhen has not been in contact with the thing called a computer, and the difference between a computer learning machine and a computer is not a star.

"Okay, thank you, Mr. Peng, I will correct it. But I still want to cry first. Zhang Long choked up. At the same time, Mr. Peng handed over a handkerchief. After settling Zhang Long, the bell for the end of class had already rang, so Mr. Peng also paused to continue to tutor the composition alone, and took a sip of oolong tea.

"I just communicated with many students about this essay problem, and the exchange is not over yet, so please come to the office to communicate with me, Wu Zhenzhen, you are the first, and I will call the next one after each classmate's conversation. Okay, let's start revising your composition. ”

After arriving at the office, Mr. Peng patted Wu Zhenzhen on the shoulder and said, "I didn't expect you to be so good at playing card games, but I hope you can put more energy into studying." “

"Okay. Wu Zhen replied quickly.

"The main problem with your article is the lack of a main axis to string everything together into a concrete whole. For example, if you write that you want to be as tall as Yao Ming, that's fine, but then you're going to travel the world and wear different clothes, which makes it feel weird. Of course, it would be fine if you described this event in detail later, but then you immediately jumped to your parents 20 years later, and the idea between them is more difficult to understand. Teacher Peng said.

"Okay, I thought about that at first, and then I thought about mom and dad. Xiao Zhen said.

"Stop, you listen to me first. This may be your problem, you want to write a lot of things, but none of them are fully written and concrete. For example, if you are as tall as Yao Ming, you can write a lot of related things, such as joining a basketball team or entering the NBA, and you can write about some key hypothetical games, such as leading the Chinese team to win the basketball world championship or winning the Olympic championship. Or if you change your outfit every day, you can describe it as if you look like some very beautiful clothes. And traveling around the world can even roam the world as an illusion, and you can imagine the flowers, Stonehenge, pyramids and other beautiful scenery of the world in Casablanca. And each of these directions can write a beautiful 400 word essay. Teacher Peng said patiently.

"Therefore, you must be specific when you write, you are not like Peng Yue who keeps breaking Xiang Yu's grain channel, so you can't stay in every place for too long. You have to be like Xiao He to operate the rear steadily, and make things concrete. Teacher Peng continued.

"Okay, I know, I'll be specific about the content, and I'll write specific essays in the future. Xiao Zhen said half-bowedly. Xiao Zhen was thinking in his heart that this Teacher Peng is really amazing, indeed, Dad said that Liu Bang relied on Xiao He to defeat the proud Xiang Yu.

"Well, you're a good boy, come on, go call Xiaoqian over. Teacher Peng said.

"Okay. Xiao Zhen said.

Teacher Peng thought to himself: This Wu Zhen is still very polite, but I don't know if I really listened to what I said, if I can listen to it all, it will be a good seedling.

Xiao Zhen was a little embarrassed, and Xiao Qian's seat gently called Xiao Qian to the office, and her expression was a little distorted.

When Xiao Qian walked out of the classroom, Xiao Zhen looked at the corridor and was stunned.

After a while, Xiao Zhen returned to normal and continued to devote himself to changing his composition.

After returning home, Xiao Zhen did not forget to refer to a bunch of "Sports Weekly" at the head of Lao Wu's bed.

In the end, the main content of Xiao Zhen's essay became: Xiao Zhen, who joined the NBA Rockets team 20 years later, won the championship ring every year, led the Chinese team to win the championship in every basketball World Championship, and was called the "Golden Bomber" and averaged 40 points, 10 rebounds, 10 assists, 10 three-pointers, 10 blocks, 11 dunks, 11.2 free throws...

Xiao Zhen was busy for a long time and handed over his proud work to Lao Wu, and Lao Wu immediately burst into laughter when he saw the average data per game.

However, Lao Wu did not point it out, because it was not a problem with the composition.

However, after thinking about it for a long time, I still asked Xiao Zhen to change the 'Golden Bomber' to 'Chinese Chamberlain', and told Xiao Zhen that the Golden Bomber referred to the famous German football player Klinsmann, and Chamberlain was one of the greatest basketball players. As for the data problem, Lao Wu chose not to point it out first, and the right to test the math problem.

And Mr. Peng naturally didn't care about the data carefully, so after accepting the composition, I felt that the overall content of the small real was still very reasonable, that is, it was a bit of secondary two, but overall it was not bad.

So, when it was time for class, I asked Xiao Zhen to read the text aloud.

The students listened well at first, but when Xiao Zhen read the average data per game, several basketball players in the back row immediately laughed together. And Zhang Long happened to be drinking water, and accidentally sprayed a mouthful of water on the clothes of the classmate in front of him.

Teacher Peng, Xiao Zhen, and most of the students didn't know what they were laughing at.

So, Zhang Long and a few other students who laughed out loud stood for a class, but they kept standing and laughing.

Mr. Peng called them to the office and asked them carefully, only to find out that the basketball data was written like this.