Chapter 19: The End of "Disappearance".
As soon as the sky was bright, Su Siye set off with seven people.
In the Great Wilderness Ridge in early winter, the cold wind was cold, and it hurt to blow on the face.
Eight people, walking in the snow, revealing one after another footprints of different shades.
When the time was almost noon, Li Mazi looked at the gloomy sky and was a little anxious.
He asked Fourth Master Su: "Fourth Master, how far is it?"
Su Siye turned his head:
"After walking through the meadow below, and over a mountain, we will reach the general stronghold, and then we will be able to see Commissar Yang. ”
When Li Mazi heard this, his face suddenly turned much paler, and he trembled in his voice: "Meadow, there is a swamp, and no one has ever walked out alive ......."
Su Siye pursed his lips and said disappreciatively: "No one, every time I see Political Commissar Yang, I have been from here, and I know that there is a secret passage here." ”
Although the weather was very cold, Li Mazi had some sweat on his forehead, I don't know if it was caused by walking for a long time, or what.
Su Siye continued: "It's okay if you don't want to go here, but when the time comes, when we get to the general base, Political Commissar Yang and they may be transferred again." ”
Li Mazi's brows became a little anxious, and he glanced at the Sanjiang man.
Sanjiang people glared at Li Mazi fiercely.
Li Mazi's body trembled, and he hurriedly said, "Okay, then we'll go to the meadow." ”
Su Siye breathed a sigh of relief.
In the end, Su Siye took seven people into the meadow that no one had walked in a hundred years......
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The Devil Kwantung Army records: In 1937, the Noda No. 2 Assassination Team, led by Sawada Nagashima, disappeared in the area of Dahuangling while carrying out the task of assassinating the political commissar Yang of the Fifth Squad.
The local county chronicle records: In the winter of 1937, Su Jing, a traffic officer of the fifth squad, disappeared in the area of Dahuangling, male, age 32, from Sanjiang, Sichuan, Shu.
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When Su Jing withdrew from the world of novels, he looked surprised.
This "Missing" is a short novel. He had only glanced at it in the Huaxia Daily before, but he hadn't read it.
It's just that the protagonist of that novel is Li Sanye.
And just after passing through the world of novels, Su Jing discovered the subtleties of this novel.
At the beginning, the suspense is pulled out with the crackling gunshots, so that the reader will have a desire to read on.
But that's not enough.
The finishing touch is that the gunfire spreads to the protagonist's feet!
In novels, when it comes to the safety of the protagonist, it is easy to lift the reader's heart, and as long as the description is good, the reader is easily immersed in it.
Obviously, the author of "Missing" is full of descriptive skills!
Immediately afterwards, the plot is linked one by one.
In the previous novel, it was written that Su Siye wanted to recruit people from Baiyun Village, but he was refused.
This is equivalent to a resistance set by the author at the beginning.
And when the gunshots spread, after Su Siye escaped with a few "undercover agents" in his first reaction, the novel ushered in the first small cool point.
The previous failure of recruiting an was an resistance, and a few undercover agents wanted to defect to the anti-devil force, which was a small cool point.
However, since this is a physical book classification, the arrangement of resistance is not particularly strong, so the refreshing feeling of the outbreak here is not particularly large.
Still, it's the most important part of the novel!
Coolness is generally the comfort that the reader will have after the protagonist grows up smoothly.
This places great emphasis on the sense of substitution, and the stronger the sense of substitution, the happier the reader, and vice versa.
And the author of this novel did the opposite.
He arranged the cool feeling as a foreshadowing - a tool for several undercover agents to assassinate Commissar Yang.
When the reader sees the ending, there will be a strong contrast, which will not only not have a bad effect, but will vigorously impact the reader's thinking and make the reader suddenly realize.
After this, the author laid the first foreshadowing about undercover.
The accent of the Sanjiang people.
Actually, there are two foreshadowings here.
The accent is one of them, and the other is that there is no place for Sanjiang in Hebei, and there are only three rivers in Sichuan and Shu.
So it shows that the undercover agent is not only a person who claims to be from Sanjiang, but also Li Mazi, who has an excellent relationship with the big boss.
This point, given by the author at the end of the article, is even more shocking to the habitual thinking formed by the reader before.
After this series of foreshadowing, the author planted a bombshell again.
Dreams spoken by seven people while sleeping.
All the previous foreshadowing is unveiled here, but the author does not point it out directly, but uses suspense to let the reader continue reading.
Finally, the climax of the whole novel comes.
With Li Mazi's question, it was pointed out that Meadowzi is an extremely dangerous place.
And Su Siye's action description is a side but accurate reminder of Su Siye's heart, which is not calm, and faintly points out the main reason why he brought these seven people to the meadow.
Many of the side descriptions in the novel may not have much psychological fluctuation at first glance.
But when the final account appears, the impact of that sense of reality mixed with fiction is beyond the reader's words.
At this time, the reader will suddenly realize and understand the good intentions of the previous author.
In general, no matter how you understand it, this novel is a rare masterpiece!
Su Jing's heart is very uneasy, if one day, he can reach this point, I am afraid he can try to enter the physical book industry.
At this time, the system finally spoke:
"The host is doing well in the world of fiction, please keep up the good work!, please write all the plots of the book. Requirements: The clarity of the plot is more than 80%, and the difference in the number of words cannot exceed 500 words. ”
This time, unlike in the past, the requirements for plot clarity have been increased by 10%.
Su Jing estimated that it was because his level had improved that the system was automatically improved.
As for the word count requirement, Su Jing felt that it was normal.
This is a small novel.,All the length plus punctuation may be less than 3000 words.,If the word limit is still within 20,000 words.,Isn't it.。。
The white paper was already set on the table, and Su Jing habitually drew up a small outline in his mind, and then began to "code words".
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"Host potential:
Beginner Writing (73/100)
Beginner Story Mastery (42/100)
Character Characterization (49/100)
Novel Situation Mastery (21/100)
Writer's Progress0.1%
In general, surpassing 41% of writers on Singularity Chinese. ”
Looking at the floating and somewhat distorted small words in front of him, Su Jing felt very satisfied.
Since getting the system, under the systematic training, Su Jing's progress has become faster and faster.
I still remember that when I first got the system, Su Jing's level was only a low-level author, and now, Su Jing is almost more than half of the authors at the starting point.
But in fact, in Su Jing's view, this is just a small step.
There are hundreds of thousands of writers at the starting point, and the proportion of writers who have the mentality of writing and playing is not a minority.
In fact, a large part of the authors of Su Jing's transcendence are the kind of authors that eunuchs are used to and have no potential.
In the future, Su Jing knew that it would definitely be more and more difficult to surpass other authors.